Chapter 5

1. RA 11215 - Section 10

- Other comprehensive speciality cancer center shall be designated in high

population areas outside metro manila. (Does this means na need outside MM ang
site? Nabsa ko lang sa RA 11215.

2. 5.1.1.3 Cancer Situation in Metro Manila and Rizal

- mejo madaming data ung graph I think need itong issimplfy.

3. I suggest na baguhin ang mga maps or iedit ng konti ung color?

4. Table 5.1: Male All Site Annual Incidence Rate per 100,000 By Age Group (Years)
1998-1992 to Table 5.2: Female All Site Annual Incidence Rate per 100,000 by Age
Group (Years) 1988-1992

(Needs to highlight the important data on the table)

Yung tingin palang alam mo na agad nasan ung tinutukoy sa description or simplify
the table.

5. • What technological innovations can be provided to improve the treatment of

cancer in the Philippines?

- I think mas okay na ilagay natin specifically ung mga innovative techs natin dito
like what type of automatics doors and all?

Sa Chapter 7, saka na ulit ang comments dahil pwede pa tayong magdagdag or bago
once on going na ung project. For example, ung concept na Holistic Utilitarinism,
maybe meron pang mas modern na concept wordings or need more story line. Will
explain pag nag meeting ulit.

Might need to add sa research book

1. Specific Sustainable Design (LEED Systems, Green building standards)
2. More Design solutions and guidelines
3. List of Innovative Design Solutions and materials to be use
4.