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Who Made Who 獨塑 Proposal - 20221218
Who Made Who 獨塑 Proposal - 20221218
Basic Information
School Music
Department Vocal
1 Beauvoir, Simone de. 2015. The Second Sex. London, England: Vintage Classics.
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1. Executive Summary
This project was started by a little wish of mine. I always wanted to contribute to the society through Bel canto
singing as a woman. I also wanted to inspire modern woman to overcome their obstacles, which may cause
by external force or their personal growth. So, I start up research about “Female” and “Female Artists.”
I want to explore the possibility of a woman who is committed to her belief and do anything she wants. The
target beneficiaries are all public audiences. The female artists and the female characters inside of the
songs are the metaphor of vulnerable people, and they found their way out in their situation. We can also find
ours by knowing others had their difficulties.
The repertoires I choose was written by Madeleine Dring, a British female composer who is extremely
sensitive to the society issues in 1930-1970, and she composed a song cycle named “Five Betjeman Songs”
after she read the poem by John Betjeman. The poems are talking about 5 different women in 5 different
places in United Kingdom, and they are in different stage of their life. All of them are facing their own
difficulties, a young girl is lack of courage to pursue her dream in the far eastward; a business women facing
the loneliness by her own; a godly girl be accustomed to the words from bible; a female jockey is not
satisfised, even she committed to her training; lastly, an old lady that is drunk telling us she have a beautiful
youth, but everything seems meaningless after she gets old.
The songs include the beautiful bay view in Britain, pub culture, religion and village views in the 20th century,
after I sing the songs, I experienced the inner emotion the captured the self-values and ideas of how women
look at themselves.
I aim to,
• encourage vulnerable people in the society and NGOs to persevere in their beliefs,
• encourage general females in society to take action for themselves, we all have right to pursue what
we want.
• increase people’s awareness of female artists and female’s topic artwork and provide further
information about them if the audience wants to dive into it deeper.
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• combine different art forms (drawing, photography, poetry, dance, fashion design and art film) with
Bel canto singing, to explore poetic variations of music, encourage different artists to collaborate with
each other.
Other activities
We aim to curate an exhibition in HKAPA and different associations, also publish a booklet of Artworks after
the exhibition. To show more about the artworks to the public, let the work influence more people and provide
inspiration.
As for the targeted beneficiaries, I aim to deliver the message in three perspectives:
• vulnerable women in society;
• all public audiences of the video and exhibition;
• artists, art teachers and students.
We hope our message can be delivered both inside and outside of the art field so that more people can feel
connected.
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2. About the project
Society
The potential of a female is unlimited. Females can be coaches, mothers, artists some of us are omnipresent
in the world of music and theatre, we can be producers and performers, entrepreneurs and so many more.
Meanwhile, women’s lower levels of employment and earnings contribute to higher rates of poverty and
greater vulnerability to specific health problems and violence are still happening in the world 2
According to the ‘Hong Kong Federation of Women's Centres”, the number of domestic violence cases
increased during the epidemic, with 34 cases of domestic violence-related requests received from January to
March 2020 alone, more than double the 16 cases received during the same period in the past. Moreover, the
abusers of domestic violence cases during the epidemic were not prosecuted and convicted, and 94% of the
abusers did not participate in counselling programs. According to the service figures in early 2020, 81% of
victims were not offered medical examinations and 75% of victims were not offered counselling.
On 19 October 2022, the government released the first "Policy Address" of the current-term government,
outlining the blueprint for Hong Kong's development in the next five years.
To support women in balancing employment and family and unleash their potential, the "Policy Address"
proposes to increase the allocation to the Women's Affairs Commission from HK$4 million to HK$10 million
and establish a " Women's Empowerment Fund". This promotes women's development and I believe that the
proposal will help the community to promote diversified support services for women's needs.
“The Hong Kong Federation of Women's Centres” is concerned about the mutual division of labour between
the newly established " Women's Empowerment Fund" and the "Women's Development Funding Program"
under the current Women's Affairs Commission, as well as the types of funding projects. At present, the
"Women's Empowerment Fund" can be used to fund three themes, namely: "Release Women's Labour
Force", "Women's Health", and "Elevate Women's Capabilities". It should further expand support projects
categories, such as receiving research and investigating research projects related to women's living
conditions, so that the pressure and difficulties faced by women can be better understood.
