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Broken Promises
Broken Promises
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by
Isaiah A. Florida
Scene
Time
Monday evening, Present Time
1
ACT 1
Scene 1
RYAN
(He felt cold and nervous then he
said this to himself and sighs)
I hope that my tumor will get better soon, please Lord help
me fight for my life.
DOCTOR LOOSE
DOCTOR LOOSE
RYAN
(Ryan felt really nervous now and he
takes a deep breath)
Okay I wan’t to hear the good news first
DOCTOR LOOSE
RYAN
(He started to cry and lost his hope.
(He wiped his tears using his towel
and started to lose control of his
self.)
But… Please is there a way to cure me?
(He said this in a worried voice)
3
Please do something, I want to live longer, please I’ll pay
you more than anything. Please cure me.
DOCTOR LOOSE
RYAN
(Blackout)
(End of scene)
4
ACT 1
Scene 2
RYAN
(He sees Mesh walking at the streets and
he then approached Mesh trying to start
a conversation)
Hey Mesh, heyy! I didn’t expect to see you here, how have
you been doing?
(He then smiled to Mesh but it was a
forced smile)
MESH
(Mesh was shock to see Ryan and she
can’t believe that they met again)
5
RYAN
(Ryan smiled at her and he looks down
and back to Mesh’s eyes)
Nothing much, and also I’m doing fine Mesh! Thanks for
asking, also I’m surprised that you’re also here!
MESH
Oh! Well I’m about to go to home but then I found you, well
wanna hang out for a bit? It’s been a while since we hanged
out!
RYAN
Well sure! Where do you want us to go?
MESH
Well we could go to a park, and maybe we could find some
small restaurants in there
RYAN
Alright! Also I was just wondering if how’s your health
doing, I’ve heard from your parents from the past few months
that you have heart problems, are you alright?
MESH
Well yeah! I’m glad that I’m doing fine and I’m also healing
now! My doctor told me that I’m now okay soo… yeah!
(She felt guilty after saying that to
him)
RYAN
Okay I’m glad! Let’s go now!
(He smiled to Mesh and he went beside at
the left on Mesh then they started
walking towards the park)
6
(Blackout)
(End of scene)
7
ACT 1
Scene 3
RYAN
(He felt happy when entering the
restaurant, he couldn’t believe
that he spend a time again with
Mesh that was his past crush and
his best friend)
Well we could sit here I guess!
(He then led Mesh to a table to sit
together)
Sooooo what do you want to eat Mesh?
(He then looks at the restaurant menu)
8
MESH
We could try roast beef and a burger!
RYAN
Well that’s okay for me! Let’s also have a cold iced tea!
(He then looks for the waiter and
raised his hand to caught the waiter’s
attention)
Uhm waiter!
WAITER
(He walks towards their table)
What do you want to have for today’s evening sir?
RYAN
We want 2 burgers and 2 roast beef, we would also like to
have a cold iced tea
WAITER
Okay please wait for a few minutes for the food to be served
(He then walks away and went to the
chef’s room to report the chef on
what to cook and serve)
RYAN
Alright thank you!
MESH
(He then looked at Ryan’s eyes)
Don’t worry, I’ll pay for us tonight!
9
RYAN
Well it’s okay I was also willing to pay but alright! Thank
you! I’ll make sure to pay you back when we could spend
another time together!
(He then smiled to Mesh but then he look
down at the table looking upset)
MESH
(She looked at Ryan and she felt that
something is bothering him)
Hey Ryan…? Are you okay? You don’t look okay
(She also felt a bit worried to Ryan)
RYAN
Oh, well… yeah! I’m okay! I’m just worried about few things
though but I’m all good!
(He smiled a bit to Mesh but he couldn’t
make himself to get comfortable about
his health problems)
Let’s just enjoy our time together!
MESH
Okay, but I’m a bit worried though, you seem to have some
things going on, just open up to me when you need something.
To be honest, I’m kind of happy now that we met again! You
know… it’s been a while since we met and spent time
together! I did not expect that I could meet you this night!
RYAN
Don’t worry about me, I’m alright! I’m also kinda happy that
I met you again! Let’s just enjoy our time this night and
probably in the future! And yeah, we should probably hang
out more just like in the past!
10
MESH
Alright! Just tell me when you need something!
WAITER
(He holds the tray with the food on
it then he went toward’s Ryan and
Mesh’s table)
Here’s the food you ordered!
(He started to place the plate with
their food on it at the table)
MESH
Thank you!
RYAN
Hey Mesh! Thanks for the food! I’m sorry but I have to go
home as soon as possible because I have things to do, well I
can take you home though!
MESH
Sure! And also thanks for the time too! You can take me
home! And yeah we could just use messenger app to talk in
there!
(End of scene)