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Nguyễn Thị Ngọc Huyền - 22040534 - entry 3
Nguyễn Thị Ngọc Huyền - 22040534 - entry 3
Peer’s comment:
-Donate food are the highest proportion of revenue sources, while
program services receive the biggest number of expenditure.
-> nên paraphrase lại câu này
-accounted for -> lặp lại quá nhiều
- đủ số từ yêu cầu
Version 2:
The pie chart depicts the amount of dollars spent and received by
a children's charity in the United States in 2016