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Guidelines in Writing Thesis Revised 2022sept
Guidelines in Writing Thesis Revised 2022sept
GUIDELINES IN WRITING
THESIS
AND
RESEARCH PAPERS
Revised 2022
Acknowledgements
The following are the original authors who made this Guidelines in Writing Thesis and Research
Papers which was first released in December 2013:
The Guidelines in Writing Thesis and Research Revised 2022 was reviewed and edited by:
The following have contributed to the Qualitative Research section of the Guidelines in Writing
Thesis and Research Revised 2022:
Table of Contents
Thesis and Equivalent Research Work
Definition 1
Characteristics of a Good Thesis 1
Research Topic 1
Thesis Defense
General Guidelines 13
Presentation of the Final Paper 13
Chapter II 20
Philosophical assumptions
Qualitative research strategy
Role of the researcher
Data Collection procedures
Data Analysis and interpretation
Strategies for validating findings 21
Anticipated Ethical Issues 21
References 21
List of Annexes
Annex “A” – List of Forms/Documents for Students Enrolled 22
in Thesis and Residency
Annex “B” – APA Style and Formatting Guidelines 51
Annex “C” – The Thesis Proposal 55
Annex “D” – Thesis Checklist 60
Annex “E” – Sample Title Page 63
Annex “F” – Sample Abstract 64
Annex “G” – Approval Sheet 65
Annex “H” – Labelling Instructions for Hardbound Copies 66
and CD
Annex “I” – Certification of Style Editor 67
The thesis or the equivalent research work entails an in-depth study and an extensive investigation of
a problem. It must show originality and should contribute to the existing field of knowledge,
preferably in conformity with the institutional goals, thrusts and objectives, and should manifest the
student’s competence in research.
1. Accurate and thorough. The research paper must have its facts and ideas presented
accurately, at the same time the subject must be covered thoroughly and completely.
3. Balanced. A research paper must be able to give a fair treatment of the facts, ideas, and
viewpoints being discussed. It shall be able to note the strengths and weaknesses of each idea.
An excellent paper may be critical of previous work, but avoids unsubstantiated criticism and
baseless attacks on other authors.
4. Creative. A good research paper goes beyond presenting facts, but does not mean that any of
the information is “made up” or non-factual. An excellent paper will have facts that are
organized, analyzed, synthesized, or used as the basis of conclusions in ways that are
innovative, creative, and original.
5. Mechanically correct. A research paper that is mechanically correct is free of errors in style,
grammar, punctuation, word usage, and spelling.
6. Well-written. A well written paper has a clear purpose, and the writing style utilizes precise
nouns, strong verbs, active voice, and correct verb tense. In an excellent paper, the material is
organized logically, with good transitions between sections and appropriate pacing. The
normal English sentence construction of subject - verb - object shall be followed whenever
possible, consistent with the APA Format and Style Guidelines.
Research Topic
A research topic is the main focus of the study that the student shall be conducting. It is usually
decided upon by the student in consultation with the Program Coordinator and/or Adviser and must
meet the following criteria set forth by the Graduate School.
a. Relevant and consistent with the curriculum required of the degree program being pursued
by the student
b. Original
3. For qualitative study and evidence-based nursing proposals and final format, it is best to
consult the assigned Adviser for details.
4. The title must reflect the variables or problems studied rather than the research method used.
A provisional title is acceptable in the proposal and this title may be refined for the final
defense.
The Researcher/Student
The researcher, in this case, the student must have completed all the major academic requirements of
the course including the Comprehensive Examinations. The student has to register/enroll for a 6-unit
Thesis course. If the thesis is not completed within this period, the student shall re-enroll the Thesis
every term to avail of the Adviser’s services. It is required that the student be enrolled throughout the
thesis work up to the submission of the final manuscript.
The researcher must keep in mind several responsibilities which will be the key in submitting a good
research work. A student shall:
The research panel is composed of the Adviser and Members of the defense panel.
1. Adviser
The adviser is selected based on his/her competence to provide expertise and reasonable time to
guide the students in the completion of the research.
Upon enrollment, the student shall fill up an Application for Designation of Thesis Adviser form
and submit to the Program Coordinator two or three (2-3) names of a possible adviser. Final
assignment shall be done by the Program Coordinator with the concurrence of the student. In
case of a disagreement between the Coordinator and student, the Dean shall assign the Adviser.
The Adviser must be in the roster of the Graduate School and must be chosen according to the
following criteria:
● A Masteral adviser shall have a PhD degree or doing his/her dissertation according to CMO15
s 2019.
● A Doctoral adviser shall have a PhD degree.
● The Adviser must have expertise in the research topic. If research requires multidisciplinary
expertise, a co-adviser may be assigned, subject to the recommendation of the Adviser and
approval by the Program Coordinator.
