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English 11-12 v.2
English 11-12 v.2
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2. Suggested Connectors
Adding ideas again also and similarly too in addition
besides correspondingly equally like likewise in like manner
firstly, etc. further furthermore moreover in the same way
contrasting but on the other hand conversely however otherwise on the contrary
ideas contrary yet instead nevertheless still unlike whereas
showing order afterwards at the same time before thereafter thereupon meanwhile
in time earlier eventually henceforth now presently then
immediately later
making a accordingly as a result consequently therefore thus in fact
conclusion finally for this reason hence so it follows that then
in conclusion indeed
Fused (a.k.a. run-on) sentences – found where two or more normal independent clauses are combined without any form of
punctuation or coordinating conjunction. There are few different ways to fix a fused sentence: add a period between to separate an
independent clause from the rest of the sentence, add a semicolon between two independent clauses, or add a coordinating
conjunction. If the coordinating conjunction is added to the beginning of a sentence making one of the clauses dependent, then a
comma is needed at the end of the dependent clause separating it from the independent one. If the coordinating conjunction is
added in between the two clauses then no comma is needed.
Semicolon – used to indicate separation between parts or members of a sentence more distinct than that marked by a comma.
- Use a semicolon to separate two independent clauses, which are closely related in meaning.
- Use a semicolon between items in a series.
- Use a semicolon between independent clauses that are joined by conjunctive adverbs. The semicolon always comes before the
conjunctive adverb and a comma after the adverb.
7. Pronoun-Antecedent Agreement
There are four main guidelines to follow to ensure pronoun-antecedent agreement.
1) It should be clear to the reader what the pronoun is referring to (i.e. the antecedent must be identified and the pronoun refers to
only one antecedent)
2) Make sure they agree in number (i.e. both are plural or both singular)
3) Make sure they agree in person (i.e. both are first, second, or third person)
4) Make sure they agree in gender (i.e. both are neutral, masculine, or feminine)
8. Subject-Verb Agreement
- Make sure that verbs, subject, and related nouns and pronoun agree in number (either singular subject-verb or both plural).
- If subjects are joined by “and” then they use plural verbs.
- If subjects are treated as a unit then they use singular verbs.
- An “s” at the end of a noun makes it plural, but an “s” at the end of a verb makes it singular.
- Make sure that verbs, subject, and related nouns and pronoun agree in person (either first, second, or third person).
9. Modifiers
Modifiers can be an adjective, adverb, phrase or clause that explains another word or word group.
Misplaced modifiers –in the wrong position within a sentence, which may slightly or greatly change the meaning of the sentence. A
misplaced modifier can be corrected by moving it near the word(s) it is meant to clarify.
- Limiting modifiers –can be fixed by inserting it immediately before the word it is meant to clarify. Ex- almost, even, hardly, just,
nearly, only.
- A misplaced modifier can cut in between the subject and the verb (or verb-subject). It must be moved outside of the subject/verb so
that there is no awkward interruption in the sentence.
- Split infinitive modifier – cuts in between “to” and the verb of an infinitive. Examples of infinitives are “to eat”, “to swim”, etc. A
split infinitive does not have to be moved if it is a single word, but it should be if it is a word group so that the “to” will be
directly followed by its verb.
Dangling modifiers – a word group that does not modify any specific word in the sentence, or (worse) modifies the wrong word.
Unlike a misplaced modifier, a dangling modifier cannot simply be moved to another part of the sentence. Instead, the sentence
may need to be reworded.
Squinting modifiers – can modify a word(s) after and before it which makes it unclear which word(s) the modifier refers to. The
sentence needs to be reworded so that the modifier only refers to one of the two possibilities.
10. Apostrophe
The two major uses of the apostrophe are 1) to indicate a possessive relationship between two nouns, and 2) to indicate contractions.
Possessive – to indicate possessive to most singular nouns, the word then the apostrophe then s is used. For plural nouns, only the
apostrophe is added to the end of the word.
- The above rule applies even for proper nouns, letters, numbers, and nouns that end with s, z, or x.
- If closely related nouns both possess a common object, then only the second entity takes the possessive form. If not (i.e. if the
related noun is plural) then both entities take possessive form.
- In compound words the final word takes the possessive form.
- Do not use apostrophes for possessive pronouns or for noun plurals (i.e. do not say her’s, hours’)
Exceptions: the following exceptions to the above general rules use only an apostrophe at the end of the word.
- When a singular form of the noun ends with s and the plural is the same (i.e. politics’ focus).
- Name of an organization ends with s (i.e. United States’ property).
- Names that end with an unpronounced s (i.e. Descartes’ literature).
Contractions – the apostrophe is used to indicate the omission of some letters.
- common contractions: he’s (he is), I’m (I am), o’clock (on the clock)
- when contracting years, the first two digits are replaced (2007 becomes ’07).
Common errors
- Whose not who’s is the possessive form of who.
- It’s mean it is and is not and is not a possessive form of it. Its is the possessive form of it.
- Apostrophe does not form a plural (i.e. correct: Many tourists are, not many tourist’s are)
- Apostrophe does not form a third person verb (i.e. correct: Jefferson takes the, not Jefferson take’s the)
Other uses of an apostrophe
- Where lower case letters are used as words or abbreviations (i.e. correct: x’s and y’s)
- Where both capital and lower case letters are used to form plural (i.e. correct: Ph.D’s)
When not to use an apostrophe
- Capital letters are used as words (i.e. correct: the four Es)
- Abbreviations that contain no interior periods (i.e. correct: PCs)
- Numerals used as nouns (i.e. correct: the 1700s)
2. Point of View
First person point of view – “I woke up this morning and went to school.”
- The narrator is a major or minor character in the story.
- The narrator reveals only his feelings, thoughts, or information that has been directly received from other characters.
- Knowledge is limited to what he hears and sees.
- Tone is personal an intimate.
- Letters, memoirs, and diaries are generally in the first person.
- Words used frequently are I, me, my, we, our, and us.
Third person point of view – “Jenny stayed home from school this morning. She didn’t feel well.”
- The narrator is an outsider, not a character in the story.
- The narrator uses words like he, she, his, her, and they.
