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Writing Task 1 Essay 1,2 Corrected H
Writing Task 1 Essay 1,2 Corrected H
Writing Task 1 Essay 1,2 Corrected H
The bar chart compares how good at a foreign language between male
and female pupils in six countries.
How male and female good at …..
China, opposite to India, observes the least proportion of both girls and
boys, at 32% and 17%. The percentages of male students who are
fluent in a foreign language in Vietnam and Russia is 43% and 46%
which are seriatedly 8%, 18% less than the female’s.
2)
The bar chart illustrates the crucial level of seven inventions of both men
and women in the last three centuries.
Overall, bicycle was the most important creation whilst TV was voted to
be the least vital by both genders. Besides that, car, table, internet and
Tv interested male more than females who preferred remaining
inventions.
First of all, roughly 93% of women was fascinated about cycling which
was about 5% higher than men. Internet was ranked as the second
essential invention behind bicycle throughout the period. There was
almost twice as many men who chose car as women. Even though more
men than women picked TV, this creation was still far less critical than
others. The proportion disparity between two genders for tablet did not
have a significant difference from TV.
On the contrary, the number of females voting for mobile phone doubles
males. Regarding to radio, there was a 3 % gap between men and
female (6% and 9% respectively)
3)
1, While
2, while
3, but
4, slightly
5, although
6, almost
4)
1-c
2-e
3-a
4-f
5-d
6-b