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https://www.womencentre.org.hk/En/Advocacy/domestic_violence/
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Why I Choose this Song Cycle
“Music, the universal language, can express a pure and most potent form of truth, for it disarms the
worldly personality by speaking directly to the soul.”3
By Madeleine Dring,
The reason that I choose this song cycle is because the spirit of Madeleine Dring, she as an artist encourage
me to pursue my goal, she faced many hard time like discouragement from her teacher and the World War II,
but she chosen the bright side to look at, her mentality of pursue in art should let more people know, I want to
pass the message to the next generation.
Dring also studied piano, vocal music and drama performance. The vocal music teacher once thought her
body was too slender, and the piano teacher thought her fingers were too long to be controlled. Dring was not
frustrated by them, she actively expanded her vocal range, challenge herself to be more flexible, and she
worked hard to improve piano skills. In addition to writing concert pieces for piano, voice and chamber music,
she also composes scores for plays.
Dring liked singing, acting and speaking since she was a child. She was imaginative and she analyse herself
through dreams and record her thoughts on poems or drama scenes. At the age of ten she won a scholarship
to the RCM Junior Department where she spent weekends studying violin, piano, drama and composition.
During this period, she participated in performances curated by Angela Bull, the theatre director of the Junior
Department, and wrote play scores for children and youth ensembles. These performances were mostly
based on fairy tales, such as The Little Mermaid. Bull also had a great influence on Dring’s compositional
style, and she once wrote to Dring:
“I doubt if we’ve got anyone who can do one difficult rhythm you’ve written for side drum. Keep in
mind the material we have got, not professional standards. I do these plays and the music to be of
help and enjoyment to the children, not to try and attain the impossible. So, everything must be
fitted to idioms familiar to them and techniques possible to them. They can achieve perfection
within their limits but not even mediocrity when they are aiming at idioms beyond their capacity and
experience.”5
Composing Style
The idea of letting performers achieve perfection within their limits influenced Dring’s composing style, which
tended to be more approachable, and remained so until her maturity. Dring was then awarded a full
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Ro Hancock-Child, Madeleine Dring: Her Life, Her Music (England: Micropress Music, 2009),
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It is the name of dance music in the Caribbean, mainly referring to the traditional dance music that has been
carried down in Cuba, Haiti and Trinidad in the West Indies. Among them, the Cuban folk song Guaracha is
the most representative, and the rhythm is mostly used alternately in 6/8 time and 3/4 time.
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Ro Hancock-Child, Madeleine Dring: Her Life, Her Music (England: Micropress Music, 2009), 13.
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scholarship to continue her studies at the RCM, majoring in Composition. Her composition teachers included
Herbert Howells, Ralph Vaughan Williams and Gordon Jacob.
In terms of creative techniques, the piano accompaniment used parallel fourths or fifths, key changes in major
and minor keys, and blocky harmony passages. Vocal lines are mostly performed in simple 8th and 16th
notes. Although the creative inspiration comes from ancient dance music, it also incorporates a lot of modern
harmony based on triads. It sounds intriguing and full of contradictions, with a sense of blending old and
new.
Up and Downs
In 1939, the Second World War broke out. During the war, RCM principal Sir George Dyson (1883-1964)
operated the school in a miserable state. Dring’s classmate Pamela Larkin once in the letter wrote:
‘There is no doubt that we must carry on our business, despite the bombs falling while we sleep in the
cellar!’6
Dring was inspired by her companion too. In 1941, Dring got a lot of opportunities on composing soundtracks
for radio broadcasts after she won praise in The Musical Times for his stage score to “The Emperor and the
Nightingale” (1941). She was in the age of 18.
After her marriage, Dring continued to compose stage music and she participated in chamber music and
theatre performances, but social event made her tired. She once wrote to an American composer friend name
Eugene Hammer:
“I do find it utterly exhausting trying to juggle with a cigarette, a handbag, a glass of wine, a plate, a
knife and fork (that’s six hands needed so far!) a stole and still retain the odd hand to be shaken.”7
In 1970s, Dring began to explore herself and took courses in psychology and spirituality. Her works in later
years are full of self-examination77)8 all present this appearance. In 1977, Dring died of a cerebral
haemorrhage at the age of 53.
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Wanda Brister,“The Songs of Madeleine Dring,”Journal Of Singing: The Official Journal Of The National
Association Of Teachers Of Singing 64, no. 5 (May-June 2008): 566.
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Ro Hancock-Child, Madeleine Dring: Her Life, Her Music (England: Micropress Music, 2009), 21.
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"Four Songs of the Night" was the last song cycle composed by Dring before her death, but she passed
away before it was completed, and this group of works was finally completed by her husband.
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Why I collaborate with these 5 Artists?
Key Deliverables
Total Length of the video: 18-20 minutes
This is a video that consists of 6 parts, I will sing all the songs and compose a finale for the video.
