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Basic-Intermediate First Draft
Basic-Intermediate First Draft
TEACHER’S 12/02/2023
NAME: David Rodriguez _ ROOM: 405 DATE:
I. PRE-WRITING
Identity
motivation
Organize
your time Eliminate
distractions
AVOID BEING A
PROCRASTINATION
Pick a Good
study Promise
location yourself
rewards
Figure out
why
II.WRITING:
Overleaf, write your paragraph, letter or essay using the ideas you brainstormed
above.
Comments:
WRITING ASSESSMENT Basic & Intermediate
FIRST DRAFT
Dear Kathy
Thanks for your letter, I am happy to hear from you after two weeks we have not seen each other. I am worried
about your scores every day they are lower and you were the best student in the class, I think you are a procrastination
person because you do all your homework a day before , you should change those attitudes to avoid the stress and you
can have good scores again but it is up to you. I am here to support you and I will give you some suggestions to avoid
being a procrastination person.
First one you have to organize your time to be able to do all your assignments and avoid everything getting
together, you will be more relax and less bored because you are going to have everything ready.
The second one pick up a good study locations without noises and you can understand and have more concentrations,
you will use your cellphone if you want to use information about something that you cannot understand, do not use it to
be on the social media because they are distractions.
The third identity motivations and promise reward. If you don’t have motivations to do something you will not do the
things well, remember my friend it is important think that you can do it all if you decided try it, never stop in the
process, the reward will come when you get the victory.
These suggestions will help you to be a more organized, responsible, punctual person and the most important thing
you will be able to get the best scores again and you will not to be stressed, do not forget figure out why you are a
In conclusion try to remeber it and put them into practice everyday,each one of them is the key to success, if you do
not do that you will continue to be a procrastinator and your life never change . I hope to hear good things from you
soon.
Regards