2. Panel Members
The panel members are chosen by the student upon the recommendation of the Adviser and
confirmed by the Program Coordinator. There shall at least be three (3) members of the panel for
a Master’s degree and four (4) for the Doctoral degree. Panel members for the thesis must at least
be Masteral degree holders. For dissertation defense, all panelists shall be PhD holders. At least
two (2) of the panel members should come from the faculty of the Graduate School. At most, one
(1) external panel member may be allowed if the Thesis Adviser deems it necessary. The external
panel member must be a PhD holder. It would be best if the external member be appointed in
advance as a third panel member.
A Panel Chair is selected among the Panel Members. He/she should be a faculty member of the
Graduate School. The Panel Chair is endorsed by the Program Coordinator to the Dean for
approval.
● Sets the tone of the defense process such as introduction of the student, topic and panel
members.
● Ensures that the defense proceedings adhere to the time limit.
● Facilitates open discussion and resolves issues.
● Documents the panel decisions and sets the deadline of expected revision (if needed).
● Summarizes the panel's recommendations after a closed door deliberation and conveys the
decision of the panel to the candidate.
● Prepares the panel's narrative report form and submit the form to the Office of the Dean
within 1-2 days after the oral defense.
● Check that the suggestions mentioned during the defense are incorporated in the thesis before
signing the manuscript.
The Program Coordinator certifies that the student is eligible for thesis defense.
● Endorses the final composition of the panel, as recommended by the Adviser and with the
concurrence of the student.
● Informs the Panel Members their assignment and schedule of the defense
● Recommends to the student the schedules of the proposal and final defense of the thesis.
● Endorses for the Dean’s signature, the required printed and bound copies of the final and revised
manuscript, plus CD-ROM containing the Final Manuscript in pdf format submitted by the
student.
In the absence of a Program Coordinator, the College Secretary or the Dean will assume the
responsibilities.
Part 1:
Quantitative Research
The thesis or research proposal helps the student focus the aim of the research paper. A good
proposal should demonstrate three (3) things:
The research proposal includes the first two (2) chapters of the thesis –
Chapter I: Introduction and Chapter II: Methods. As a general rule, the Graduate School adopts
the APA Format and Style Guidelines. Chapter headings follow Level I headings. Sections under
each chapter follows the appropriate subheading formats.
Chapter I – Introduction
Chapter II – Methods
1. Research design
2. Participants/Subjects
3. Settings
4. Measures
5. Procedures
6. Data Analysis
7. Limitations of the Study
Please refer to Annex “C” for substance and formatting guidelines of the research proposal.
The presentation aims to provide the Panel Members the scope, focus, feasibility, methods, and
structure of the proposed paper. An approved proposal will serve as a research contract between the
thesis/dissertation panel and the student.
The student needs to apply for Thesis Proposal Defense at least a week before the schedule. This will
give the Graduate School sufficient time to convene the Defense Panel. The application will be
endorsed by the Thesis Adviser through the Program Coordinator. It is advisable for the student to
submit a copy of the proposal to each of the Panel Members at least one (1) week excluding week-
ends and holidays before the scheduled defense. The student must be responsible enough to check
the written proposal for spelling and grammatical errors before submitting. The panel members can
be distracted by these errors from understanding the content of the proposal.
The defense panel will be evaluating the process and structure of the student’s research using the
following criteria:
The presentation is about 30 minutes. It is highly recommended that the student prepare a slide
presentation that shows the following:
● Describe the purpose, significance, and plan to conduct the research. Make sure to elaborate
on each of these 3 sections including the theoretical orientation of the study.
● Concentrate on three points—purpose (what), significance (why), and methodology (how).
Remember to keep within the 30 minute time limit!
● Remind the audience what the problem statement is by relating each major section of the
presentation to the topic.
At the end of the presentation, the panel members will deliberate and suggest revisions to improve the
research proposal. The panel deliberates on whether the student has passed the thesis proposal stage
with no, minor or major revisions.
In case the student needs to restructure the proposal completely, he/she will be given time to submit a
new one and may be asked to defend again.
Do not expect the presented proposal to be approved completely by the defense panel. The defense
panel will likely require revisions to the presented proposal and thus, the student is expected to
deliver these revisions in coordination with the Adviser. The revised version should be submitted to
the members of the defense panel through the Adviser a week after the presentation or at the agreed
date set by the panel. The student is allowed to submit within the school year from the date of defense
to submit the revisions to the proposal, otherwise the student will repeat the whole process. The
student will get an “IP” mark for Thesis. However, the student must be enrolled during the term
when the revisions are submitted.
Ethics Review
Once a research proposal is approved including its revisions, the Panel Chair through the Adviser will
endorse the revised proposal to the Ethics Committee for review. The student needs to apply for
ethics clearance before implementing the study and start collecting data.
The student must complete the checklist provided in the Research Institute for Health Sciences
(RIHS) Ethics Clearance forms. You can consult your Adviser when filling up the form.