1 “Awakening”
The first part of the video will present the dancer Fai, who breaks out of the clove that covered her body. She
decides to uncover herself and believes there is a better sight from far away, although there seems to be
nothing. The music is about a girl who lies down on a beach, and everything is so beautiful, full of hope and
imagination, and a world full of possibilities. The dancer uses her body to do the process of awakening, the
moment we see the world with beliefs is a process of awakening. All the beautiful things have surrounded us
since the day of creation. We protect ourselves by closing one of our eyes and choose to see the world with
critics. We became too tired and too lonely; but we can be safe and loved if we hold on to our faith.
6 “Bridge”
Lastly, I will compose a song at the end of the video and in-between every song. Because I had experienced
every mental change of those woman felt, the loneliness, upset, nervous, feeling hopeful and uncertain about
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the future, searching and molding who I am, everything is so familiar to me. I have awakened in the 4 years of
study in HKAPA, and I hope to let more people be awakened, and to let them know they are not alone, and
they are not helpless, because we should be the one to save ourselves.
Conclusion
The story of Dring, these Artists and the character from the songs inspire women nowadays. We are strong,
staunch, faithful and caring, all of us shine and try to overcome obstacles in our own way. We believe that if
someone in your life told you that you are uncapable of something, you should try it in your way and make
sure the success is not determined by others. After trying it ourselves whether we succeed or not, at least we
will not regret it.
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Songs Details
Year: 1976
Minutes: 12-15 mins
Instrumentation: Piano 1, vocal 1
在脆弱的隔板後面
And behind their frail partitions
上班女郎躺下浸泡,
Business women lie and soak,
通風的天窗看穿空曠的天際
Seeing through the draughty skylight
Flying clouds and railway smoke. 漂浮的雲朵和鐵路的煙霧。
伯利斯從前常常叫我撘他的豪華房車,
When Boris used to call in his Sedanca,
泰迪帶我去他的豪宅莊園,
When Teddy took me down to his estate,
當我的鼻子牽起激情,
When my nose excited passions,
我的服飾還很時髦,
And my clothes were in the fashion,
就算我遲到了,我的愛人們總也不會生
When my beaux were never cross if I was late,
氣,
I will invite associations (such as Golden Z Club, Hong Kong Federation of Women's Centres etc.) to
play the video at their centre. This continues the affection at any time and in anywhere. Also, we can
post our performance video and behind the scenes video to social media like YouTube and Facebook
and we can encourage the above-mentioned association to share our posts.
NGOs, associations:
• Golden Z Club
• 香港婦女中心協會 Hong Kong Federation of Women's Centres (HKFWC)
• 香港各界婦女聯合協進會 The Hong Kong Federation of Women (HKFW)
• 婦女基金會 The Women's Foundation (TWF)
• 慈善組織心蓮心 Women Helping Women Hong Kong (WHWHK)
• 香港乳癌基金會 Hong Kong Breast Cancer Foundation (HKBCF)
• 香港遺傳性乳癌家族資料庫 Hong Kong Hereditary Breast Cancer Family Registry
• 母親的抉擇 Mother’s Choice
• 保良局
• 聯合國兒童基金香港委員會
• Light be (單身女人) 無力自力更生
• 1a
Subtotal 23000
2 交通費用 運輸展品及 5000 1 5000
Transportati 裝展用品
on
車馬費用 2000 1 2000
Subtotal 7000
3 場地佈置 展覽燈 1000 1 1000
Decoration 枱布 300 1 300
畫框 300 10 3000
印刷品、展板 1000 1 1000
Subtotal 5300
4 報酬 畫家 600/hr 12 7200
Remunerati 陶瓷藝術家 600/hr 12 7200
on
攝影藝術家 600/hr 12 7200
聯合作曲家 600/hr 10 6000
Subtotal 27600
5 場地 Venue 場地租用 600/hr 15 9000
9000
海報 8 100 800
宣傳 A4 File 2 600 1200
6
Advertising
宣傳咭 300 1 300
Subtotal 2300
Total 74200
6. Work Schedule
Schedule:
Recording & Artwork creation period: Jan - Feb 2023
Filming & documenting: Jan - Mar 2023
Photo taking: Mar 2023
Launching: 10th April 2023
Lecture- presentation & first exhibition in HKAPA: 1st April - 20th April 2023
Exhibition: April - June 2023
Detailed:
Project Phase Description Week Period
Video-Making of:
• Sound: Recording of the songs (6 hours)
Video shooting 1:
• Dance (Ensemble dance) 2 sessions (6
hours) Beach
Prototype Documentary shooting 2: (outside of APA) 10-11 6 Mar 2023 19 Mar 2023
• Pottery 1 day 3 sessions (9 hours)
Candy’s studio
• Photography 1 day 2 sessions (6 hours)
Night street
Video shooting 2:
• Dance (song 1 solo) 2 sessions (6 hours)
HKAPA dance studio
Evaluating Feedback by questionnaire and project report 22 28 May 2023 3 June 2023
writing
1 Awaking no. 1. A bay in Anglesey 03:40 The sleepy sound of a tea-time tide
Slaps at the rocks the sun has dried,
Too lazy, almost, to sink and lift
Round low peninsulas pink with thrift.
