Dear Mrs.

Jennifer,
I'm writing this letter to offer you some ideas for how to spend
the money that Mr. Paul is donating to the school.
Firstly, I think some of the money should be spent on the
football field because a lot of people get injured because it’s
made of a solid material. My suggestion is to replace it with a
grass field so that no one gets injured and also because it looks
better.
Secondly, the classroom desks and chairs are not comfortable
at all and most of them are broken. I think they must be
replaced with new ones. because they will grab the parent’s
attention.
Thirdly, some of the money should be spent on the building's
appearance because it looks so rusty and the colours are so
pale. I think if you changed the colours from grey and white to
green and black, it would be better. and would grab the
parent’s attention.
I think the money should be spent that way because it will
make the school more popular and people would love to move
to it.
I hope you agree with these ways to spend the money that Mr.
Paul is going to donate.
Yours sincerely,
Jack.