Implementation of the research is only valid with the Notice of Approval from the Research Institute
of Health Sciences. This approval includes conditions such as progress reports and amendments
application, if needed, during the course of research implementation. The Notice of Approval is valid
for one (1) year. In case the research is not implemented within the validity period, the student must
re-apply for Ethics Review.
As a general rule, the Graduate School adopts the APA Format and Style Guidelines. Chapter
headings follow Level I headings. Sections under each chapter follow the appropriate subheading
formats. To facilitate the printing of the thesis using the UERM-Graduate School’s thesis digital
template, consult with the GS Office for the margin sizes. Other than the margins, you can refer to
Annex “B“ for the APA Format and Style Guidelines.
The final paper includes some of the preliminary parts (Title Page, Abstract, Table of Contents, List
of Tables, List of Figures) and the body of the report.
Abstract
The abstract is the “front door” of the thesis. It summarizes all the main points of a paper, the
underlying research questions, the research itself and its conclusions. Following APA guidelines, an
APA abstract page contains more of a description of what the paper is going to be about, rather than
introducing the paper to the reading audience
The first line of an abstract page should have the word ABSTRACT centered. The abstract
“heading” is to be single-spaced and it must include: the candidate’s name as it appears on the title
page (but with last name first); the abbreviation of the graduate degree being awarded; the name of
the candidate’s department or graduate program, or both; the institution (UERMMMCI); the year the
degree is awarded; and the title of the thesis as it appears on the title page.
The body of the abstract begins three spaces below the heading without an indentation and it must be
double-spaced. It should contain a comprehensive and concise summary of the entire paper,
including the original research question, the content of the research performed, the methodology used
by researchers, the conclusions of the research and an analysis of the results. APA also advises that
some writers may want to include a list of keywords from the paper at the end of the abstract.
For Masteral thesis, abstracts shall not exceed 150 words while for doctoral dissertation; it should not
exceed 350 words, double-spaced. The Abstract is written in past tense.
Chapter I
In the proposal, this is titled Introduction, but in the final paper, it has no title. Chapter I includes
the background of the study, review of related literature, theoretical or conceptual framework,
statement of the problem, hypotheses or assumptions, objectives and definition of terms. The
significance of the study which is included in the proposal will be integrated in the Discussion
chapter.
Chapter II – Method
The entire chapter is written in the past tense, as compared in the proposal where it is written in the
future tense.
The Data Analysis section is removed from this chapter but will be integrated in the Results chapter
and has no separate section.
Limitations of the Study which was also included in the proposal will now be integrated in the
Discussion chapter.
This chapter presents the results of the study. The results may be organized according to the research
questions and hypothesis or according to the variables. Subheadings may be used when necessary.
Use tables and figures to clearly present results and statistical data.
This chapter is generally written in the past tense except when referring to a table or figure within the
text.
Chapter IV – Discussion
This chapter is where results are interpreted, evaluated and placed in context. You may organize this
chapter into sections written in Level II headings. These guide questions can help the student
determine what to include in this chapter.
At the end of this chapter, include a section on Implications which discusses the key ideas that the
reader can draw from the study that may be applied to similar areas of concern. Comment on future
directions in this area, including implications on how the work can be extended or improved for both
research and practice. This section answers the question “What are the implications of the findings of
this study to theory, research and application or practice?”.
This chapter summarizes the most important findings and the implications and conclusions that can
be derived from the study in a concise manner. This is not meant to be a repetition of the Discussion
chapter.
The wordings of the summary and the abstract are not the same. The summary is longer than the
abstract. The conclusion answers the “So what?” of the findings. The hypotheses are often restated
as inferences with some degree of definitive commitment and generalizability. The recommendations
are practical suggestions for the implementation of the findings or directions for further research.
The entire chapter is written in the past tense. Sections and subsections may be used for clarity and
organization.
References
At the end of the study, the students shall list all references cited in the thesis in alphabetical order,
including electronic references that must formally cited. Previous research work done by the
student/researcher used in the study must also be cited.
Appendices
The Appendices shall include the instruments, and other special materials, tools and instructions that
were used in the study. Other information that may be too detailed for the text but which some
readers may want to refer to are also included.
A copy of the Notice of Approval for Implementation (Ethics Clearance) is included in the
Appendices.
Each appendix shall be placed in its own separate page and affixed with its own heading (Appendix
A, Appendix B, and so on).
For additional guidelines in writing the different chapters, you may refer to the thesis checklist in
Annex “D“.
Thesis Defense
General Guidelines
A student needs to apply for thesis defense by filling up the Application for Thesis Defense (Final) at
least one week excluding holidays before the scheduled defense. He/she must take note of the
deadlines for defense for the trimester in order to qualify for graduation for the said trimester.
