Nicole Chavez

Animal Intelligence, in this article (In the article “Animal Intelligence”), the author tries
to answer the question if animals are intelligent or not .

First, the writer thinks that birds can process information and remember their way
over long distances. Also, the author is very sure that these animals don't use their
intelligence, but they are born with it. Second, the writer thinks that dogs have an
instinct in some cases; for example, when they bark after they listen to a noise, but in
other cases, it is difficult to recognize if they are using their instinct or their
intelligence; for example, when a house is on fire and the dog barks to alert its
owner. Third, the writer points out that chimpanzees are the most intelligent animals,
because they have a lot of abilities like the human; for example, they can manipulate
a stick to reach the fruit of the trees

In conclusion, the author

Mistakes are highlighted

Corrections in red

It’s short (less than 200 words).

The introduction must be improved, and the conclusion is incomplete.