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Thompson and Ye 1991
Thompson and Ye 1991
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This paper discusses the results of a project to identify the kinds of verbs used in
citations in academic papers, as a basis for developing teaching materials for
non-native-speaker students who need to read or write academic papers.
Categories are suggested for classifying the verbs both in terms of their denota-
tion and of their evaluative potential, in order to illuminate the role that they
play in the evaluation that their presence entails. The ways in which denotation
and evaluative potential interact and some of the effects of the immediate
context (for example, negation) are examined. Particular attention is paid to
the ways in which the writer commits herself to or detaches herselffrom the
reported proposition to varying degrees. Finally, an idealized model of the
'layers of report' that may be involved in citations is presented as a means of
drawing together the various choices available. The model may serve as a
pedagogic image to help the students in understanding or choosing reporting
verbs and, beyond that, in interpreting or conveying evaluation in academic
papers.
1. INTRODUCTION
Following Swales's (1981) pioneering analysis, a great deal of attention has been
paid by EAP (English for Academic Purposes) practitioners to the introduction
sections of academic papers. Various pedagogic images—ways of visualizing the
function of these sections that are easily grasped and utilized by students—have
been suggested, including Swales's (1987, 1990) metaphor of 'creating a
research space' and adaptations of Hoey's (1983) problem-solution pattern;
and various textural threads1 running through the introduction sections (as well
as other parts of the papers) have been analysed: for example, theme choice
(Davies 1988a), verb forms (Tarone etal. 1981), authorial comment (Adams
Smith 1984), tense variation in reporting previous literature (Swales 1990), the
construction of complex noun phrases (Dubois 1982), and so on. Authors such
as Swales (1987) and Davies (1988b) have shown how these insights can be
incorporated into EAP teaching materials.
This focus on the different choices to be made (or interpreted) in the
organization and presentation of introduction sections is reflected in the EAP
reading and writing course being developed at Liverpool University within the
framework outlined in Davies (1988b). Our own research was conceived as part
of the development of this course, with the simple aim of identifying a specific
subset of the lexical items which we felt it would be useful for our students to
know: namely, the verbs used in citations.2
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The number of examples found for each lexical item ranged from 1 (for
example, 'articulate'; 'embark only'; 'relax', in the phrase 'relax this assumption')
to 36 ('show'). None of the verbs that might have been expected to occur were
missing, although some appeared less frequently than would probably have
3. EVALUATION IN CITATIONS
We have mentioned that the aspect of citations which causes most problems for
NNS writers (and readers) is the evaluation that they carry or imply. The
relationship between reporting and evaluation is well established. As Tadros
(1985) points out, the citing of another author predicts (if it does not itself carry)
an evaluation of that author—the writer is, as it were, under a conventional
obligation to justify mentioning the author in the present context.
In order to provide a context for the following discussion of reporting verbs, it
may therefore be useful at this point to summarize and illustrate some of the
relevant aspects of evaluation.
The awareness of the importance of evaluation fits in with a general move
towards viewing text essentially as goal-oriented, interactive, and dynamic
(Sinclair 1985), and as interpretable in sociological terms (see, for example,
Halliday 1978 and Myers 1989). That is, the writer of an academic paper (as of
any other text) has a purpose in constructing her text, a purpose which is con-
veyed both by the choice of information that she presents and by the choice of
the manner in which she presents it. To concentrate only on the information
given—to take it at its face value—would in many cases be to miss or mis-
interpret the purpose. Evaluation in text is the signalling of this purpose.
In the present context, evaluation may be simply defined as the conveying of
the writer's view of the status of the information in her text. Evaluation is an
extremely complex textural thread, which can be visualized rather as Halliday
(1970:331) sees modality, as 'a strand running prosodically through the clause'.
However, evaluation is best seen as working at the discourse level of text rather
than at the grammatical level of the clause: it may hold over relatively long
stretches of text (including over a complete text); it is often cumulative rather
than clearly signalled at any one point in the text; and it may depend crucially on
context (including position within the text). It can be seen as a separate layer of
meaning potential, which, in academic papers at least, is typically realized not by
discrete elements in the text but by utilizing features of elements already present
(or by the absence of expected elements; see below).
