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COVER LETTERS
“You  have  to  be  unique,  and  different,  and  shine  in  your  own  way”  –  Lady  Gaga  

Learning Objectives
 
Upon  completion  of  this  module,  you  will:  
• Understand  the  different  purposes  of  a  cover  letter.    
• Understand  the  essential  elements  and  how  to  effectively  write  a  targeted  cover  
letter.  
• Know  how  to  conduct  proper  research  on  the  market/industry/company  for  the  
job  you  are  applying  for,  and  apply  research  properly  to  the  cover  letter.  
• Understand  the  importance  of  establishing  your  brand  through  your  cover  letter  
and  how  to  do  so.  
• Know  how  to  validate  your  skills  through  specific  examples.  
• Understand  who  your  audience  is  (the  employer)  and  what  they  are  looking  for.  

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Pre-reading Exercise: What is a Cover Letter?


WHAT  IS  A  COVER  LETTER?  
 A  cover  letter  is  a  self-­‐marketing  tool  that  should  always  accompany  your  résumé.  It  
serves  as  a  link  between  your  résumé  and  the  job  you  are  applying  to.    It  is  also  a  
carefully  thought  out,  one  page  letter  that  explains  to  the  reader  why  you  are  
submitting  your  résumé,  and  should  be  tailored  to  the  specific  position  and  company  to  
which  you  are  applying.  This  is  your  opportunity  to  show  what  you  know  about  the  
company  and  to  relate  it  to  what  you  have  told  the  reader  about  yourself  to  make  you  
and  the  company  seem  like  a  great  match.    
   
WHAT  IS  THE  GOAL/PURPOSE  OF  A  COVER  LETTER?  
The  main  purpose  of  a  cover  letter  is  to  get  a  prospective  employer  interested  enough  
to  want  to  meet  you  for  an  interview.    A  good  cover  letter  can  demonstrate  to  an  
employer  why  you  should  be  considered  for  the  position.  The  cover  letter  also  
demonstrates  your  genuine  interest  in  the  role  and  the  organization.    
 
Every  cover  letter  should  have  the  following  elements:    
 
-­‐  Quick  Tip  -­‐  
• YOUR  CONTACT  INFORMATION  
Wordle.com  –  Try  creating  a  word  
• THE  CORRECT  DATE   cloud  by  using  an  employer’s  
• RECIPIENT’S  NAME  &  CONTACT  INFORMATION   mission  statement  to  see  what  the  
• SUBJECT  LINE  “RE:    JOB  TITLE”     key  messages  are  
• SALUTATION  (DEAR  MR.  LAST  NAME)    
• OPENING  PARAGRAPH:  INTRODUCTION        
• FIRST  BODY  PARAGRAPH  
• SECOND  BODY  PARAGRAPH  
• CLOSING  
• SIGNATURE  
 
For  more  information  on  what  to  include  and  how  to  format  your  cover  letter,  see  
Appendix  F,  G  and  H.  

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Written Exercise
Read  the  attached  job  description  “Co-­‐op  Specialist,  Event  Marketing”.  On  the  right  
hand  side  of  the  chart  below,  list  the  top  five  skills  you  think  are  important  for  this  role.  
On  the  left  hand  side,  list  your  top  five  skills  (Hint:  if  you  can’t  remember  these,  check  
out  the  skills  checklist  exercise  you  completed  in  the  Personal  Branding  module).  
Compare  and  contrast  –  do  your  skills  match  the  skills  the  employer  is  looking  for?  
 
    Your  Skills/USPs                    Skills  for  the  Role  
 
   1.   1.  
                               
   2.   2.  
 
  3.   3.  
 
  4.   4.  
 
  5.   5.  
 
 
 

Job Description: Co-op Specialist, Event Marketing


 
MobileFone  is  a  great  place  to  work.  You  can  see  it  in  our  team  members.  The  diversity  
of  the  MobileFone  team  and  their  unique  contributions  set  us  apart  from  the  
competition.  Our  success  is  based  as  much  on  our  future  friendly  team  as  the  innovative  
internet,  voice,  data  and  wireless  products  and  solutions  we  offer.  
Our  team  members  include  people  like  you  -­‐  enthusiastic,  innovative,  passionate  and  
energetic.  We  believe  that  you’ll  find  our  high-­‐performance  culture  personally  fulfilling,  
professionally  challenging  and  financially  rewarding.  Join  our  team  and  make  your  
future  friendly  too.  
 
Position  Overview:    
The  candidate  in  Event  Marketing  is  responsible  for  creating  the  back-­‐to-­‐school  
campaign  strategy  for  2016.    
 
Responsibilities:    
·∙  Research  and  document  5  year  history  of  back-­‐to-­‐school  campaigns  at  MobileFone  
·∙  Research  and  document  competitive  analysis  of  campus/youth  campaigns  conducted  
by  competitors  in  the  cellular  phone  industry  
·∙  Research  worldwide  experiential  events  relating  to  university/college  youth  and  create  
a  best  practices  portfolio  for  reference.  

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·∙  Create  a  comprehensive  contact  list  for  all  Canadian  universities  and  colleges  detailing  
sponsorship  and  event  opportunities.    
·∙  Assist  in  the  development  and  execution  of  a  national  and  regional  consumer  
marketing  event  plan  for  the  back-­‐to-­‐school  time  period  (for  university  and  college).    
·∙  Coordinate  interaction  with  various  design,  event  management/marketing  &  event  
suppliers  related  to  the  marketing  plan.  
·∙  Assist  with  various  event  marketing  initiatives.    
·∙  Perform  administrative  duties  as  required.    
 