1.1 The female dancer (Fai) is laying down at the ground, the colve cover her body; she wake up and open her eyes, the colve is meant to be a protaction of
her, meanwhile she is tighten up by it too.
1.2 After she look through the clove, what she felt or imagined are the world full of unknowns, and she decided to be brave
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https://youtu.be/LnUesmL-1CQ (Start from 1:26)
1.3 End with the dancer running with the white clove, she finally controls the clove, and it will cover the camera, left with a white scene.
2.1 when the clove open, we will see the pottery wheel
2.2 and we see the process of Candy making the pottery
2.3 and Candy take off her apron and hang it on the rack next to the door at her studio
獨立堅強 [戴珍珠耳環的女人]
一直在追求珍珠,但其實你的眼睛內的光彩比珍珠更加耀眼10
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https://youtube.com/shorts/txAVg2ble74?feature=share
2.4 we see the final product of her pottery; woman have different size and shape, unique just like the vessels; We should open and embrace ourselves. We
shape ourselves.
2.5 Lines start to appear as the pottery fades away, left with the lines
3 no. 4. Undenominational 01:40 Undenominational
Through the window But still the church of God
He stood in his conventicle
And ruled it with a rod.
Undenominational
The walls around him rose,
The lamps within their brackets shook
To hear the hymns he chose.
3.3 some wordings will appear, in-between the process of drawing, fade in and fade out
4 no. 5. Upper Lambourne 02:45 Up the ash tree climbs the ivy,
The Shining point, Jockey Girl Up the ivy climbs the sun,
With a twenty-thousand pattering,
Has a valley breeze begun,
Feathery ash, neglected elder,
Shift the shade and make it run -
4.3 at one moment the glorious dress uncover, inside is a chin, independent and strong leathery style costume
4.4 在發光前,都是在準備,只是時間未到,裝備足夠,會可以得到光茫 11 Idol: Frida Kahlo12
5.2 She captures the beautiful thing in the street, the beauty of body
5.3 She sees a club, and starts listening to the woman inside of the club is singing
5.4 She takes the picture of the singer’s body and goes out of the club
5.5 she lights up a cigarette but doesn’t smoke from it.
Everyone will grow old, but most of us are not comfortable with it. Anytime and anywhere will have people older and younger than you, what we can do is to
enjoy every moment we have, without scared and worried.
The year fade away, but our strong mind and belief will stay with us, so the photo is the way of capture the beautiful moment.
9. Artists
Film director:
• Wong Choi Fei 黃在飛
Sound engineer:
• Wong Tsz Kin 王梓健 Peter
*Please refer to the links below:
https://novenpeter.wixsite.com/peterwong-portfolio
https://wavincity.com/
Pianist
• Lam Yuk Lam 林郁林
Co-Composer
• Cheng Sik Nam Leo 鄭錫楠
Songs with the Female Artists
No. 1. A bay in Anglesey
• Woman Artists: dancer(輝)
同時也有參與不同的校外製作,當中包括:葉氏兒童音樂劇團兒童歌劇《愛麗絲夢遊仙境》化妝師、香
港舞蹈團《紫玉成煙》服裝設計師助理、香港藝術節《Rizoma 同生共根》dresser、劇場方程式《屋根
裡》化妝及髮飾設計兼服裝助理等。
No. 2. Song of a nightclub proprietress
• Woman Artists: photographer (Linda)
WHP.LINDA PHOTOGRAPHY:
https://pizzawong1116.wixsite.com/whplinda?fbclid=PAAaaNe-0m7_hSHQsGVbZIqLtWZaLMSQx-
F_9TXIu0s5eEKedtPkb1pIl36vs
10. Reference for Photo shooting
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Morse, Gregory Brett. 2005. “The Victorian Influence on the Work of John Betjeman.”
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Poem:
Emma Baldwin, "Upper Lambourne by John Betjeman", Poem Analysis, 20 May 2021,
https://poemanalysis.com/john-betjeman/upper-lambourne/.
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