- There are three types of third person point of view:
1. Omniscient – all knowing; knows the thoughts of all the characters.
2. Limited – the narrator enters the mind of only one major or minor character.
3. Objective or factual – knows only what is external to the characters.
3. Stylistic Devices
Abnormal Word Order - gives variety and emphasis to writing by changing the usual subject-verb sentence pattern. EXAMPLE:
normal word order (subject-verb): “The actor’s worst nightmares stood laughing at him from the shadows.” Abnormal word order
(verb-subject): “Laughing at him from the shadows stood the actor’s worst nightmare.”
Allegory – a narrative in which the characters and sometimes the setting represent general concepts and ideas. EXAMPLE: fables in
which personified animals are used allegorically to teach lessons of human conduct (i.e. “The Hare and the Tortoise”).
Alliteration – draws attention to a string of words through repetition of their initial sounds. EXAMPLE: “As Frankenstein, Boris
Karloff rambled, raged, and roared.”
Allusion – a direct or indirect reference to a well-known event, person, thing, place, or quality. By suggestion, it may enhance the
significance of a poetic image or prose passage. EXAMPLE: T.S. Eliot’s The Wasteland alludes to the Garden of Eden after the fall.
Analogy – helps the reader understand something unfamiliar by comparing it to something well-known. EXAMPLE: Comparing an
anthill to an urban centre helps to convey the fact that anthills are heavily populated, busy, and have regular patterns of
movement.
Balanced Sentence – expresses two or more equal and parallel ideas. EXAMPLE: “Many TV actors work hard all through the season;
they play in films all through the hiatus.”
Biased Language – Bias is the predisposition if a writer toward the particular subject about which he/she is writing. Often this bias is
established through the specific words that the writer uses. The dictionary definition, or literal meaning, of a word is called its
denotation. It addition to this many words have implied meanings. Each of these implied meanings is the connotation of the word.
EXAMPLE: All of the following words have very similar denotations but their connotations are very different: perfume, scent,
odour, and stench. The first two words have positive connotations while the last two have negative connotations.
Climatic Word Order – presents several facts in order from least to most important. EXAMPLE: “The young politician’s career rise
was meteoric; after beginning as a municipal councillor, she became mayor, and three short years later a Member of Parliament.”
Hyperbole – an overstatement or exaggeration which helps to emphasize a point. EXAMPLE: I have a million things to do.
Image/Imagery – appeals to one or more of the senses by creating a vivid impression through the use of concrete details, adjectives,
and figures of speech (i.e. metaphor, simile, personification). EXAMPLE: The beauty of the daisy is conveyed using imagery such
as “nun demure” and “a silver shield with boss of gold.” (William Woodsworth, “I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud”).
Irony – the use of a word or phrase to mean the exact opposite of its literal meaning.
- verbal irony – saying the opposite of what you think (sarcasm, hypocrisy).
- dramatic irony – the audience knows something opposite to what the characters think.
- situational irony – the opposite of what we expect happens (i.e. a fireman’s house burns down).
Isolation – calls attention to a word or phrase by isolating it in a “sentence” by itself. EXAMPLE: We were assaulted by the heat.
Bullied.
Mimicry – the manipulation of sounds and sentence structure to imitate meaning. EXAMPLE: a long flowing sentence with lots of “m”,
“l”, and “n” sounds to mimic a river in description. Or, explosive sentences and sounds like “k”, “b”, and “g” can be used to
mimic the sound of a battle.
Metaphor – compares two things without the use of like or as; it is a more subtle than the simile and thus requires more interpretation.
EXAMPLE: “Tyger! Tyger! Burning bright” (from William Blake’s poem “Tyger! Tyger!”)
Opposites – contrast two opposing ideas.
Onomatopoeia – draws attention to the sound of the word by imitating or suggesting sounds that correspond to its meaning.
EXAMPLE: “buzz”, “splash”, “slurp”.
Oxymoron – places words that mean the opposite of one another side by side so that they create a new meaning. EXAMPLE: “jumbo
shrimp”, “wise fool”.
Parallel Structure (Parallelism) – repeats specific words, phrases, or clauses in a series or clauses in a series, giving emphasis to key
words and making them memorable. EXAMPLE: Abraham Lincoln’s “government of the people, by the people, for the people”
(preposition, define article, and noun are repeated in a series).
Periodic Sentence – withholds an important part of the sentence until the end so that it doesn’t make complete sense until the last
word is read. EXAMPLE: “Whether playing a young wild adventurer, a fugitive from the law, or a U.S. president, there is one actor
whose films always make money – Harrison Ford.”
Personification – gives human traits to an inanimate object or animal. EXAMPLE: “The fingers of ice scrapped the window.”
Pun – a play on words with the same sound but different meanings. EXAMPLE: “Sticks float. They would.”
Repetition – repeating words or phrases for emphasis or rhyme. EXAMPLE: English class is very, very, very fun.
Reversals (chiasmus) – make a balanced sentence even more memorable by repeating the words in reverse order. EXAMPLE: “Ask not
what your country can do for you; ask what you can do for your country” (John F. Kennedy).
Rhetorical Question – asked merely for effect with either no answer expected or an obvious answer implied. EXAMPLE: Can anyone
deny that the microchip has revolutionized communication?
Rhyme – makes two or more words memorable by having endings that sound the same. EXAMPLE: “With might and right on his side,
he approached the challenge.”
Rhythm – is the movement implicit in an arrangement of words. EXAMPLE: a regular beat deriving from the patterns of stress on the
syllables, a rising or a falling inflection, a series of phrases that move quickly or slowly.
Sentence Fragment – places emphasis on key words to create an overall effect, such as humour or suspense.
Simile – points out a similarity between two unlike things using like or as.
Symbol – is an object or action that represents something other than what it is, such as an abstract idea or concept. EXAMPLE: dove =
peace.
Understatement (aka litotes) – creates the reverse effect (and adds a touch of irony) by making the fact seem less significant.
EXAMPLE: Jalapeno peppers may make your mouth tingle a bit.
4. Literary Terms
Antagonist – major opponent in conflict with the main character.
Archetype – a universal theme or character type which reoccurs in literature.
Aside - a short passage spoken in undertone to audience while others are on stage.
Atmosphere – feeling created, the mood (happy, mysterious, tarrying, etc.)
Catharsis – an emotional draining of the audience when watching a tragedy.
Chorus (aka Refrain) – 1. a group of characters in a play who speak in unison. 2. a line/stanza repeated in a song/poem.
