JUNE 6, 2022 BTTE CIVIL TECHNOLOGY GROUP

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Ceiling Board Made of Rice Straw: An Innovation
COMMENTS/SUGGESTIONS
Chapter I-Chapter IV
Front Page (List of Names arrange it alphabetically)
Acknowledgement (it should address separately)
Citation (In text citation/ Parenthetical must written before (.) period.
Significance of the Study (it must be period not column)
Related Literature (5 year rule)
Provide the formula for the expected value
Page 27,29 (decision HO)

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 JUNE 6, 2022 BTTE CIVIL TECHNOLOGY GROUP II
Decorative Side Table Made from Cieba Pentadra
Fruit (Kapok Fruit)
COMMENTS/SUGGESTIONS
Chapter I-Chapter IV
Front Page (List of Names arrange it alphabetically)
Page 2 Second Paragraph First Line (Be specific “fruit” only)
Citation (In text citation/ Parenthetical must written before (.) period.
Related Literature (Grammar)
Revise abstract
Conceptual Framework (it should be arranged “Process and add column”)
Conceptual Framework (Instead of testing make it “Evaluate”)
Instead of Purposive sampling make it “Purposive Sampling”
Page 18 be specific when it comes to the costing, suggested retailed price (table of
costing)
Chapter 3 Table 2.1 it should be 2.0
Page 23 Table 3.1 The computed value it should be 3 digits only
Summary of Findings (include the implications and elaborate further)
Recommendation (data base)

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 JUNE 6, 2022 BTTE CIVIL TECHNOLOGY GROUP III
Center Table with Decoration Made from Sawdust and
Papers

COMMENTS/SUGGESTIONS
Chapter I-Chapter IV
Front Page (List of Names arrange it alphabetically)
Citation (In text citation/ Parenthetical must written before (.) period.
Instead of Purposive sampling make it “Purposive Sampling”
Page 17 Per kilo of saw dust it should be specific 26.77pesos add column for unit cost. Specify
the length of wood and length of table
Chapter 3 Table 2.1 it should be 2.0
Chapter 1 second to the last sentence instead of recreating it must be “recreational”

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 JUNE 6, 2022 BTTE CIVIL TECHNOLOGY GROUP IV
Collapsible Sand and Gravel Measuring Box with Wheel
for Masonry Works

COMMENTS/SUGGESTIONS
Chapter I-Chapter IV
Front Page (List of Names arrange it alphabetically)
Citation (In text citation/ Parenthetical must written before (.) period.
Instead of Purposive sampling make it “Purposive Sampling”
Summarize the RRL
Page 23 OD over total it should be OT, must be consistent with the symbols
Page 26 Value of average weighted mean
Stat 4.23 is the correct answer
Implication of the study (There is no significant difference)

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 JUNE 7, 2022 BTTE CIVIL TECHNOLOGY GROUP I
Four-Wheeled Trolley Rack to Transport and Store
Plywood and Lumber
COMMENTS/SUGGESTIONS
Chapter I-Chapter IV
Acknowledgement (grammar) do not use the first person point of view
Abstract (use past tense)
Citation (remove the last paragraph
Conceptual Framework input it must be “work” process it must be (survey
questionnaire)
Scope and Delimitation (use past tense)
Sample and Sampling technique change the characteristics it must be for the
purpose of the study
Bibliography (follow the APA 7TH ed. In providing your list of have them alphabetically
references arranged.

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 JUNE 7, 2022 BTTE CIVIL TECHNOLOGY GROUP II
Portable Rebar Bender with Bearing with Civil
Works
COMMENTS/SUGGESTIONS
Chapter I-Chapter IV
Acknowledgement do not use the first person point of view
Acknowledgement on the last paragraph (the researchers spirit or add better to have
this on the second paragraph
Citation (last name, et al.)
Conceptual Framework it must be 1.1,1.2
Instead of Dr. Oiga it must be Engr. Oiga
Abstract it must be barangay not barangays

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 JUNE 7, 2022 BTTE CIVIL TECHNOLOGY GROUP III
Adjustable Grinder with Stand for Cutting Metal and
Wood
COMMENTS/SUGGESTIONS
Chapter I-Chapter IV
Acknowledgement (do not use the first person point of view
Significance of the study (workers first)
Related Literature indicate the author

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 JUNE 7, 2022 BTTE CIVIL TECHNOLOGY GROUP IV
Toolbox with stand and wheels for furniture industry
COMMENTS/SUGGESTIONS
Chapter I-Chapter IV
Introduction (be mindful of comma and period)
Acknowledgment (do not use the first person point of view)
Follow the APA 7th edition in providing your references in the Bibliography
Scope and Delimitation of the study (first paragraph “Have the word barangay for
each”)

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JUNE 7, 2022 BTTE CIVIL TECHNOLOGY GROUP V

 COMMENTS/SUGGESTIONS PAGE NO.
PRELIMINARIES
Title page : (Format, Should be Equally divided)

A Technological Research
Presented to the Faculty of I
The Formal Education Department
Valenzuela City Polytechnic College

Acknowledgement : Grammar, Tenses of verbs, punctuation marks, third person point of

view
III
Abstract : Grammar, Tenses of verbs V

CHAPTER I
Introduction : Grammar, tenses of verbs, punctuation marks 1
Conceptual framework : (INPUT - change the word “Working” to “Work”), (PROCESS -
Change “Survey Tools” to “Survey Questionnaire”
4
Scope and Delimitation : Grammar, tenses of verbs, punctuation marks 6
Significance of the Study : Grammar, tenses of verbs, punctuation marks 7
RRL : Grammar, tenses of verbs, punctuation marks 8
Definition of terms : Grammar, tenses of verbs, punctuation marks 14

CHAPTER II
Research Locale : Grammar, tenses of verbs, punctuation marks 17
Product Design : Actual Picture of the product 19
Table 4.2. Product Cost and Components : include the cost of the materials per piece 20
and suggested retail price of the product

CHAPTER III
Table 2.0 : Remove the word “Average” in second column of the table 25
Table 3.1 : 3 decimal places only 26
Table 3.2 : 3 decimal places only 27

CHAPTER IV
Recommendation : Improve the statement in the recommendation based on the findings 30

Dual Function Floor-Based Bar Bending Equipment

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