To illustrate these points, let us take part of the opening section of Swales'
(1987) paper on the teaching of research paper writing.
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For one thing, these instructors see research-paper teaching as bedeviled with
uncontrollable and abstruse content and enmeshed in disciplinary cultures (Becher
1981) or discourse communities (Herrington 1985) of diversely alien character. And
certainly, given the fissiparous tendencies within late twentieth century graduate
There are terms in this extract which are clearly evaluative: 'bedeviled',
'uncontrollable', 'alien', etc. are all strongly negative, indicating that research-
paper teaching is problematic. It is likely that many NNS readers will pick up the
clearly-signalled negative evaluation and take this as the viewpoint that is being
propounded, as the purpose for which this part of the text has been written.
However, there are also less obvious signals that this is not actually Swales's
view: 'these instructors' suggests that the writer himself is not part of the group
who hold this opinion; 'And certainly' is potentially concessive (with the
possibility of a stronger 'but' to follow). And indeed once the wider context is
given, it becomes apparent that Swales is in fact citing these authors in order to
contradict their view, that his purpose is to indicate, in his own terms, the 'gap in
previous research' (Swales 1981) that his paper will attempt to fill:
One thing that becomes clear on reading the extract sentences in a fuller (though
still not complete) context is the way in which the strongly negative signals
mentioned above—and the other negative signals that occur throughout the first
paragraph—are, as it were, bracketed off into a lower order of significance. At
the same time, the less obvious signals of writer distance (such as the reporting
verb 'see') gain prominence from their place in the major thread of evaluation
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that runs from the message of the title itself to 'Cinderella status' (with its
suggestion of the Fairy Godmother's imminent arrival) to 'equally pressing'
(which is both overtly evaluative and, by marking off a second point of view,
implicitly relegates the 'anxieties and demurrals' to a subsidiary position in the
4.1 Denotation
We carried out the analysis of the reporting verbs under two main headings:
denotation and evaluative potential. Both factors must be taken into account in
understanding the reasons for which writers choose a particular verb; and the
interaction between them is complex, although not always as clear-cut as might
be hoped for analytical purposes.
In this first analysis of denotation, it quickly became evident that many of the
verbs referred to three more or less distinguishable groups of processes: textual,
mental, and research.
Textual: verbs referring to processes in which verbal expression is an obligatory
component; for example, state, write, term, challenge, underline, point out,
name, deny.
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reporting
Figure 1
We should point out, however, that the neat division which has been set up
between Author acts and Writer acts is somewhat misleading. Theorizing
process verbs may also be used to describe Author acts (although the same is
not true of most comparing process verbs)—compare the example of'exemplify'
as Writer act, theorizing, given above, with:
A longer list of feasible levels of questions is exemplified by Adams-Smith (1981),
using the Bloomian taxonomy. [Alderson and Urquhart 1984:xvii] (Author act,
textual)
In addition, we shall see later that many verbs which can be classified as
Author acts are to be interpreted as Writer acts if negated or if used in the report
with a modal verb.
On a different point, it can be argued that Writer acts do not in fact involve
reporting verbs—that in most cases the citation is entirely encapsulated within
the nominal groups in the clause. Although this is certainly a valid alternative
way of viewing these verbs, there are two main reasons for including them
nevertheless as reporting verbs. First, they help to complete the continuum, to
which we shall return in Section 4.5, from recording through reporting to
theorizing. Second, and more important, the choice between Author and Writer
acts is a central factor in evaluation (no less so because the distinction is often
blurred). Much of what goes on in reporting can be more economically analysed
if we have available these two basic categories.
writer's interpretation. The first element in these distinctions, author vs. writer,
serves as a reminder of the two parties involved; while the second, stance vs.
interpretation, reflects two basic modes of evaluation which are simultaneously
open to the writer.
