IBDP LAL IO TALLY - CRITERIA

TEXT 1 - Literary TEXT 2 - Non-Literary

CRITERION A CRITERION B CRITERION C CRITERION D CRITERION A CRITERION B CRITERION C CRITERION D

Overview of text Techniques + Links to GI Higher-order vocabulary Overview of text Techniques + Analysis (generic Links to GI Higher-order vocabulary
Analysis (generic connotations - “shows”)
connotations -
“shows”)

Retelling of Little Red 1. Wolf = Sexuality Cosmopolitan heavy links to sex

Riding Hood – males Linked again (too vague?? Sexualises women?)
curiosity/agency, Extended Narrow view of sexy
manipulates wolf metaphor Hurst comms. - owned. Agenda –
promote stereotypes
Not progressive

Overview of text linked to Higher-order Critical Thinking - Variations in syntax (e.g. Overview of text linked to GI Higher-order techniques (e.g. Critical Thinking - Tangents, Variations in syntax (e.g.
GI (Global Issue) techniques (e.g. Tangents, ‘deep’ participles at beg./end, noun (Global Issue) Structure, sequence, syntax), ‘deep’ thoughts (logic) participles at beg./end, noun
Structure, thoughts (logic) group, appositional) unique to text group, appositional)
sequence, syntax),
unique to text

1. Rhetoric Rejects 1. Placement of Not progressive

al Q / prey/predator “outsmarted” is in Sexy with any body type
sarcasm Tolerance corner, made minor, Backlash
(howeve Sexual appetite low priority of “unhealthy”? Revert to safety
r could Consent female Objectifies women while
also) Physical empowerment glorifying men
2. Colloqui dominance 2. Mode of address –
al Accepts imbalance pink colour.
languag to fulfil agenda Youthful, feminine,
e Paradox – power sexualised
3. Asyndet through lack of 3. Typography –
on (b. power false colloquial
Prose naivete 4. Heading – stands out
techniqu Mocking own (weak analysis)
e??) innocence 5. Yellow – stands out
4. Chaotic- Barriers b/w (vague) - shallow
like childhood & woods perception of female
structur Maturity linked to sexuality (good)
e(remin sexuality 6. Different language
ds Powered man highlights power
reader overpowered by an divide (5 min)
of the self- empowered
young woman
age of Duffy presents
 the sexuality as
main controversial,
characte nuanced
r, Classed as
creates empowerment –
shock doesn't personally
due to agree
action.)
5. (Graphic
) imager
emphasi
zes the
power
of the
beast
and how
it
overpo
wers the
main
characte
r, just
like how
men
overpo
wer
women.
6. Use of
commas

Quotes (Paraphrase f. Evaluation of Clever/unique Rhetorical devices (e.g. tricolon, Quotes (Paraphrase f. Non-Lit.) Evaluation of choices (+/-) Clever/unique concepts Rhetorical devices (e.g.
Non-Lit.) - extract choices (+/-) concepts parallelism, embedded tricolon, parallelism,
clauses/phrases) embedded clauses/phrases)

I Megan Fox – Transformers 1/2 Cosmo reverted back

 “clapped eyes”  “outsmarted a rapist”
 “what little  “juicy stuff”
girl”  “bad girl sex”
 “sweet 16”
 “at childhood’s
end”

Quotes linked to GI Quotes linked to GI

 “I made quite
sure”

Micro-quotes (one-word) Micro-quotes (one-word) woven

woven into syntax into syntax

 “the wolf I  “juicy stuff”

knew”  “hung”

Quotes (Paraphrase f. Lit.) Evaluation of Clever/unique Rhetorical devices (e.g. tricolon, Quotes Techniques + Analysis (generic Links to GI Higher-order vocabulary
- WIDER work choices (+/-) Lit. - concepts Lit. - parallelism, embedded (Paraphrase f. connotations - “shows”) Non- Non-Lit.) - WIDER work Non-Lit.) - WIDER work
WIDER work WIDER work clauses/phrases) Lit. - WIDER Non-Lit.) - WIDER Lit.) - WIDER work
work work

Salome - regular sexuality 1. Beast – Salome - regular Tess Halliday – plus size
Mrs. Beast - graphic sexuality  Female covers,
sexual Beast- empowered descriptives “naughty
imagery man is STILL sexy juicy”
disempowered  Male “Kobe Bryant
dominates” “Chris
Hemsworth – hero”

Quotes linked to GI Quotes linked to GI

Micro-quotes (one-word) Micro-quotes (one-word) woven

woven into syntax into syntax