Climax – highest point of emotional interest; conflict comes to a “head.”
Comic Relief – a comic element in a tragedy to relieve tension.
Crisis – turning point in rising action – fortunes of characters change for better or worse.
Falling Action – ending plot (after the climax); the “fallout” of the climax.
Foil – a character used for strong contrast to emphasise qualities of another character.
Foreshadowing – a hint of coming events.
Hubris – the pride of the tragic hero that leads him to his downfall, despite warnings.
Iambic Pentameter – a line of verse, 10 syllables, first syllables unaccented, second syllable accented. EXAMPLE: Now
old/desire/doth in/his death/bed lie.
Monologue – long speech of two very unlike things.
Motif – a recurring element (symbol, image, etc.) within a work.
Nemesis – a character receives a just punishment for evil deeds.
Paradox – a statement that appears contradictory but contains a basis of truth. EXAMPLE: My only love sprung from my only hate.
Pathetic Fallacy – when the natural & animal world reflects what’s happening in the human world. Example: rain during a funeral.
Pathos – when extreme pity or sorrow is evoked in a work. EXAMPLE: when Romeo & Juliet both die.
Poetic Justice – justice as one wishes it to be – good are rewarded and evil are punished.
Prose – written/spoken language as opposed to verse (poetic language).
Protagonist – main character.
Satire – to make fun of flaws in people/society/institution in the hopes of improving it.
Setting – time and place.
Soliloquy – a speech made by an actor alone on stage revealing innermost thoughts.
Theme – the message the author is trying to communicate.
Tone – author’s attitude toward a subject he/she is writing about.
Tragic Hero – Shakespeare’s definition: noble birth, extraordinary character, strong body/mind, high social/political stature,
admirable, potential for greatness.
Tragic Flaw – the hero’s has potential for greatness, but his tragic flaw leads to his downfall. EXAMPLE: Macbeth’s flaw is
ambition/greed.
Verse – poetic language.
5. Close-Reading
When reading a poem, you need to ask three big questions:
1. What is the poem about? (Content)
2. How is it written? (Form. and Style)
3. Why did the poet choose to write it this way (seeing the relationship between content, form, and style)
This handout assumes that you analysis is far enough along that you are developing a firm grasp of the content of the poem, It is meant
to help you with form and style. There are two primary things to remember when looking at the form and style of the poem:
a. Poets make conscious choices about form and style. They often use form and style to emphasize important ideas.
b. Form and style serve content. The observations you make concerning style and form must make sense in terms of the content of
the poem. Always start your analysis with content.
Style includes things like repetition, imagery, metaphors, irony, symbol, alliteration and so on. When reading for style, look first for
anything that might be repeated (because repetition is both the simplest and the most effective form of emphasis in writing). Are
specific words, phrases, lines. or even entire stanzas repeated? Are certain ideas repeated but in different words? Do certain
images recur?
Then look at how the poet uses imagery. Images generally are used to help the reader see, hear, taste, touch, or smell what is being
described Images are sensory experiences created with words, They fall into three categories: literal imagery, figurative imagery,
mid aural imagery.
Literal imagery – a detailed description of the reality of the thing, scene or situation. Details are limited to the thing itself. Literal
images appeal directly to one or more of the five senses.
Figurative imagery – a figurative image compares the thing that is being described to something else. Most common figures of
speech: simile, metaphor, personification, hyperbole, and oxymoron.
Aural imagery – aural images use common sound techniques to create interest emphasis. They appeal to our ears and are easier to
spot if we read the poem out loud. Most common devices: alliteration, assonance, consonance, onomatopoeia, rhyme, near rhyme,
and rhythm.
Diction and word choke are also important. All words have both denotations a connotations. Identify some of the key words in the
poem and ask yourself why the poet night have chosen one word over another for its connotation.
Phrasing and sentence structure refer to how sentences are put together to emphasize certain words or to create interesting effects.
Take these two sentences, for example: 1) Ice cream is my favourite treat. 2) My favourite treat is ice cream. The first sentence
places greater emphasis on "ice cream." A number of short or fragmented sentences can create an effect of breathlessness or
uncertainty. Similarly, a sequence of longer sentences can create a meditative or solemn tone. Also, look for how the poet might
intentionally violate the rules of proper punctuation and sentence structure to achieve certain effects. Look for the intentional
fragment or run-on.
As for your analysis of form, once you have made a number of observations concerning style, you must decide which are important
and which are not. As a general rule, if you believe that the, poet made a conscious and deliberate decision to manipulate style in
the way you have observed, include the observation in your analysis. If you think that the effect was accidental, exclude it.
Remember, not all of your initial observations will be of equal importance. Some will be relatively insignificant and should not be
included in your final analysis.
III. CRITICAL EVALUATION OF FICTION
1. Methods for a Critical Evaluation of Fiction
Close-reading - To develop an understanding of a text by reading it carefully and examining "clues" within the text to support (or
create) various readings or interpretations.
Premise (central belief): The best way to understand a text is to read it yourself instead of relying on experts. The text alone is the
source of meaning. Background information and/or "expert" readings are beside the point of interpretation. Close-reading
develops the reader's understanding of a text by looking at the relationship between different parts of the text and by emphasizing
the process of reading. Close-reading commonly asks the reader to use evidence within the text to support what the reader
identifies as the text's central theme(s). The role of the teacher is to assess the student-reader's interpretation of the evidence. A
reading is "wrong" only if evidence is misinterpreted or ignored. The text itself determines the "rightness" or "wrongness" of the
reading. The strength (or weakness) of an interpretation depends entirely on the student-reader's ability to examine evidence
within the text.
Sample: Romeo and Juliet criticizes rash and hasty decisions by showing how they inevitably create problems and how they can lead
to disaster. The play is full of characters who make hasty decisions they later live to regret. Prince Escalus institutes a law
whereby fighting will be punishable by death. He lives to regret this decision when Romeo kills Tybald. Why? Romeo simply did
to Tybalt what the law would have done. After all, Tybalt killed Mercutio. Romeo similarly lives to regret a hasty decision: the
decision to kill Tybalt. Friar Laurence decides to marry Romeo and Juliet, even though he advises Romeo to go "wisely and slow;
they stumble that run fast." Later he makes another hasty decision to help Juliet avoid marriage to Paris by giving her the potion
that would enable her to fake her death. Both of these decisions he lives to regret because he sees how they directly contributed to
the deaths of the two lovers. Lord Capulet hastily decides to force Juliet to many Paris after the death of Tybalt, even though
earlier in the play he understood the importance of consulting Juliet over any potential spouse. After her death, he understands his
error. Because Romeo and Juliet is full of instances of rash decisions that lead to disaster, clearly we are intended to conclude that
we should never make snap decisions.
