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MELC 7: Writes an objective/balanced review or critique of a work of art, an event or a

program

Task 1:

Directions: Make a product review focusing on the taste, price, availability and content
nutrients of pancit canton. Use the given format for the review.

Product Review

Product: ____________________
Critic: ______________________
Comments on the taste:
______________________________________________________________
Comments on the price:
______________________________________________________________
Comments on the availability of the product:
______________________________________________________________
Comments on the content nutrients:
______________________________________________________________
Recommendation: ___________________________________________

Input 1:
Principles of Writing Effective Reviews and Critiques
a. Gives a fair and balance social commentary
b. Provides relevant and accurate factual information on the situation
c. Exhibits by means of thorough and in-depth analysis and appreciation of
context (including time, place, people, involvement, their motivation, and
actuations)
d. Makes a clear distinction, through language, between what is actual and
what is probable or possible
e. Exhibits a deep sense of humanity and an understanding of the human
situation even while expressing disapproval or disagreement most intensely.

Written Work 1:
Directions: Finalize your review using the output in the previous activity, Don’t forget
to apply the principles in writing effective reviews. Your output will be graded based
on the following rubrics:
Rubric for Evaluating Reviews
● Content (50%): This includes the relevance of the event and your reaction; the
informative and entertainment value of your paper; societal importance of your
paper.
● Organization (20%): This includes the appropriate use of transitional markers;
the correct use of paragraphs; the logical flow of ideas.
● Language (20%): This includes the use of vocabulary words to heighten the
reader’s experience; the use of wit, metaphor, simile and irony.
● Mechanics (10%): This includes the correct use of grammar, spelling,
punctuation and sentence sense.

Input 2:
A review article is a critical, constructive analysis of the literature in a specific field
through summary, classification, analysis, comparison.

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• A scientific text relying on previously published literature or data. New data

from the author’s experiments are not presented (with exceptions: some reviews
contain new data).
Types of Review Articles
1. Narrative review - Selected studies are compared and summarized on the basis of
the author’s experience, existing theories and models. Results are based on a
qualitative rather than a quantitative level.
2. Best evidence review - A focus on selected studies is combined with systematic
methods of study-selection and result exploration.
3. Systematic review - Findings from various individual studies are analyzed
statistically by strict procedures. Meta-Analyses are used to pool the results of
individual studies.

Preparing a Review Article in 12 steps

STAGE STEP

Prepare 1. narrow the topic, define a few questions or

hypotheses
2. read, evaluate, classify and make notes
3. redefine the focus and the research questions, define
the take-home message
Develop structure 4. find a structuring principle for the article (e.g.
chronological, subject matter, experimental procedure)
5. prepare an outline, find headings for the sections in the
text body
6. plan the content of each paragraph in the different
sections
Write draft 7. draft the body sections
8. draft the conclusions
9. draft the introduction
Revise 10. revise drafts of different sections
11. revise citations and references
12. correct grammar, spelling, punctuation

Example 1:

PRODUCT REVIEW: SHAMPOO WITH A PURPOSE1

I’ll admit I didn’t have hugely high expectations when given the chance to try
out a shampoo bar for washing my hair. After 50+ years of pouring shampoo from a
bottle, shampoo that looked like a bar of soap just sounded a little weird.
But I also had a couple of other doubts. Firstly, living in the tropics, humidity
plays havoc with a lot of products not designed for these tough conditions so I
anticipated it would ‘collapse’ into a soggy, gloppy useless lump of messy soap in my
shower.
Secondly, I wondered how a bar of shampoo was going to provide a rich,
cleansing lather on long straight hair that gets a daily wash.
Dispelling any doubts, I was immediately drawn to the philosophy of Shampoo
with a Purpose. Created by mother and daughter business partners Liz and Geneva,
not only do they aim to turn shampoo on its head they aim to do away with the
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relentless need for plastic bottles that regular shampoo and conditioners are
packaged in.
Says Geneva, “We had been told that processing shampoo bars on the
machinery we use would be impossible, but nevertheless, Liz persisted, and we have
since become the first and only company to process shampoo/conditioner bars on
triple-milling, commercial machinery.”
There’s a really holistic story behind the shampoo bars that shuns palm oil
and chemical sulphates, is vegan friendly with no animal testing as well as being
completely free of plastic packaging. All admirable attributes. The pair also have
some sassy pizazz and have created a fun personality around their brand.
“After achieving the “impossible” we had to create our brand – we wanted to do
something fun and fresh with a shit-tone of added personality. Every box is covered
in hand-drawn pictures of friends and family, along with plenty of education around
our product, and our mission – to provide a simple and easy option to help reduce
plastic consumption in the shower.”
Shampoo with a Purpose claims that one Shampoo Bar will replace six bottles
of shampoo and conditioner. While I haven’t kept an accurate record, I have noticed
that I’m no longer filling my rubbish bin with shampoo and conditioner bottles.
“Our unique manufacture process has made one of our bars worth up to 6
bottles of shampoo and conditioner and ensures that they hold their integrity in the
shower. No mush!”