Defense scheduled after the deadlines may be allowed only with the approval of the Dean upon the
favorable recommendation of the Program Coordinator or College Secretary.
In case a student is unable to defend the thesis and submit the Final Manuscript within the trimester,
he/she will need to enroll in the next term.
The student must submit the application to the Thesis Adviser for endorsement through the Program
Coordinator. A copy of the final paper must be given to the Adviser for this purpose. Furthermore,
the student is responsible for coordinating with the Adviser and Panel members regarding the date
and time of oral defense and providing a copy of the Final Paper to each of the Panel Members a
week before the scheduled defense. Defense dates may be moved in cases when the panel members
are not given sufficient time to review the paper. Similar to the proposal defense, the student must
be responsible enough to check the Final Paper for spelling and grammatical errors before submitting.
The panel members can be distracted by these errors from understanding the content of the proposal.
The student is advised to coordinate with the Graduate School for the status of his/her application and
for other arrangements needed prior to the thesis defense.
The presentation is expected to last for about an hour and may last longer depending on the questions
and comments of the defense panel. The student should prepare presentation slides to facilitate the
defense.
During the oral presentation, it is advisable that the student focus only on the main details in the
introduction and literature review as this has already been presented in the Proposal defense. Present
the conceptual framework in a clear manner and identify the variables, measurements, definitions,
etc. The student needs to spend more time presenting the results, discussion and
summary/conclusion.
To manage the time properly, the student is advised to answer directly and admitting errors when
these are pointed out.
Before the defense starts, the Chair has already been selected and will note the important issues and
comments of the panel during presentation. The Panel Chair will prepare the panel’s report and
endorse it to the Adviser. The student is given a copy as a guide for the revisions.
At the end of the presentation, the panel will deliberate and inform the student of the results. The
student will be given a qualitative grade (Pass or Fail) together with a quantitative grade. Only the
qualitative grade will reflect on the student’s official transcript of records. The quantitative grade
will be the basis for special commendations or awards that may be given.
The student must note the comments or suggested revisions by the panel and the submission date of
the revised paper. The revised paper still needs to be accepted by the Adviser and the Panel members.
In some cases, the student may be asked to present again.
After the final paper has been defended, the student still has to prepare the Final Manuscript. The
student has to complete the following before finally completing the thesis work and qualify for
graduation.
● Revise the paper based on the comments of the panel during the defense, documented by the
Panel Report.
● Submit the revised paper to the Adviser and the Panel members for their acceptance.
● Submit the accepted paper for style editing.
● Incorporate the comments of the style editor in the Final Manuscript.
● Submit the hardbound copies and CD copies of the Final Manuscript to the Graduate School.
The student is recommended to work closely with the Adviser to be able to incorporate the comments
of the panel. The student needs to submit the revised paper to the Thesis Adviser during the agreed
period. The Thesis Adviser endorses to the Panel Chair that the revisions are integrated into the
paper.
The student may need to allot one to two weeks to write the revised paper.
Style Editing
After the final paper is accepted by the Panel, the student shall submit a hard and soft copy to the
style reader through the Graduate School. The style reader is appointed by the Dean on a contractual
basis to assist the student in the final writing of the research. The responsibilities of the style reader
are:
● Edits the manuscript according to Graduate School & APA Guidelines within 2 weeks
from receipt of the revised and adviser-approved manuscript
● Certifies the final manuscript in terms of style and signs the style approval sheet
After receiving the edited paper, the student may still need to incorporate the changes based on the
style reader’s comments. Once completed, the student can now proceed to do the following:
● Submit the hardcopy and softcopy to the Graduate School for final checking. Include the
approval sheet signed by Adviser and the Panel and a copy of the Ethics Clearance from
RIHS.
● The student can now proceed to print the final manuscript using the official GS thesis
template, and produce the required copies and have these hardbound.
● Preliminary Parts
● Title Page
● Approval Sheets (Refer to Annex “G“ for the format of the Approval Sheet)
● Acknowledgements
● Abstract
● Table of Contents
● List of Tables
● List of Figures
● Submit the required number of hardbound copies and the properly-labeled CDs to the GS
Office.
Refer to Annex “H” for the format of the hardbound front cover and side inscription and CD
labels
Part 2:
Qualitative Research Paper
CHAPTER I
Introduction
CHAPTER II
Procedures
Expected outcomes
Source: Creswell, J. (2009). Research Design: Qualitative, Quantitative, and Mixed Methods
Approaches (3rd ed). SAGE Publications: USA
First, it is important to note that there is no single accepted way of doing qualitative research (Snape
& Spencer, 2003). Thus, there are no “hard and fast” rules in conducting qualitative research, but
rather, these are meant to act as a guide.
Chapter 1
Introduction
Also termed as the ‘need for study’, it is the researcher’s attempt to put the reader into perspective of
what the study is all about by providing an initial pitch (Sudheesh et al, 2016). It comprises three
major areas: 1) the problem of the study, 2) purposes and/or objectives, and 3) the research questions.