Contextual criticism - To see the text in relation to the place and time in which it was written, the place(s) and time(s) it features, the
author, and other texts created by the same author
Premise (central belief): A text is not created in a vacuum, it is a product of the place and time in which it was written. Therefore, an
understanding of the historical and cultural context in which a text was created can help the reader to interpret the text more
insightfully. Also, since texts might make references to other places and times, an understanding, of these places and times can be
vital to interpretation. Briefly, a text cannot be fully understood unless the reader also understands the context: when the text was
written, where (and about where), and also by whom.
Sample: In Romeo and Juliet, Lord Capulet is willing to consider Paris' wish to marry Juliet, even though Juliet has not yet turned
fourteen. A modern audience might assume that Lord Capulet is an inconsiderate father. However, in Shakespeare's time, most
young women were married by Juliet's age and, as Paris points out in Act 1, scene 2, "Younger than she are happy mothers
made." Later in the same scene, Lord Capulet advises Paris to woo Juliet and "get her heart" because his own will "to her consent
is but a part." In other words, Lord Capulet is unwilling to agree to Paris' proposal unless Juliet is willing to marry him. An
understanding of the power of the father in Shakespeare's time, helps the reader to see that an Elizabethan audience would have
seen Lord Capulet as a kind and unusually considerate man.
Social criticism - To judge the value of text on how well it critiques society and stimulates the reader's social conscience so that
positive social changes might occur.
Premise (central belief): The primary purpose of literature should be to make the world a better place (not just to entertain). Therefore,
the worth of a text can be assessed by how well the text might contribute to positive changes in society. A text should hold up a
mirror to the reader's society and aim to destroy any illusions the reader might have about that society. Social criticism examines
how a text reveals the underlying forces of society and judges a text on how well it does this. Social criticism often examines
power: who has it, who doesn't, and whether the way that power is distributed and exercised is fair and responsible. Feminist and
Marxist criticism are two common forms of social criticism
Sample: Romeo and Juliet demonstrates the danger of focussing power and authority in one person. Prince Escalus is responsible for
making and enforcing laws in Verona. Early in the play, Prince Escalus tries to stop the feud between the Capulets and the
Montagues by implementing a law that promises to punish public fighting with death: "If ever you disturb our streets again, your
lives will pay the forfeit of the peace." Clearly the law is flawed because the punishment (death) is too severe for the crime
(fighting). According to Escalus’s law, any person who fights will die, even if the skirmish is minor. Because Escalus has
absolute power, he can pass such a law quickly, without consulting with others and without even giving himself time to consider a
more workable solution.
Deconstruction - To reveal the underlying values of a text and to hold those values up to scrutiny (critical examination).
Premise (central belief): All texts present the audience with a system of values and beliefs. Some of these will be stated, but others
willy simply be implied. Unless readers identify and examine the values and beliefs supported by the text they may be influenced
by them without knowing. Therefore, it is the responsibility of the reader to examine and evaluate the text by assessing the
validity of the values and beliefs that the text presents.
Sample: One of the underlying values suggested by Romeo and Juliet is that love is worth dying for. Romeo takes poison because he
believes that Juliet is dead. When Juliet awakens and finds Romeo dead at her side, she stabs herself with his dagger. In spite of
the fact that the two young people commit suicide, they are held up as praiseworthy models, not only by other characters in the
play, but by Shakespeare himself. Capulet is anxious to build a monument to Romeo; Montague is equally anxious to build a
monument to Juliet. Shakespeare validates deaths of Romeo and Juliet by having the warring families cease their feud because of
these deaths. Romeo and Juliet glorifies suicide. This is a dangerous value to advance for a number of reasons, not the least of
which being that the majority of problems are amplified instead of solved by suicide. It also suggests that conflict cannot be
resolved until a disaster takes place. Is this a useful way to approach conflict?
Level 3 - The writer has a strong understanding of the text and the ideas it advances but one or two minor gaps or errors exist; the
writer analyzes the text and the issue at stake intelligently and critically but not always thoroughly. The writer may have
performed outside research but minor gaps or problems in support exist. The writer.
• Has a strong understanding of the text examined, accurately identifies the text's focus and almost all of its central ideas: there are
no major errors or gaps in understanding; summarizes the text in a way that would give the reader a clear, mostly accurate and
mostly complete picture of the original text.
• Critically evaluates the quality of argumentation in the text that is being examined; identifies and discusses most of the major
strengths and weaknesses of argumentation; uses the vocabulary of analysis accurately but with one or two minor lapses or errors;
not distracted by irrelevant or minor points
• Critically assess the proposals or ideas presented by using appropriate critical thinking strategies; looks at the issues at stake from
a variety of perspectives but does not go much beyond the arguments and evidence suggested by the original article; very minor
areas of overlap between the evaluation of ideas and the evaluation of argumentation
• Advances his or her own opinion on the text ant the ideas it contains; provides reasonable arguments and supports these
arguments with evidence; evidence is mostly strong and credible but not always; key claims are mostly supported using logic
and/or evidence but minor gaps in thinking, explanation, proof and/or research exist.
Level 2 - The writer has an acceptable grasp of the text and the ideas it advances but problematic gaps or errors exist; the writer's
analysis of the text is mostly sound but may contain important problems or may not be thorough. When advancing his or her own
opinion, the writer has workable arguments and tries to support them but the evidence might not be sufficient and/or entirely
credible. The writer does most or all of the following:
• Understands the "broad strokes" (i.e. thesis and most obvious arguments) of the text being examined; gaps or errors in
understanding might exist but the writer does understand the text as a whole; the text is summarized in a way that the reader
would have a clear but flawed or incomplete picture of the intent of the original text
• Evaluates the quality of argumentation in the original text, identifies some of the major strengths and weaknesses of
argumentation; attempts to use the vocabulary of analysis but lapses or errors exist; sometimes is distracted by minor points or
irrelevant ideas but mostly stays on track
• Assesses the proposals or ideas presented by the original text but might struggle to do this thoroughly and/or from a wide enough
variety of perspectives; tends to simply agree or disagree with the arguments presented in the original text rather than looking for
his/her own arguments on the issue; some tendency to repeat ideas contained in the evaluation of argumentation
• Advances his or her own opinion on the text by using reasonable arguments; evidence to support these arguments exists but, there
are several gaps or problems with thinking, support, explanation and/or research.
