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CEWriting AssgUnit6 Vincentius 1941012
CEWriting AssgUnit6 Vincentius 1941012
Name:
Vincentius Kevin
Michelle Angela
Adrellia Stefany Class:A NRP:1941012, 1941021 ,1941035 Score: 60
INSTRUCTIONS:
1. Type your name(s), class, and NRP(s) on the space provided above.
2. Type your answers on the space provided below the questions. You can simply delete the
lines and overwrite them with your answers.
3. After you finish answering the questions, save and upload your file back to Google
Classroom under the following file name: CEWriting_AssgUnit6_FirstName_NRP (i.e.
CEWriting_AssgUnit6_Joanna_410112). Use the name of one person in your group. This
person will be the representative of your group and will also be responsible for uploading
the file to Google Classroom.
4. Do not forget to click “turn in” when uploading the file back, otherwise your file will be
considered missing and will not be assessed.
5. The deadline of this assignment is Monday, 27 September 2020 @ 12.00.
It is widely agreed that men and women think and act in different ways. Women appear to have
better memories, better social skills and are more competent at multitasking. Men, in contrast, seem
to focus better on issues and have superior motor and spatial skills, although clearly many people
are exceptions to these patterns.
These differences have been explained as behaviour adopted thousands of years ago, when the men
went hunting while the women stayed at home and cared for their children. But another approach is
to see the behaviour as a result of the way our brains function.
Recent research by Ragini Verma’s team at the University of Pennsylvania has used brain scans to
compare 428 men and 521 women. They tracked the pathways of water molecules around the brain
area, and found fascinating differences.
The top half of the brain is called the cerebrum, and it is divided into a left and a right half. The left
hemisphere is thought to be the home of logic and the right is the centre of intuition. Dr Verma
found that with women most of the pathways went between the two halves, while with men they
stayed inside the hemispheres. She believes that these results explain the gender differences in
ability, such as women’s social competence compared to men’s more intense focus.
Find synonyms for the words underlined. Rewrite the paragraph using these. (11 pts) 3
It is widely agreed that men and women think and act in different ways. Women appear to have
better memories, better social skills and are more competent at multi-tasking. Men, in contrast,
seem to focus better on issues and have superior motor and spatial skills, although clearly many
people are exceptions to these patterns.
It is broadly approved that male and female think and behave in different ways. Women emerge to
have finer memories, better social abilities and are more adequate at multi-tasking. Men, in opposed
to, seem to focus better on issues and have superior motor and spatial abilities, although obviously
many people are excluded to these patterns.
Change the word class of the underlined words. Rewrite the paragraph using the changes. (5 pts) 4
These differences have been explained as behaviour adopted thousands of years ago, when the men
went hunting while the women stayed at home and cared for their children. But another approach is
to see the behaviour as a result of the way our brains function.
These differences of the explanation were behavioral adopted thousands of years ago, when the
men as a hunters while the women stayed at home and ( caring) their children. But another approach
is to see the behaviour resulting from the way our brains function.
Change the word order of these sentences, rewriting the paragraph so that the meaning stays the
same. (5 pts) 1.5
Recent research into brain functioning by Ragini Verma’s team at the University of Pennsylvania has
used brain scans to compare 428 men and 521 women. They tracked the pathways of water
molecules around the brain area, and found fascinating differences.
Recently, Ragini Verma’s team’s studies at the University of Pennsylvania about brain functioning
has done some comparison between 428 male and 521 female using brain scans. They discovered
interesting distinctions when they followed the pathways of water molecules near by the brain.
Combine all three techniques to paraphrase the final paragraph. (9 pts) 2.5
The top half of the brain is called the cerebrum, and it is divided into a left and a right half. The left
hemisphere is thought to be the home of logic and the right is the centre of intuition. Dr Verma
found that with women most of the pathways went between the two halves, while with men they
stayed inside the hemispheres. She believes that these results explain the gender differences in
abilities, such as women’s social competence compared to men’s more intense focus on a limited
area.
The cerebrum is the term for the upper half of the brain, and is splitted into a left and a right part.
The hemisphere on the left is expected to be the logic area, while the intuition is centered on the
right . Dr Verma discovered that female pathways mostly came from amongst the two halves,
meanwhile for the male they remained on the hemispheres. These results were believed by her that
it could affect gender in their skills , like female’s social capability in contrast to male’s more focus
intensely on limitation.
Rewrite the sentences below so that (1) the word order is different (where possible), and (2) at
least one element changes from, for example, verb to noun, or noun to verb, or active to passive,
or adjective to adverb. (15 pts) 7
The examples below show two different ways to change the sentence. However, you only need to
find one way.