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Which document? Which page?
Core 61
Core 258
Core 257
Core 251
Core 247
Core 216
Core 51
Core 10
Core 14
Core 49-58
Core 257 on page (2
Core 63
Core 260
Sheets 1
Sheets 1
Sheets 1-?
Core 31
Core 55
Core 99
Core 105
Core Downtime > Re
Core 155
Core 12
Core 183 and 205
Core 223
Sheets 232
Core 250
Core Starts at 256
Core 55 and 265
Core character creat
Core Various
Core 28
Core 303
Details
"If you're sure, you're human"
I guess it is "If you're not sure... "
Under "Tear gas", it says "mucus membranes" rather than "mucous membranes".
Under "Glow", it says "Users eyes", rather than "User's eyes".
Under "White ICe",
First paragraph, it says
it says "(bans
"...to gain are typically
get more litied
direct to your- device
access" and/or"gain"
delete either your IDN)." I suspect it was meant to be "l
or "get".
Fourth paragraph, fifth line: "...to have of a chance..." - delete "of".
Under "Don't hold back...", I think between sentence three and four a space is missing. It also says "It means they n
"This game is yours.." in the heading of the grey box - I don't know why there are two full stops there, rather than on
Final sentence on page (in bold) - lacks a full stop.
Under "SR Player Primer", I suggest adding a note that this game is not a down-scaling of SR, but that the underlyi
they're blank
deepsight drops should not cause level-1 harm
TRADE"Ultrasonic
Under background is not
lure", explained,
it says "The GM butmay
is present
make a onfortune
the sheets. expect
roll when bugsTRADE to be LABOR
get within
sight of it, to see whether they frenzy the device or not." This is weirdly phrased - are they meant to frenzy at the de
test
test
make form-fillable please
Harm section:
and plating as first sentence
features of the section, the first letter of the sentence is bold and shouldn't be.
(the latter
requires bulletproof)."
The controlled position example lists 4/5 twice, it should list 4/5 once and 1-3 once.
Paragraph labeled "Risky", the text "1-3 Harm + Complication" should all be bold.
Says remanded to custody of law enforcement at wanted level 4, but what if caught by Mafia?
Example using WRECK on the right hand side, "hr" should be replaced with "her".
On page 168, it says that a fixer gets nuyen equal to tier +1 after a run, but page 112 says that fixers usually expec
Both of these sections are titled "Chapter 6"
The word "ob" should be replaced with "on"
A large number of leading parenthesis are bold when they shouldn't be
I don't understand what this sentence means?
All
Pageleft265
parenthesis
description starting on this
of plating haspage are bold
following and they
"Requires shouldn't be.
Bulletproof. (This continues
Incompatible for several
with lifelike Countspages.)
as two (comple
Suggesting it would take three implant selections to obtain both bulletproof and plating
permutations lists one filled trauma box as positive; it should presumably be negative like in the handouts
We
yourdoownnotterms
feel that harm or
or exploit rolling is appropriate for all surgery. Adding features to an existing implant should be re
a dominant
advantage"
foci description has typo
or perhaps "tied to".

hould be "they need".

on is Blades.

y in its presence...?

nuyen. Recommend changing the wording on page 112 to say "fixers usually expect a cut of at least 1 nuyen"

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