Is Social Media Good For Teenagers?

Social media is an online media in which the users can easily participate, share, and create the
content of blog, social networking, and the virtual world. There is an opinion that social network is using
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for add other friends. With its various features which are provided, certainly brings positive impacts for
the users. Most people now have smartphones where they are on social media networks all throughout the
day. Especially teenagers, its not just becoming a part of their world, but it’s indeed becoming their
world. They spend more time on social media than in the real world. However, hyper-connected to social
media could be bad for the users.
In fact, as we found, networking has more negative than positive effects especially for children
and teenagers. There are many negative effects of social media on children and teenagers. Firstly, social
media will ruin their health. Children and teenagers become lazy to communicate in the real world and it
will make children and teenagers more self-interested. And then they will isolate themselves and their
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genetic will be changed, reducing their immune,hormonal level, blood capilarity, ruin their sleep pattern
and breakdown their mentality. This can have fatal consequences for their growth. Second, the
assumption that the internet is synonymous with pornography is not wrong. With the ability to
disseminate information possessed by the internet, pornography is rampant. To anticipate this, browser
manufacturers equip their program with the ability to select an accessible home page. On the internet,
there are many pornographic and violent images that can be an incentive for someone to commit a crime.
Beside that, Social networking sites are fertile ground for predators to commit crimes. The internet is not
exempt from these fraudsters' attacks. Children and teenagers are easy target which is the most wanted by
criminals.
Social media is dangerous for teenagers. Teenagers who should spend their time with any positive
Reiretration activities, nowadays they are not. They are online in their social media all the time. They don’t care about
something around them, but they care about something that far from them. If they still spend their time in
their social media, they will be in problem. Because it can harm their mental health. So, parental monitor
to limit teenagers online in social media needs to be done from time to time.

1. Social Function : To convince children that social media has more negative impacts than positive
ones if they don't use it wisely and without parental supervision

2. The generic structure : beside the text

3. The Language Feature :

 Internal Conjunction : firstly, second, beside that, and then, consequence, than
 Causal conjunction : by, because.
 Simple present tense :
 They spend more time on social media than in the real world
 Children and teenagers become lazy to communicate in the real world and it will make
children and teenagers more self-interested
 Social media is dangerous for teenagers
 They are online in their social media all the time
  They don’t care about something around them, but they care about something that far
from them
 its not just becoming a part of their world
 social network is using for add other friends
 There are many negative effects of social media on children and teenagers
 there are many pornographic and violent images that can be an incentive for someone to
commit a crime
 Children and teenagers are easy target which is the most wanted by criminals
 Social networking sites are fertile ground for predators to commit crimes

 Non-human participants : Social Media, smartphones, immune, blood capilartity, mentality,

hormonal level, internet, pornography, browser, pornorgraphic and violent images, program,
time, crime, mental health, ability.
 Relational process :
 networking has more negative than positive effects

 Modal verbs : can, will, could,

 Mental verbs : care, needs.
 Passive voice :
 disseminate information possessed by the internet
 the most wanted by criminals
 Persuasive technique : In fact, as we found, networking has more negative than positive
effects especially for children and teenagers.