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Certain individuals are of the view that minors with different abilities should be taught with others,

while another group suggest that intelligent children must be in their own class and given special
treatment. In my opinion, I support the first view.This essay will discuss, why minors with different
abilities must be taught together, and it goes on to state the other suggestion that children with
intelligent must be in their own class.

To begin with, mixing these children will make them have sense of belonging.In other words they will
feel to be accepted by other team members, unlike separating them with other intelligent children. For
example, in Zimbabwe, Ministry of Education Sport and Culture recommends mixture of less average,
average and above average expect those who need special care.

To add, leaners with different abilities need motivation from other students who are smart. As an
explanation, those who are intelligent will assist their colleges when there is need, hence putting them
in their own class will disadvantage those with different abilities.

Furthermore, mixing them in one class will discourage stigma to those of learning difficulties. Students
will be protected from being labelled as dull pupils by their buddies. For example, special class leaners in
primary schools are also labeled.

On the other hand, the other group suggest that intelligent children should be put in their own class.
Firstly, intelligent leaners will move together with same level. To explain, they will understand things
the same way. Mixing them with those who need special care will confuse them. For example, those
with slow intellectual ability and down syndrome can not be in one class with intelligent children. As a
result separating them will be a noble idea.

In addition, this will make them work harder as they will be all aiming for number one. Pass rate will be
higher. For example, there are schools like Bonda High always record higher percentage of pass rate.

To sum up, minors with different abilities should be taught with others. This will motivate them to work
hard as they will be helped by their intelligent colleges. They will also have a sense of belonging. On the
other hand, intelligent children will be driven to work extra harder.

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