Level 1 - The writer is starting to grasp the major ideas of the text but numerous and significant gaps and/or errors in interpretation
exist. The writer advances his or her own opinion arid has some grasp of how to structure and support his/her own arguments but
there are significant problems with explanation, proof and support.
• Understands the central point of the text being analyzed but struggles to describe the text's details accurately and/or thoroughly;
the summary would give the reader a very flawed or incomplete picture of the original text but it nevertheless identifies the
overall point
• Attempts an evaluation of argumentation but struggles to identify the most important strengths and weaknesses of the text being
examined; is starting to use the vocabulary of analysis; may wander off topic or pay too much attention to relatively minor points
• Attempts to evaluate the ideas presented by the original text but the analysis is simplistic, underdeveloped, poorly thought out or
biased; tends to stick to one or two perspectives; repeats the ideas, arguments and evidence of the writer of the original article
rather than looking for his/her own evidence and arguments
• Advances his or her own opinion on the text and attempts to support it with arguments; arguments are frequently unworkable due
to problems in thinking or support.
Sub-level 1 - The writer does not understand the text that is being examined or think critically about it in a meaningful way.
• Does not understand the central point of the text being analyzed; the summary of this text is highly misleading
• If an attempt to evaluate the argumentation is made, the writer does not understand the major strengths and weaknesses of the
arguments and evidence used in the original text
• If an attempt to evaluate the ideas is made, the writer presents disjointed, illogical, inaccurate and ill-supported points • if an
opinion is advanced, it is untenable, poorly developed, poorly explained or poorly supported.
The following questions are used to evaluate if a reconstruction is a valid reformulation of the argument:
1. Does the reconstruction capture the apparent meaning of the original argument?
2. Does the reconstruction provide more clarity?
3. Does it arrive at a conclusion that follows from the premises?
4. Does it avoid false and highly questionable premises?
5. Does it include all premises that are explicitly stated or strongly suggested?
6. Does it include all implicit premises that bring out underlying assumptions or presuppositions?
3. Methods of Reasoning
Valid argument – a deductive argument is valid if and only if it is impossible for all the premises to be true and the conclusion to be
false. There is no counterexample showing that the premises are true and the conclusion is false. In causal reasoning, “internal
validity” exists when a conclusion is made more likely by employing a research design that eliminates threats to it, by using
random assignment to experimental and control groups or other means of ruling out confounds such as maturation, specific
historical circumstance or regression towards a mean; in arguments involving sampling, “external validity” exists when the results
obtained can be applied outside the specific situation investigated, for example, when properties of a sample can be generalized to
the larger population of interest to the research. “External validity” is also applied more generally to situations in which controlled
experiments can be justifiably applied to the real world. “Construct validity” exists to the extent that the method of measuring or
operational definition adequately captures the concept.
Sound argument – a valid deductive argument in which the conclusion follows (that is, the conclusion follows) and all premises are
true, and hence the conclusion is true as well.
Successful argument – a deductive argument is successful if it is sound and is legitimately persuasive. An inductive argument is
successful if its premises make the conclusion likely, its premises are true, and it is legitimately persuasive.
Consistency – a group of statements is consistent if it is possible for all of them to be true at the same time. If it is impossible for all of
them to be true simultaneously, then the statements are inconsistent. Conversely, inconsistency is defined as a set of statements
that is impossible for all to be true simultaneously. In the case where there are no rows in a truth table where all the premises are
true, we say that the premises are inconsistent, that is, there is no possible case in which they are jointly true. However, arguments
with such an inconsistent set of premises are said to be valid because there will be no case in which all the premises are true and
the conclusion is false simply as a consequence of there being no case in which all the premises are true.
Deductive reasoning – the class of reasoning that uses a general principle (premise) that most people would agree on and applies it to
specific cases in order to draw a thesis (conclusion) about that specific case. The persuasiveness of a deductive argument depends
largely on how generally true and accepted the major premise is. It is an argument in which the premises are put forward to
guarantee the truth of the conclusion in the strong sense that it is logically impossible for the premises all to be true and the
conclusion to be false.
The following are some common successful deductive argument patterns. The capital letters A, B, C refer to whole
statements and the below first five patterns are statement-based. In the latter two patterns, P 1, P2, and P3 refer to parts of
statements. The lower case m stands for a name or description and can be seen as subjects that fit with a predicate. These are
predicate-based patterns.
Counter-example (aka counter-instance) – as a criticism of a premise that expresses a universal generalization (for example, of the
form “A P1s are P2s), a clear example of a P1 that is not a P2. In a deductive argument, a counter-example is a clear case in which
the premises are all true and the conclusion is false. It can be an argument that shares the same pattern as the one in question, or
for an argument pattern itself, it can be a truth table assignment or a Venn diagram configuration.
Conditional argument – a statement of the if-then form, represented by “A→B” in informal language. The “if” part is the antecedent
and the “then” part is the consequent.
Modus Ponens (Latin for “mode of affirming) – a common, valid argument form in which we “affirm the antecedent” of a conditional
statement and is represented by 1) If A, then B. 2) A. ⸫ B.
Modus Tollens (Latin for “mode of denying”) – a common, valid argument form in which we “deny the consequent” of a conditional
statement and is represented by 1) If A, then B. 2) Not B. ⸫ Not A.
Chain argument – has the pattern 1) A. 2) If A, then B. 3) If B, then C. ⸫ C.
Hypothetical argument – has the pattern 1) If A, then B. 2) If B, then C. ⸫ If A, then C.
Disjunctive argument – has the pattern 1) Either A or B. 2) Not A. ⸫ B.
Predicate instantiation – has the pattern 1) All P1s are P2s. 2) m is a P1. ⸫ m is a P2.
