The document summarizes 11 comments received on the Punjab Sanitation Policy and provides responses to each. Suggested changes and clarifications from the comments are incorporated directly into the policy text. The comments covered areas like outdated references, lack of cross-referencing, unclear wording, alternative wording for better compliance, adding missing objectives, clarifying what is being devised, specifying timeframes, including additional monitoring roles, reorganizing sections, and incorporating an M&E plan. The responses indicate the suggested edits were reviewed and relevant changes were made to the draft policy document.
The document summarizes 11 comments received on the Punjab Sanitation Policy and provides responses to each. Suggested changes and clarifications from the comments are incorporated directly into the policy text. The comments covered areas like outdated references, lack of cross-referencing, unclear wording, alternative wording for better compliance, adding missing objectives, clarifying what is being devised, specifying timeframes, including additional monitoring roles, reorganizing sections, and incorporating an M&E plan. The responses indicate the suggested edits were reviewed and relevant changes were made to the draft policy document.
The document summarizes 11 comments received on the Punjab Sanitation Policy and provides responses to each. Suggested changes and clarifications from the comments are incorporated directly into the policy text. The comments covered areas like outdated references, lack of cross-referencing, unclear wording, alternative wording for better compliance, adding missing objectives, clarifying what is being devised, specifying timeframes, including additional monitoring roles, reorganizing sections, and incorporating an M&E plan. The responses indicate the suggested edits were reviewed and relevant changes were made to the draft policy document.
NO. Existing situation L1 Given that the 2018-2023 Growth Suggested rephrased Strategy is currently being statement is conceived, suggest referring to it incorporated here to avoid the policy being quickly outdated. 5.1 Refoms and L2 Suggest cross-referencing to Suggested track Governance specific objectives in interests of changes incorporated clarity. Strategic Action L3 Word missing? Word completed. It is 5.4.6 for elected Local Government representatives Strategic Action L4 Clarification required? This is to deploy UC 5.4.7 level staff i.e. Social Mobilizer. However, the strategic action rephrased with UC level outreach. Strategic Action L5 Suggest making Active and The strategic action 5.4.9 showing increased inspection rephrased with adding regime/alternative to ensure government better compliance: Government responsibility of shall start making inspections of inspection workplaces to ensure compliance with section 20…? 5.5 Financing and L6 This is not one of the current Objective added in 11 Partnerships objectives – add? Should not be number introduced here if not one of the objectives at the beginning of the policy. Strategic Action L7 Suggest clarifying whether this is This will be devised. It is 5.5.3 being devised / what it is (defining required to promote it). equity base distribution among districts instead of population-based distribution. Strategic Action L8 Must reach 10% by [2020]? Rephrased. This is for 5.5.3 10% annual increment in WASH allocations. 5.6 WASH L9 Consider including a reference to Strategic action 5.6.9 Coordination and DG M&E role as they shall conduct added for DG M&E Monitoring some monitoring (progress, KPI and impact) and evaluation Strategic Action (impact, meta) of WASH projects. Data should be shared across departments to ensure no duplication and that lessons learned are fed back into projects. 7.14.4 Media L10 Suggest this is just incorporated Stakeholder Media has into section on the I&C deleted and department, which would detail responsibility to how the I&C will liaise with the encourage media media. If I&C is to develop a campaign added in role ‘module of safely managed of I&C department. sanitation services’ for journalists, Furthermore, strategic this should be listed as a policy action for developing initiative within the public module for journalist awareness section. added as 5.4.9 7.14.5 Religious L11 Suggest this is deleted and instead Stakeholder religious Leaders government liaison with religious leaders has deleted and leaders, through the Auqaf role of Auqaf and department, should be set out. Religious Affairs department added to liaise with Ulmmah and Khateeb M&E of Sanitation Incorporated M&E plan Policy with some broader indicators