In qualitative research, Morse (1991, as cited in Creswell, 2009) mentioned that research problem is
characterized by the following:
- The concept is “immature” due to a conspicuous lack of theory and previous research;
- A notion that the available theory may be inaccurate, inappropriate, incorrect or biased;
- A need exists to explore and describe the phenomena and to develop theory
- The nature of the phenomenon may not be suited to quantitative measures
In writing the problem statement, the researcher must be able to describe what gap exists in the
knowledge of one’s field that this research is trying to address. Bwisa (2018) offers a formulation in
crafting a good problem statement:
1) should describe the ideal situation by setting the context and describe the desired goal;
2) describe the problem by stating the issues that are preventing the situation;
3) connect the ideal situation with the problem;
4) describe how the problem can be resolved by providing details on what needs to be done to
bridge the gap (optional).
The purpose of the study is/are statement/s that establish the intent of the study. According to
Creswell, “good qualitative purpose statements contain information about the central phenomenon
explored in the study.
The main thing that a researcher who aims to utilize a qualitative approach must remember is to focus
on a single phenomenon/ concept/ idea. You can provide a “general working definition” of this
central phenomenon, especially if this is not something your intended audience is familiar with, but
bear in mind that this definition is tentative and might evolve throughout the study.
Research Questions
Questions that require qualitative approaches are inquiries that relate to people’s experiences,
meanings people make of their experiences, studying a person in the context of his/her social context
of his/her social/interpersonal environment; and where not enough is known about a phenomenon.
They usually answer questions that start with “how” or “why”.
- Ask one or two central research questions. This question must explore the general or broad
set of factors that surrounds the central phenomenon.
- Ask no more than five to seven sub questions in addition to your central questions. These
sub questions are later on going to guide your data collection (e.g. questions that guide your
interview, your review of documents or your field observations, etc).
Relate the central question to the specific qualitative strategy of inquiry. This main question
that guides your research should reflect the kind of approach you are using to explore your
central phenomenon.
Chapter II
Philosophical Assumptions
Discuss about the epistemology/ ontology that you are using in your approach to inquiry.
Since there is no single accepted way of doing qualitative research, it is important for the
researcher to be explicit, in writing, about the paradigm that he/she is using and to maintain
consistency in the adoption of the philosophical assumptions of this worldview.
Guba and Lincoln (1985) state that the paradigm contains a set of beliefs and assumptions that
guide our inquiry. You can specifically use research paradigms like post- structuralism or
constructivism, then cite authors and their work in defining these paradigms.
- Identify the specific design that you will be using and provide references to the
literature that discusses the approach.
- Provide some background information about the design, such as its discipline origin,
the applications of it (preferably to your field) and brief description of it.
- Discuss why it is an appropriate strategy to use in the proposed study
- Identify how the use of the design will shape many aspects of the design process (the
title, problem, research questions, data collection, data analysis and the write up itself)
In this section, the researcher should explicitly identify their reflexivity by discussing their
preconceived notions about the central phenomenon that they are studying. This section should be
able to expound on the researcher’s biases, values, and personal background that may influence their
interpretations of the data and of the phenomenon itself.
This section involves discussion of the steps in obtaining the data such as obtaining the boundaries
for the study, collecting information through data collection methods and establishing the protocol for
recording this information.
When identifying selected sites and individuals for the study, the researcher must be able to discuss
how he/she is able to purposefully select participants or sites. This discussion might include four
aspects as identified by Miles & Huberman (1994 as discussed in Creswell, 2009):
In this section, indicate the size of your participants and the idea of saturation. Charmaz (2006) states
that this concept involves the halting of gathering data when there are no new themes emerging from
new data gathered.
Lastly, the researcher must discuss how data will be recorded. Discuss the protocol for recording
data. If you are using observation methods, then discuss your observation protocol. If you are using
interviews as your method, then discuss your interview protocol.
In this section, the researcher needs to specify the steps in analyzing the various forms of qualitative
data. Emphasis is placed on the iterative process of collecting and analyzing the data. One helpful
way to discuss this section is how qualitative data analysis will proceed on two levels: 1) the first is
the more general procedure in analyzing the data, and 2) the second would be the analysis steps
embedded within specific qualitative designs (Creswell, 2009, p. 246).
Also, specify whether you will use a data analysis software to assist you in analyzing the data (e.g.
QSR NVivo, MAXqda, Atlas.ti, etc.). In terms of interpreting findings, the researcher must recognize
that this can take many different forms depending on the type of design or paradigms that the
researcher has made explicitly earlier in the proposal. What is important is that the researcher
faithfully subscribes to this as he/she makes sense of meanings from the data.