fact not clearly counter-factive, for reasons which will be discussed below, while
two of the other verbs ('confuse' and 'misuse') appear in the same citation. It thus
seems that negative evaluation concerning the truth or correctness of what the
author is reported as saying is not normally overtly carried by the reporting
modal verb). If she chooses an Author act, she establishes her detachment from
what is reported and thus allows herself'evaluative space', opening up a number
of other options in the system of evaluation. She can also choose not to make a
clear-cut choice, particularly if she wishes to mitigate negative evaluation, and
ship between writer and author is supported by the fact that the Non-
interpretation category has a high proportion of research act verbs: to evaluate
the author's research is potentially more face-threatening (Brown and Levinson
1 2 3 4 5 6
writer writer writer author author author
writes evaluates reads writes thinks researches
acts (6). Of course, the separation and relative ordering of author's research (6)
and author's thinking (5) is artificial, but takes into account the kinds of bleeding
that occur between textual and mental verbs and between mental and research
verbs (but not generally between textual and research verbs), and thus expresses
what is presumably a feature of our perception of the processes involved. The
diagram cannot show all the information relating to the type of evaluation
(stance or interpretation), but it does handle clearly the categories of denota-
tion, the crucial distinction between Writer act and Author act, and the choice of
whether or not to introduce explicit evaluation in the reporting verb itself.
Potentially, any combination of the stages can be highlighted by the choice of
reporting verb. We visualize the stages rather like gauze backdrops on a stage:
by a skilful use of lighting, any of the layers of gauze can be brought into focus;
the other layers are still there, but their presence is relatively unnoticed. To give
some examples of verbs expressing different combinations (numbers in
brackets represent layers which are implied but not focused on):
X states that... = 3-4
X believes that... = 3-4-5
X analyses ... = 3-4-5-6
X measures ... = 3-4-6
X measured ... = 3-(4)-6
X adds that... = 2-3-4
X hypothesizes that... = 2-3-4-5-6
X does not mention ... -2-3-(4)
X proves that... = 2-3-4-6
X proved that... = 2-3-(4)-6
X's model accounts for... =1-2-3-4-5
X's claim corresponds to ... =1-2-3-4
The bracketing of 4 where the verb is in the past tense ('X measured' and 'X
proved') is intended to indicate, by contrast with the unbracketed 4 where the
same verb is in the present tense, one effect of tense choice in Author act verbs.
If a writer writes, 'Smith analyzes the results ...', the choice of present tense
indicates, amongst other things, that the writer is referring to the author's text,
since it is a convention that the contents of a text can be reported using the
present tense no matter what the tense used in the original text. This indication is
missing from the verb itself if the past tense is used.
Earlier, we said that the category of reporting verbs was in principle
impossible to delimit. The 'layers of report' diagram and the discussion of tense
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choice suggest why this should be so. The verbs which can report an author's
writing or thinking are, conceivably, enumerable; but it is clear from the diagram
that any verb referring to any action which can be involved in research may
potentially be used as a reporting verb. It could be argued that it would be
5. CONCLUSION
We began our work on this project with the vague preconception that we would
be able to identify a certain number of verbs as reporting verbs (and we already
ACKNOWLEDGEMENT
We are grateful to Florence Davies for providing both the initial stimulus to
undertake this research and support in carrying it through.
NOTES
1
For the concept of texture in text, see for example Halliday and Hasan (1989:70-96).
2
A concrete pedagogic result of this research project is a dictionary of reporting verbs
currently in preparation.
3
One of our NNS students had evolved a simple system: if he disagreed with the quoted
author, he generally wrote 'X says/states ...' (or a similar neutral reporting verb),
sometimes going on to say explicitly that the reported opinion was incorrect; if, on the
other hand, he agreed with the author, he wrote 'X rightly says/states...'. He was happy to
explore with us the possibilities of a more varied range of techniques for conveying his
evaluation.
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4
To simplify matters for readers who might wish to look at the examples in context,
virtually all the examples in this paper are taken from one source rather than spread over
the hundred or so sources from which we collected our data.
5
There are also intermediate cases with impersonal and agentless passive structures
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