All in all, the report is well-written and interesting.

The scope of the essay is clearly described, it

being about Germany and its energy consumption. Furthermore, just focusing on Germany
enables the report to go more in depth rather than focusing on different countries and just
touching the surface of their respective energy consumption. Its structure with the different
topics and questions that the issue is analyzed through are relevant and the report does a good job
at answering them. Going into the current states of the sectors first and then the impact of
electrification and lastly the future, makes it easily understandable and the reader gets a thorough
overview of the issue. The discussion and conclusion clearly reflects the scope of the report,
tying everything together. Limiting themselves to just look at the heating and transport sector is
also explained and the reasoning behind it, them not meeting their respective emission targets, is
clear and understandable. As for the language, there are some minor errors with the words. But
other than that, the report is well written and easy to understand. The essay written is at an
appropriate level and allows us to understand the subject well. It can be interesting to develop
more about nuclear policies and why Germany chose to move out from nuclear energy. The 3.1.1
is unclear because of the data. There is too much data on the 2nd paragraph.