Qualitative researchers need to convey the steps they will undertake to ensure the validity and
credibility of their findings. For example, if the researcher will be using triangulation of data sources,
then he/she must discuss it and provide an explanation of how it is used to build a coherent
justification for themes.
This section describes the procedure that the researcher will present the data. Is it a chronological
narrative of an individual’s life (narratives research), a detailed description of experiences
(phenomenology), a detailed portrait of a culture of a group (ethnography), or an in-depth analysis of
cases (case study)? Discuss how you plan to present your objective accounts, observations, stories,
interview data, etc.
The researcher needs to provide adequate information on what issues may arise in terms of their
rights to privacy, self-determination, autonomy, confidentiality, protection from discomfort and harm,
fair treatment and confidentiality. The researcher should also discuss the measures that he/she will
undertake in ensuring these rights. Also included in the discussion of this section is the process of
obtaining informed consent and the institutional review process (ethical approval).
REFERENCES
Bwisa, H. (2018). The basics of writing a statement of the problem for your research proposal.
Retrieved from The basics of writing a statement of the problem for your research proposal | Editage
Insights
Lincoln, YS. & Guba, EG. (1985). Naturalistic Inquiry. SAGE Publications: London
ANNEX “A”
List of Forms and Documents for Students enrolled in Thesis/Residency
ANNEX “B”
APA Style and Formatting Guidelines
(Please use the most recent version of the APA style format)
General Guidelines
● Font. Use 12 pt. Times New Roman font throughout the paper, including tables and
figures.
● Justification. Flush left or left justify throughout the paper (creating an uneven right
margin).
● Paragraph Indentation. Paragraph indentation should be 5-7 spaces or the normal tab
default
● Spacing after Punctuation. Space once after commas, colons and semicolons. Space
twice after punctuation marks that end sentences.
● Pagination. All page numbers are placed at the upper right hand corner of each page.
The title page is counted as page 1 but is not numbered.
● Active Voice. As a general rule, use the active voice rather than the passive voice. For
example, instead of “It was predicted that…”, write “They predicted that …”.
Style Headings
References: :http://blog.apastyle.org/apastyle/2009/07/five-essential-tips-for-apa-style-
headings.html#gsc.tab=0 (retrieved April 3, 2013)
https://apastyle.apa.org/instructional-aids/handouts-guides
Tables
A common use of tables is to present quantitative data or the results of statistical analyses (such as
ANOVA). Tables must be mentioned in the text.
Figures
A common use of Figures is to present graphs, photographs, or other illustrations (other than tables).
Examples:
Table 1
Mean Scores (M) and Standard Deviations (SD) on the Personal Power and Injustice Scales for
Age
Young Old
Gender
Personal Power
Male
M 8.2 8.3
SD 1.7 1.8
Female
M 8.6 6.2
SD 1.8 1.8
Injustice
Male
M 6.4 6.1
SD 2.1 1.4
Female
M 7.0 7.3
SD 1.9 1.2
Please rate the infant [Laurie, Larry, no name] on each of the following items, placing a mark
in the space nearest the adjective you feel best describes the infant.
firm:__:__:__:__:__:soft
big:__:__:__:__:__:little
strong:__:__:__:__:__:weak
hardy:__:__:__:__:__:delicate
well-coordinated:__:__:__:__:__:awkward
beautiful:__:__:__:__:__:plain
ANNEX “C”
The Thesis Proposal
Chapter I: Introduction
The introductory chapter begins with the overview of the study. It describes the general problem area
that is being studied in a manner that is sufficient for an educated reader to understand. It explains to
the reader the main objective of the research paper, its theoretical and/or practical relations to the
study as well as its relevance to the field.
The writer provides a relevant literature review (not exhaustive) to introduce the reader to the
problem. The background points out the extent by which the research problem has been tackled in
various studies.
This section also states the purpose, rationale and approach to solving the problem. A definition of
the variables and a formal statement of the research problem, hypotheses and significance are
included in an explicit and clear way.
Format: The term Background of the Study is not written on the page. This section is usually
written in the present tense.
Review of Literature
This section discusses the theoretical foundations of the problem. The goal is to develop the problem
conceptually and place it in the context of previous scientific work. A conceptual integration of
previous research is needed. Point out the themes, links, gaps and inconsistencies in the literature
aimed to provide a clearer conceptualization of the problem.
It is not the number of studies cited that is important but rather the quality of the research reviewed
that will help in the solution to the problem being sought. The length depends on how many relevant
materials are found in the literature. Sources can come from books, monographs, journals, periodical
articles, completed research including theses and dissertations, government reports and other
unpublished manuscripts. Internet generated databases are also acceptable. Full text references are
preferred.
Theoretical/Conceptual Framework
The framework presents the rationale for the statement of the problem and the hypothesis which
follows. It also reassures the reader of its reasonableness and soundness through logical or empirical
justification and performs a focusing and unifying function.
