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Advantage Disadvantage Essay

1. Introduction
Sentence 1: Just introduce the Main topic!
These days, more and more …………… are ………
An increasing concern for many people around the world is (noun phrase)
An increasing concern for many people around the world is that SVX
In modern times, the issue of …… has become highly controversial.
In the modern era, ……………. have become an essential part of everyday life.
The last few decades have seen enormous changes in the way people’s lives are affected by ….
One of the most topical issues in modern society is …

Sentence 2: Specific Line for Cause Solution!

The causes of this phenomenon are varied ….
There are a wide variety of reasons why this occurs …
While there are many factors which lead to this, there are also various ways to overcome this problem.

Sentence 3: Tell what you want to say! (Thesis statement)

This essay will outline the reasons why (X) is occurring, and explore some potential solutions to this issue..
I will outline in this essay why (X) is occurring...
I will outline in this essay why (X) is occurring...
2. Body Paragraph 1
Topic Sentence of the Body Paragraph 1:
From an overall perspective, there are two main reasons why SVX
Fundamentally, there are two main causes of (noun phrase)
Generally speaking, there are two main reasons why SVX
Idea sentences: one for each idea (Cause #1 & #2 from your planning)
The primary cause of … is…
It has been proven that…
It is a well-known fact that…
Secondly; Furthermore; In addition
Another cause of (X) is…
Supporting Sentences: to develop your ideas!
Example
For example,
A good illustration of this is that
Cause
This is because
This is due to …
Effect
The result of this is that, ………………... , which in turn leads to …………………….. . *Important for this essay type*
(e.g. The result of global warming is that sea levels rise, which in turn leads to a loss of land)
Double Comparative (More/more)
The (comparative adjective) (there is/are), the (comparative adjective) it/they will be.
Double Negative
Not Only X but also Y
(Past) whereas (Present)
Unlike in the past, people today + v
Conditional
Etc.
3. Body Paragraph 2
Topic Sentence of the Body Paragraph 2:
However, there are a variety of viable solutions at hand to address this problem.
Idea sentences: one for each idea (Solution #1 & #2 from your planning)
The primary solution of … is…
It has been proven that…
It is a well-known fact that…
Supporting Sentences: to develop your ideas!
Example
For example,
A good illustration of this is that
Cause
This is because
This is due to …
Effect
As a result,
Double Comparative (More/more)
The (comparative adjective) (there is/are), the (comparative adjective) it/they will be.
Double Negative
Not Only X but also Y
(Past) whereas (Present)
Unlike in the past, people today + v
Conditional
Etc.
4. Conclusion

Sentence 1: Use only if you need some more words!

In conclusion, it must be said that (X) has become a complex issue with no easy solutions.
In conclusion, (X) is a topic which is very relevant to modern society.
In conclusion, (X) is an issue which will continue to demand our attention for the foreseeable future.

Sentence 2: Just say what you think! (Opinion) → Optional Sentence?

(up to you – maybe say why this problem is important)
Final Sentence
A conditional works well here:
If the government/authorities chooses/choose to ignore this issue, the future of our planet/people will be in
danger.

Or
Whether or not (X) will (verb) remains to be seen.
It is not unrealistic that…/to hope/expect that…