Does Technology Make us more Alone?

Currently ， technology is becoming more and more advanced.Some people think technology
reduces communication between people.In my opinion it is definitely wrong.
The reasons for my opinion that technology makes our daily communication becomes
convenient.Such as some long distance context，people could quickly communicate with family
and friends through the Internet.It makes people who are far away become closer.
Likewise，more and more software gives us more opportunities to show our lives and let more
people know.
In addition the development of technology has enriched our lives.Take for example：we can go
to the movies with friends, play games in the game hall, and even study together through mobile
phones.These are all the products of technology，which make people's relationship stronger.
However ， if there is no technology people's contact will still be letters and face-to-face
communication. This will waste a lot of time and will also make people who are far away lose
contact.
In conclude ， Instead of making people far away from people, technology makes
communication more convenient, enriches life and strengthens relationships.

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5. Do we have a conclusion: Yes/No

If yes, is it an opinion or a summary?

6. Did the writer use linking words/transitions? Firstly/secondly/moreover

(and)/ in addition (and)/for example/furthermore/however (but)/nonetheless
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7. Did the writer punctuate them correctly? Are there any mistakes in
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Firstly,
I got to the airport two hours early. However, my flight was delayed.
I got to the airport two hours early; however, my flight was delayed.

However (punctuation) = in addition, furthermore, additionally, for instance, for

example, moreover, what’s more, all in all, likewise, in conclusion, to sum up, to
conclude, firstly, secondly,… etc.

Because, although, though, when, while

Because I was late, I missed my flight. (Comma after the first clause).
I missed my flight because I was late. (No comma)

8. Are there any grammar or spelling mistakes?