The research design is analogous to an architect’s blueprint. Frameworks are best presented with
graphic forms. Accompanying charts and diagrams, for example, help show and clarify relationships
between constructs or variables. Getting the framework in a single diagram forces the researcher to
find the general constructs that hold the discrete phenomena, map relationships, separate variables
that are conceptually or functionally distinct and work with all the information at once.
The theoretical framework differs from the conceptual framework in that the former presents an
integrated set of propositions espoused by an individual or group who are recognized members of the
scientific community. Theories, however, vary in generality, precision, rigor of prediction and origin
of postulates (empirical vs. rational). The conceptual framework maybe introduced by a discussion of
the theoretical orientation used for the research.
The conceptual framework is used when existing theories are not applicable or sufficient. Your
conceptual framework should clarify concepts and propose relationships between these concepts in
your study. Conceptual frameworks are usually not necessary in exploratory or descriptive
qualitative research. However, having a solid understanding of the conceptual framework in your
qualitative study. Likewise, you must present the theoretical underpinnings of your chosen study
design.
This section presents the specific research question(s). The statement of the problem shall have
several characteristics:
From a main problem, specific sub-problems can be written in the present tense.
Example:
Is there a relationship between the amount of chocolate intake and the blood sugar levels of
adolescent girls?
This section spells out the particular research hypotheses to be tested or the specific objectives of the
research. Each hypothesis or objective should be concrete and clear. It shall be stated in terms of
observable behaviors and allows the objective evaluation of results.
Hypotheses shall be used when there is a basis for prediction (in exploratory research, this is not
necessary). They are best stated in clear, concise predictions of expected outcomes and findings
rather than in the null form. There will be a basis for such predicted outcomes and findings if there is
a theoretical underpinning for the study.
Questions are more appropriate for exploratory and descriptive research that seek certain facts. The
specificity of the questions shows how carefully the problem has been thought out.
Rivera & Rivera (2007, p. 48), identified the following as characteristics of “good” hypothesis:
1. The hypothesis should be expressed in a comparative relationship between and among the
variables with valid basis and justifiable explanation of a phenomenon. It may be expressed in terms
of cause and effect.
2. There must be a valid and acceptable conclusion that could be drawn after using the
appropriate statistical tools.
4. It should be testable to prove the relationship of the variables using statistical tools.
Example:
There is no significant relationship between the amount of chocolate intake and blood sugar levels of
adolescent girls.
Significance of the Study is included in the Introduction of the proposal, but is integrated in the
Discussion of the final paper.
The author expresses the value or importance of the study in this section. The significant
contributions of the results of the study are enumerated. Such contributions may be from the point of
view of the target beneficiaries. This section also includes the possible contribution of the study to the
accumulation of knowledge, or solution to a problem, which may improve certain conditions,
refinement of concepts and theories, improvement of research instruments and methods, and meeting
the priorities of institutions.
1. Research design
2. Participants/Subjects
3. Settings
4. Measures
5. Procedures
6. Data Analysis
7. Limitations of the Study
The overview has no heading. The entire section is written in the future tense, but in the final paper it
is written in the past tense. Sections in this chapter follow one after the other, with no page breaks in
between.
Research Design
This section begins with an overview of the design used for the study. The research design is the
plan or structure for conducting a study, whether it is quantitative, i.e. experimental, quasi-
experimental, correlational, case-study; or qualitative. It summarizes the set of procedures that will
be used to obtain the data to answer the research problem (i.e., how participants were assigned to
groups). The research design answers the following questions:
Participants/Subjects
This section includes the number and relevant characteristics of the respondents, as well as the
sampling plan or design, i.e., the group from which the sampling was drawn, the method of sampling
and the rationale for the sampling method used. The sample shall be representative of the population
being studied. The participants shall adequately be described.
Take note of gender description. It is usually recommended that the specific gender be used, i.e.
men/women; gay men/lesbians; boys/girls. It is not advisable to use “he/she”. To avoid this, the
plural nouns maybe used, i.e. persons, individuals, participants, etc... . “they”. Use term “sex” for
males/females.
Tables and/or figures may be used to simplify the presentation of the demographic characteristics of
the participants.
Setting
This section is included only if the setting is of particular significance or importance; i.e., if a specific
community or organization is being studied. Describe the relevant characteristics of the setting,
especially if this has bearing on the research problem, method and results.
Measures
In this section, the conceptual and operational definition (a description of how variables will be
measured or observed) of each variable are discussed. In an experiment, the measurement of the
dependent variables is described here. If using an instrument, include the source, number of items
and type of scale, scoring, reliability, validity and appropriateness of the instrument. If constructing
an instrument, include the details of the steps/procedures taken to develop the scale. Make sure that a
pretest is done for the self-made instrument. Mention its reliability and validity as well.