Universal syllogism – has the pattern 1) All P1s are P2s. 2) All P2s are P3s. ⸫ All P1s are P3s.
Statistical syllogism – has the pattern 1) Most P1s are P2s. 2) m is a P1. (likely) m is a P2.
Proof – a chain of reasoning in accordance with a set of rules for natural deduction.
Modus Ponens Rule - In a proof, if □ is justified and □ → ∆ is justified, then ∆ is justified.
Conjunction Rule – In a proof, if □ is justified and ∆ is justified, then □ & ∆ is justified.
Quantifier Interchange Rule – In a proof, if ¬ (x) □ is justified, then (∃x) ¬ □ is justified.
Rule of Indirect Proof (aka reduction ad absurdum) – In a proof, if adding □ to a set of justified assertions leads to a contradiction (∆
& ¬ ∆), then ¬ □ is justified.
Non-deductive reasoning – the class of reasoning that includes inductive, causal, analogical, and convergent arguments.
Inductive reasoning (aka empirical reasoning) – uses specific and verifiable evidence to reach a broader (more general) conclusion or
thesis, which on the basis of the evidence is agreed to be true. An inductive argument is one in which the premises are put forward
to make the conclusion likely or probable but not logically guaranteed. Induction is the basis for much scientific and technical
arguments, most literary interpretation and historical analysis. A common misconception distinguishes inductive from deductive
reasoning by holding that inductive moves from particular to general and deduction from general to particular. However, certain
inductive arguments can move from general to particular and likewise deductive arguments can move from particular to general.
The process of moving from statements about particulars to a statement about a larger class that contains the particulars is called
generalizing. To call a statement general means that it applies to a number of individuals rather than to a particular or specific
case. Generalizations can apply to all cases (i.e. a universal generalization) or generalizations can apply to some, a few, or a
certain percentage of cases (i.e. a statistical generalization).
Universal premise argument – a particular-to-general inductive argument that includes premises in which terms all, every, always,
no, or none are used. In particular-to-general inductive reasoning, statements about a sample are used as reasons to justify similar
statements about the whole population from which the sample is drawn. If the sample is likely to be unrepresentative, too small or
specific, or biased, then the reasoning can be criticized.
Universal generalization – a generalization that applies to all cases. A leap is made from premises (evidence) about particular cases
to a conclusion that applies generally, not just to the specific instances. A universal positive generalization contains words such as
all, every, or always. A universal negative generalization uses terms such as no or none to indicate that all cases do not have a
characteristic.
Representativeness of a sample – a sample is likely to be representative of a population from which it is drawn if it is sufficiently
large and drawn in an unbiased manner.
Statistical premise argument – a general-to-particular inductive argument that includes statistical premises in which some unspecific
statistical terms such as many, most, a few, seldom, and so on are used, or some specific percentage is mentioned. In general-to-
particular inductive reasoning, statements about a population are used as reasons to justify similar statements about a sample from
it is drawn. If the population is likely to be unrepresentative, too large or varied, or biased, then the reasoning can be criticized.
Statistical generalization – a generalization that applies to some percentage of cases. It includes those cases in which some specific
percentage is mentioned, but also premises that include some unspecific statistical terms such as many, most, a few, seldom. This
contrasts with the universal empirical generalization.
Requirement of total evidence – in an inductive argument with statistical premises, the expectation that all available, relevant
evidence will be included in picking relevant premises.
Causal reasoning – the writer makes the point by moving from the observation that one thing is correlated (or is not correlated) with
another to the claim that the first causes (or does not cause) the second. It examines the reasons for and results of events, actions,
facts, and issues. It is a type of analysis that examines a chain link connection in order to show how the links are present. Such
reasoning is best supported by controlled experiment.
Cause – something is a cause in the sense of controlling factor, we characterize it as a condition without which the effect would not
have occurred. If an effect would not have occurred without the cause, then, in principle, one way of controlling the effect is to
eliminate the cause.
Correlation – the association of two or more characteristics or events. That two events are correlated, that is they typically occur
together, does not in itself justify the conclusion that the first causes the second.
Confound – when a causal argument is advanced (A is correlated to B, so it is likely that A causes B), a confound is a third factor, X,
that is the true cause of B, but which is also correlated with A, creating the appearance that A causes B. Controlled experiments
help to rule out confounds.
Controlled experiment – an experiment designed to determine whether one thing causes another that helps rule out the X-factor as an
alternative explanation. It involves comparing an experimental group to which the suspected causal agent is applied, to a control
group to which it is not, all other conditions being the same. If assignment to the groups, is unbiased (random), then any
significant difference in the experimental groups can be attributed to the suspected causal agent. The virtue of the controlled
experiment is that it transfers the onus of responsibility to the critic, who must now provide some reason why it is plausible that
an x-factor is at work.
Analogical reasoning – the writer makes a point by using one thing to explain another. It explains something unfamiliar in terms of
something that is likely to be more familiar to the reader. Analogical reasoning justifies the claim that an item has a certain
characteristic by appeal to a sufficiently similar (analogous) item, which is known to have the characteristic in question. Since
analogies often play a role in creative thinking, the best analogies are often those that are most fruitful in generating new,
interesting, and unexpected connections. Analogies have the form 1) both thing 1 and thing 2 have characteristics A, B, C… 2)
thing 1 has the additional characteristic Z. (likely) thing 2 has characteristic Z.
Convergent reasoning – an argument in which independent (non-linked) premises are offered in support of the conclusion.
Convergent arguments can be contrasted with linked (i.e. deductive arguments). In a deductively valid argument, the premises
support the conclusion in a way that makes it impossible for the premises to be true and the conclusion false. If a deductive
argument adequately supports its conclusion then no counter-considerations, can outweigh the truth of this conclusion without
making one of the supporting premises false. However in a convergent argument, the pro-considerations can all be granted as true
but outweighed by counter-considerations.
To criticize a convergent argument we may either cast doubt on the premises or raise counter-considerations against the
conclusion. Rejecting some premises in a convergent argument isn’t necessarily grounds for rejecting the entire argument as the
remaining premises might be judged strong enough to support the conclusion. By contrast to a deductive argument, we could
reject the conclusion (because of counter-considerations) of a convergent argument even if all the premises were accepted.
Furthermore, it is necessary to weigh the strength of the considerations for and against the conclusion of a convergent argument.
