1.

(RICCA)

What was the sample concept paper all about?

2. (BOB)

Which gap was addressed by the author in the introduction?

3. (ISSA)

How does the author justify the need for such a study?

By having concrete evidence in the sense that the source of the need must be documented and
verifiable. It is also important to look at what other scholars have done on the concept previously, and
whether this is enough to answer the questions intended for the study. It is also important to outline
several studies that have been undertaken on the topical area summarizing their conclusive evidence
and relevance to the study area.

4. (RISHA)

Is the background enough? Why or why not?

The study's background already provided in the sample concept paper is enough. When it comes to
length, it is already founded that a concept paper is merely the preamble to the actual research study;
thus, a brief background of its general information is one of the keys to making it sufficient; key points
were provided, as well as a summary of the literatures used as sources. It also indicates that some
research on the topic of interest has been conducted. However, there is still a gap that needs to be
filled, as shown in paragraph 2 sentence 4. The topic's relevance and conclusive evidence have also been
summarized.

5. (CRIS)

What suggestions can you make to improve the concept paper further?

This concept paper is nearly perfect after thorough reading and evaluation, but there are a few issues
that need to be clarified regarding the type of data that should be acquired and the gap that needs to be
filled, both of which are significantly raised. Even though it is a really good idea paper, the researcher
may need to provide a bit more detail and objectivity to prevent confounding the readers.