Procedure
Pretest (or Pilot Phase). If applicable, this section contains everything about the pretesting
process, including the sample used, a description of the materials that has been pretested, and
the actual conduct of the pretest procedures. Report the relevant results of the pretest and the
resulting adjustments or modifications made, especially in terms of how these affect or
determine the final sample, instruments, and procedures employed in the study.
Actual Procedure. This section contains the process used when conducting the actual study
and includes the step-by-step procedure beginning with how the subjects were
contacted up to how the data were collected. In an experiment, this is where the independent
variables are described and manipulated; how the extraneous variables are controlled. This
section shall also contain the ethical procedures applied in the study, for example, informed
consent, debriefing procedures, and so forth. Depending on the complexity of the design
and/or procedures, additional subsections may be used (i.e., Apparatus and Materials,
Manipulation of the IV, etc.)
Data Analysis
This section describes the procedures on how the data are to be analyzed, be it quantitative or
qualitative. However, a step-by-step description of the statistical package is not necessary for
commonly used programs.
This is included as a separate section under Method in the proposal. However in the final
paper, this is integrated in the chapter on Results.
Written in the present tense, this section contains the theoretical and practical boundaries of
the study. It includes the parameters of the topic, subjects and method used. In other words, it
will tell the reader that it will be studying “this” but not “that”, and in “this way” but not “that
way”. It also includes the limitations as to the kind of results the study will generate. The
weaknesses of the study resulting from deficiencies in the methodology are also explained in
this section. It shall also answer the question “How far can generalizations be made?”
Similar to Data Analysis, this is only included as a separate section in the proposal. In the
final paper, this is integrated in the chapter on Discussion.
ANNEX “D”
Thesis Checklist
Abstract
Introduction
● Rationale for the study drawing upon the literature review outcomes
The rationale development shall draw upon the research literature. How prevalent is the issue
or problem? Can this be costed? Does this transform theory to practice?
Method
● Full description of all the tools and protocols used in the study including interview schedules,
tools and apparatus
The level of detail should be sufficient to enable replication of the study. Put lengthy tools as
appendices, but describe the characteristics e.g. reliability and validity.
Results
Discussion
Conclusion
● Are all the references cited in the text included in the reference list? Are all the references in
the reference list included in the text? Do all the references adhere to the appropriate style?
Carefully check the entries.
Adapted from: Thomas, S.A. (2000).How to write health sciences thesis and dissertations. Edinburg:
Churchill Livingstone.
ANNEX “E”
Sample Title Page
A Thesis
Presented to
In Partial Fulfillment
By
Juan G. Santiago
2010
ANNEX “F”
Sample Abstract
ABSTRACT
Santiago, Juan G. (2007) MS Public Health Major in Epidemiology. University of the East Ramon
Magsaysay Memorial Medical Center, Inc. Cost Analysis of Malaria Prophylaxis among the
Dumagats of Cagayan.
This study was conducted to compare the costs of different malarial prophylactic drugs used among a
community of Dumagats in Cagayan. This abstract included a general description of the research
including the objectives, methods, description of the study design, subjects/participants and
instruments used. This narrative also provided a concise presentation of the results, significant
Formatting Notes :
The abstract “heading” is to be single-spaced and it must include: the candidate’s name as it
appears on the title page (but with last name first); the abbreviation of the graduate degree being
awarded; the name of the candidate’s department or graduate program, or both; the institution
(UERMMMCI); the year the degree is awarded; and the title of the thesis as it appears on the
title page.
The abstract “narrative” begins three spaces below the heading, is not indented and it must be
double-spaced.
ANNEX “G”
Approval Sheet
(TITLE OF STUDY)
prepared and submitted by_______________, in partial fulfillment of the requirements for the degree
_______________________has been examined and is recommended for acceptance and approval for
ORAL EXAMINATION.
________________________________
(NAME OF ADVISER)
Adviser
____________________________________________________
(NAME OF PANEL CHAIR)
Chair
______________________________ _________________________________
(PANEL MEMBER 1) (PANEL MEMBER 2)
Member Member
______________________________________________________
(NAME OF PROGRAM COORDINATOR)
Program Coordinator
(Program Cluster)
_____________________________________________________
(NAME OF DEAN)
Dean
Graduate School
ANNEX “H”
Labelling Instructions for Hardbound Copies and CDs
Side Inscription
Example :
SANTIAGO, J.G. | Cost Analysis of Malaria Prophylaxis among the Dumagats of Cagayan |
UERMMMCI 2007
Title
Author
UERMMMCI
Degree
Major/Specialization
Year
Abstract
ANNEX “I”
Certification of Style Editor
CERTIFICATION
This is to certify that the manuscript listed below was read and edited for proper form and overall
style by an English editor at the Graduate School of the University of the East Ramon Magsaysay
Memorial Medical Center, Inc.
Title
Juan G. Santiago
Author
October 4, 2013
Date Issued