Example 2:
ABS-CBN Ball 2018: Fashion Review
Voltaire Tayag lists down the looks that stood out during
the fashion extravaganza that is the ABS-CBN Ball
Voltaire Tayag
Published: 1:00 PM September 30, 2018

BEST DRESSED
One of the biggest nights in Philippine entertainment dominated social media in
its debut – the first ever ABS-CBN Ball held on Saturday, September 29 at the
Shangri-La Makati. All the stars of the network graced the highly-anticipated red
carpet event, which is the country’s equivalent to the Oscar’s.
For many people, it's seemingly a superficial event. But for these celebrities, it’s
about branding and imaging. It’s a tool that helps them get publicity, attention and in
some cases, notoriety. For months prior, fashion designers and stylists have been hard
at work trying to come up with the most fabulous gown that is both unique and
different.
Unfortunately for some celebrities, they fall victim to the creative
experimentation of their stylists. Unless they have a strong sense of self and style, they
end up as fashion road kill.
To the viewing public, it’s a chance for them to dream about such a lavish, star
studded event. The following celebrities did not disappoint their adoring public with
their spectacular looks.

THE BEST DRESSED WOMEN

Sue Ramirez
High fashion, flapper fabulosity. The 1920’s inspired, burgundy/deep old rose gown by
Mak Tumang is exquisite. She looks great from every angle. As she walks, you see this
heavily embroidered, halter top bodice with asymmetric, long fringe beads on the skirt.
Exiting the red carpet, the cascading beads from the nape across her back on nude
tulle creates even more interest. The short, sleek hairstyle with a side part and

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minimal jewelry made this look Oscar’s red carpet worthy. If I were a celebrity, I would
immediately book her stylist.
Jessy Mendiola
Golden mermaid eleganza. This nude illusion, a halter serpentina Patricia Santos
gown looks like it was painted on Jessy. The fit is perfection and the very flattering
beadwork pattern highlighted her curves. Her soft make-up and the center parted low
ponytail complete this classy look. Other celebrities should learn from Jessy’s style.
You can be sexy, hot, and still be classy. I love that Jessy was smiling and didn’t feel
the need to pout and project. This unpretentious air is what truly makes her sexy.

Janella Salvador
Haute in hot pink. If you want to pop against a backdrop of green foliage, hot pink is
the way to go. This Deep-V, voluminous ballgown by Michael Leyva is perfect for this
teen star. The high ponytail with bangs gives it a very youthful and fresh look. The
diamond necklace adds a bit of sparkle to this bright ensemble.

Sarah Geronimo
Pretty and petite princess. Everyone was talking about Sarah’s first time at the ball
with her boyfriend Matteo Guidicelli. All eyes were certainly on her when she arrived in
this sparkly white, A-line skirt, pointy bustier with a side cutout that seemed to defy
gravity, a custom design by Mark Bumgarner. It’s a very simple silhouette that says
understated elegance. Her clean bob and fresh face where all that’s needed to perfect
this look. Having Matteo by her side didn’t hurt either.

Yassi Pressman
Roughed rouge radiance. There is nothing out of the ordinary about this Lauren dela
Cruz gown. It’s a classic, rouched, Grecian inspired, spaghetti strap top with a very
full, flowy skirt. The immaculate construction and fit makes simple gowns look
stunning. Yassi’s hair had soft waves, wispy bangs and bold lipstick made the overall
appearance looked relax. Yassi is the epitome of stylishly fashionable Simplicity. 2

Performance Task:
For HUMSS:
Choose your subject for review among the following: local festivals, recent school activity/ies,
specific culture or tradition in the community. Make initial research about it then create an
outline for your review. Use your outline in writing your review. Your output will be graded based on
the following rubrics: Content (50%, Organization (20%), Language (20%), Mechanics (10%).

For TVL BPP:

Choose a local restaurant as your subject for review. Make initial research about the
restaurant to plan the concept of your review. Create an outline of your review. Use your outline
in writing your review. Your output will be graded based on the following rubrics: Content (50%,
Organization (20%), Language (20%), Mechanics (10%).

For TVL ICT:

Choose an application as your subject of review. Make initial research about it then create an
outline for your review. Use your outline in writing your review. Your output will be graded based on
the following rubrics: Content (50%, Organization (20%), Language (20%), Mechanics (10%).

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Tayag, V., “ABS-CBN Ball 2018: Fashion review” September 30, 2018