This also contrasts with a deductive argument because the strength of the connection between premises and deductive conclusions
is given so long as the argument follows a correct pattern.
Counter-consideration – in a convergent argument, considerations weighing against the conclusion.
Conceptual theory – a statement of the conditions or under which a concept applies to all and only the objects with specified
characteristics. These theories are most plausible in domains in which clear boundaries can be drawn at least for some purposes.
A conceptual theory is a systematic way of reconstructing definition-like claims so that the claims can be assessed when fully
articulated. Typically, a conceptual theory is not offered in isolation from a discussion of 1) why it was chosen, 2) what
alternatives were considered and why they were rejected, 3) how the analysis in question is related to a broader area of inquiry,
and 4) further conclusions or implications that can be drawn from it.
Empirical theory – a set of statements of fairly broad scope that explains patterns or regularities established by observation. A theory
can be used for explanation or for persuasion as a premise. An evaluation of a theory consists of examining how well it explains
or predicts regularities. Empirical theories have a broader scope than that which they explain. Theories are more remote from
direct evidence than the events or processes they can be used to explain. Theories commonly use specialized or technical
language and contain indicator words such as ‘why’, ‘because’, ‘explains’, etc., that explain why regularities occur.
Regularity – a pattern to be explained by a broader empirical theory that is described by a less theoretical, more observational
statement.
Observed data – the specific instances that form the basis for determining that a regularity occurs.
3. Flaws in Reasoning
A fallacy, which has the same root as false, is a logical problem in argumentation.
Resemblance – the general category of fallacies that attempt to persuade by resembling good arguments.
Affirming the consequent – is an argument that resembles modus ponens and exhibits the following invalid pattern: 1) If A, then B.
2) B. ⸫ A.
Denying the antecedent – is an argument that resembles modus tollens and exhibits the following invalid pattern: 1) If A, then B. 2)
Not A. ⸫ Not B.
Petitio Principii (also Begging the Question, Latin for “petitioning the premises”) – a fallacy in which you present an opinion as a
given fact. An argument that rests on a premise that is either a restatement of the conclusion or would be doubted for the same
reasons that the conclusion would be doubted. While technically a valid pattern, the argument does not provide a reason for the
conclusion. This fallacy has the pattern: 1) A. ⸫ A. EXAMPLE: Homeless people contribute nothing to society. They should be
denied welfare. [Questions: Do homeless people contribute nothing? Why should they be denied welfare?]
Tautology (aka circular argument) – technically not a fallacy, but an argument that proves nothing, since something is just denied in
different terms. EXAMPLE: All unmarried men are bachelors. Hank is an unmarried man. Therefore, Hank is a bachelor.
[Comment: Bachelorhood is the defining feature of unmarried men, it is not a quality such as mortality, greed, generosity, etc.]
Non sequitur (Latin for “it does not follow”) – a fallacy in which the conclusion does not logically follow from the premises, usually
due to the use of irrelevant evidence. EXAMPLE: All men are mortal. Gloria is not a man. Therefore, Gloria is immortal. [The
mistake arises from assuming that the first premise also means “Only men are mortal.”]
Contradiction – a statement that cannot (logically) be true and thus describes an impossible situation. It is inconsistent in all contexts.
Often used of statements having the form “A and not A”, where “A” stands for a sentence, or the form “m is P1, and m is not P1,”
where P1 is a predicate.
Distraction – the general category of fallacies that attempt to persuade by taking the audience’s attention away from weak points of
an argument.
False Dilemma (aka false dichotomy, either-or fallacy) – a fallacy in which the arguer claims that there are only two alternatives, one
is unacceptable, and denies the possibility of other alternatives. EXAMPLE: There are two kinds of teachers: bad and awful.
Slippery Slope – a fallacy that occurs when extreme and unlikely consequences are claimed to be initiated by a relatively minor
cause. In this fallacy, a full chain of events is suggested. EXAMPLE: You should quit smoking because of the inability to overcome
an addiction is indicative of a personality unable to meet the stresses and responsibilities of a job or relationship and eventually
you will end up broke and lonely.
Straw man – the arguer makes a position appear strong by making the opposing position appear weaker than it really is. The arguer
focuses on the opponents weaker arguments even though stronger arguments are available. The arguer exchanges or misrepresents
the opponent’s strong argument for a weaker one and then presents a false dilemma that the reader must choose between the
opponent’s weaker argument and the arguer’s position.
Red Herring – a technique in which you try to distract the reader from your argument by introducing something unrelated. EXAMPLE:
Of course, the team’s owner is losing millions of dollars. However, the team has won four games in a row, and the owner would
never sell or move the team when it’s winning. [The winning streak is a red herring; if the owner loses enough money, he or she
will sell or move the team, regardless of its performance.]
Emotion – the general category of fallacies that attempt to persuade by making it desirable to believe an argument’s conclusion rather
than giving evidence to support it.
Ad baculum (also Appeal to Force, Latin for “to the stick”) – the arguer tries to get you to agree by indicating that you will be
harmed if you don’t agree.
Ad misericordiam (also Appeal to Pity, Latin for “to misery”) – a fallacy in which you attempt to persuade by substituting sympathy
for logic. EXAMPLE: One look at their malnourished children should convince you to give all your money to our charity.
Ad populum (also Appeal to Loyalty, Latin for “to the people”) – a fallacy in which you appeal to the person’s devotion to country or
family or by playing on the existence or necessity or common bonds. EXAMPLE: North American cars are better than imports
because our cars are built right here by our own people.
Appeal to Authority – appealing to someone whose expertise is not relevant to the issue at hand, or appealing to someone who is
famous or admired but not an expert on the issue at hand.
Appeal to Fear – a fallacy in which you attempt to persuade by playing on the reader’s fears. EXAMPLE: If you allow this alleged
murderer to go free, your own children will be in mortal danger.
Appeal to Ignorance – a fallacy in which you assert that since something has never been said or proven, it must be true. EXAMPLE:
Since we’ve never found evidence of life on Mars, there must not be any.
Ad hominem (also Attacking the Person, Latin for “to the man”) – the general category of fallacies in which you attack the person
rather than his or her writing or statements. Or, an argument may be accepted simply because of who proposed it. EXAMPLE: No
wonder “Hills like White Elephants” is an awful story: everyone knows Hemingway was an alcoholic.
Bias - a predisposed tendency to be for/against a person/thing/one side of an argument, possibly because the biased person
stands to gain/loose from it. This is not a good definition of bias – it should have something to do with its relation to
truth.
Bandwagon – a fallacy in which you assert that something is right or acceptable because everyone is doing it. EXAMPLE: Cheat on
your taxes; everyone I know already does.
Two Wrongs (aka tuquoque) – a fallacy that occurs when the argument advances the idea that it’s acceptable to do something wrong
or unacceptable to do something right just because somebody else did or didn’t do the same or similar thing. EXAMPLE: My father
smokes, so it’s o.k. for me to smoke too.
False Expertise (aka testimonial) – a fallacy in which an expert in one field offers his or her opinion in another field where the expert
has little or no expertise. EXAMPLE: We should all drive the new SUV because our favourite sports player drives one.]
Undistributed Middle – a fallacy that holds that because two agents perform some action, they share each other’s qualities. This
fallacy is used extensively by advertisers. EXAMPLE: Successful people drive SUVs. If you drive an SUV, you’ll be a successful
person.
Opinion - a personal view not necessarily supported on fact or knowledge.
Language – the general category of fallacies that attempt to persuade through the use of language choice and meaning.
Equivocation – an argument in which an expression shifts its meaning from one premise to another, making the pattern invalid.
Equivocation can exploit either ambiguity or vagueness. Valid pattern if no equivocation: 1) All P1s are P2s. 2) All P2s are P3s. ⸫
All P1s are P3s. Invalid pattern with equivocation: 1) All P1s are P2s. 2) All P3s are P4s. ⸫ All P1s are P4s. The three step procedure
for judging equivocation:
1) Locate any unclear expressions that occur in more than one premise.
2) Determine what the expression must mean to make one of the premises true.
3) Determine whether the other premise(s) can be made true without changing the meaning of the unclear expression.
Prejudicial language – the arguer uses language that biases the reader in favour of the arguer’s position or against the opponent’s
position.
Slanted Language – a fallacy in which you use the connotations of words to portray similarities as substantial differences. EXAMPLE:
I am a strong conservative, eager to protect the state and its people by limiting immigration and introducing racial segregation.
My opponent, however, is a fascist.
Complex Question – a fallacy that forces the reader to admit something that may not be true, because the question asked contains an
unproven assumption. EXAMPLE: Have you quit smoking? [To say yes is to admit you used to smoke; to say no is to admit you
still smoke. This question is unfair if directed at someone who has never smoked.]
Misleading definition – a case in which an unclear expression is given an “unusual” or technical meaning in the premises of an
argument but where that peculiarity is not marked by qualifications or hedges in the conclusion. If the premise gives an
expression a special meaning but the conclusion uses the ordinary meaning then the conclusion is misleading.
Ambiguity – a term in a context is ambiguous if it has more than one relatively distinct meaning in that context.
Vagueness – a term is vague in a context if it is unclear where to draw the boundary between the things to which the term does apply
and those to which it does not.
Relationship – the general category of fallacies that attempt to persuade through a faulty relationship between the general and specific
cases.
Hasty generalization - a fallacy in which you deny exceptions. It is a generalization that is asserted on the basis of an
unrepresentative sample, either too small or biased. EXAMPLE: All teachers are overpaid, uninspiring, boring time-servers.
Overgeneralization – a fallacy in inductive reasoning. Jumping to a general conclusion based on a small number of observations can
lead to some surprising conclusions. EXAMPLE: If you know two people who are tall and who are bad drivers, it is an
overgeneralization to conclude that all tall people are bad drivers.
Oversimplification (aka reductive fallacy) – a fallacy in which effects are attributed to actions that may not be the complete causes, or
may not be causes at all. In other words, it occurs when too simple a solution is proposed to a problem that is far more complex
than the argument seems to recognize. EXAMPLE: To get rid of crime, get rid of all the drug users.
Post hoc, ergo propter hoc (Latin for “after this, therefore because of this”) – a fallacy in which an effect is attributed to an action
simply because the action came first. It is an unjustified move from correlation to cause. EXAMPLE: The escalation of baseball
players’ salaries is responsible for the recent melting of polar ice caps.
False analogy – In an analogy, two objects (or events), A & B are shown to be similar. Then it is argued that since A has property P,
so also B must have property P. An analogy fails when the two objects are different in a way which affects whether they both
have property P. The fallacy of false analogy errs by confusing irrelevant similarities with relevant similarities. A false analogy
can also draw a conclusion from cases that are only superficially or apparently similar to the class about which the conclusion is
being drawn. Example: Employees are like nails. Just as nails must be hit in the head to make them work, so must employees.
1) Summary:
Avoid Include
- reference to evidence/support - own opinion -
precise word choice (not too broad). - identification of the title, author’s name, thesis, major arguments.
- repetition, unnecessary information that - identify the topic
does not help the reader grasp the thesis
and major arguments.
2) Evaluation of Argumentation
Avoid Include
- restatement of previous points. - clear statement of your overall opinion on
- focusing on ideas. the quality of the argumentation.
- spending time on minor problems at - looking at any logical problems.
the expense of the major ones. - support for own observations.
- focus only on weakness. - examine all major problems.
- writing about every single problem. - consider the credibility of the evidence used.
- major unsupported claims. - consider if the burden of proof has been met.
3) Evaluation of Ideas
Avoid Include
- giving too much support for you claims - a clear statement that is your opinion on the issue
- simply repeating thesis, without support - support for your own arguments (must not come from essay).
- including irrelevant information
- evaluating the writer’s argumentation
Questions to ask when evaluating the idea:
1. Is the problem really a problem or just an issue?
2. Is the problem/issue presented accurately, fairly, in its full complexity?
3. Is the solution (or implied solution) really a solution? Are all things considered when evaluating the suggested solution?
4. What would be the strongest/weakest arguments concerning the writer’s thesis?
5. Are there strong/weak arguments not mentioned in the essay that would support or refute the writer’s thesis?
6. Should we care about this problem as much as the writer wants us to care?
7. What are the short, medium, and long term effects and consequences? Is it the most efficient/effective alternative?
8. What are the perspectives of all of the stakeholders?
9. What importance, practicality, utility, and gain does this idea provide in contrast to its cost, risk, and loss?