Qualifications:    
·∙  Extreme  organizational  discipline  and  proven  attention  to  detail.  
·∙  Some  experience  in  event  management,  promotions  and  event  marketing  preferred.  
·∙  Bilingualism  is  an  asset.  
·∙  Strong  written,  verbal  communication  and  analytical  skills.  
·∙  Proficient  in  Word,  Excel,  and  PowerPoint  for  Windows.    
 
Please  Apply  To:  
Mr.  Philip  Brown  
GTA  Recruiter  
MobileFone  Canada  Inc.  
1265  Military  Trail  
Toronto,  ON  M2C  1A4  
 

In-Class Take Home Messages


 
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Still interested in this subject? READ ON!


1. Cover  Letter  Outline  and  Do’s  &  Don’ts  in  Appendix  H.  
2. Cover  Letter  FAQs  and  the  Competitive  Edge  in  the  Job  Market  –  Quintessential  
Careers  http://www.quintcareers.com/edge.html    
3. The  Dynamic  Cover  Letters:  Formula  for  Job-­‐Search  Success  –  Quintessential  
Careers  http://www.quintcareers.com/cover_letters.html  
 

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Skills Checklist – Exercise


Using% the% chart% below,% identify% the% skills% you% have% acquired% or% used% during% your% work% or%
volunteer%experiences.%List%each%of%your%experiences%in%the%top%right%boxes%in%the%first%row%(1%
experience%per%column).%Under%each%experience,%check%off%the%skills%or%knowledge%which%you%
used%or%developed.%Feel%free%to%add%additional%skills%or%knowledge%that%is%relevant.%Bring%this%
completed%chart%with%you%to%class.%
%

List your
experiences here "

Leadership
Delegation
Motivation
Management
Coordination
Skills
Event Planning
Project Management
Initiative
Time Multi-tasking
Management Planning
Skills Prioritization
Analytical
Evaluation
Analytical
Interpret
Skills
Investigate
Problem solving
Client service
Coaching
Collaboration
Counseling
Facilitation
Communication Listening
/ Interpersonal Presentation
Skills Relationship Building
Selling / Promoting
Teaching
Teamwork
Translation
Writing
Auditing
Financial / Budgeting
Quantitative Calculating
Skills Forecasting
Reconciliation
Data Cataloguing
Management / Collection
Research Skills Compilation

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List your
experiences here "
Processing
Data Reporting
Management /
Researching
Research Skills
Validation
Updating
Conceptualization
Creative Skills Creation
Designing
Invention
Layout
Adaptable
Assertive
Detail-oriented
Adoptive Skills Energetic
Flexible
Self-motivated
Tactful
Thrive under
pressure
Financial Accounting
Cost Accounting
Accounting: Taxation
Financial Modeling
Business Finance:
Knowledge Investments
Marketing
Promotions
Market Research
HR: Recruitment
HR: Training
HR: Compensation
Microsoft Word
Microsoft Excel
Microsoft Access
Microsoft
Computer PowerPoint
Knowledge Photoshop
Webpage creation
SAP
Caseware
TaxPrep
Language French
Knowledge

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Appendix F: The Cover Letter Outline


Your  Address          OR    Your  Header  (same  as  on  your  Résumé)  
 
Date  of  Writing  
 
Employer’s  Name  
Employer’s  Job  Title  
Company  Name  
Address  
 
RE:  Name  of  the  Job  Title  
 
Dear  Mr/Ms  (last  name  of  employer),  
 
• INTRODUCTION:    Tell  the  employer  why  you  are  writing.  Create  an  immediate  
interest.  
• Be  specific  and  give  details  
• Showcase  your  knowledge/interest  with  the  employer;  show  your  motivation  
for  applying  and  fit  with  the  organization  
• State  your  2  main  skills  that  you  will  discuss  in  the  letter  
 
• BODY  OF  LETTER:    Tell  the  employer  what  you  can  do  for  them.  
     
• Body  Paragraph  A:  
• State  your  main  skill/  academic  qualification  that  is  targeted  to  the  position    
• Validate  the  skill/  academic  qualification  with  one  or  two  specific  examples  
including  the  results  
• Link  the  skill/academic  qualification  and  your  experiences  back  to  the  
employer/job  
 
• Body  Paragraph  B:  
• State  your  next  skill/  academic  qualification  that  is  targeted  to  the  position    
• Validate  the  skill/  academic  qualification  with  one  or  two  specific  examples  
including  the  results  
• Link  the  skill/  qualification  and  your  experiences  back  to  the  employer  
 
• CLOSING:    Tell  the  employer  what  should  happen  next.    
• Reiterate  your  interest  in  the  position/how  you  match  their  company  
• Showcase  your  research  of  the  employer  again  
• Thank  them  for  their  time  
 
Sincerely,  
Your  Signature  (optional  for  electronic  applications)  
Your  typewritten  name  

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Appendix G: Supporting Your Claims


Showcasing  your  abilities  is  a  top  priority  for  your  résumé  and  cover  letter.  Students  are  
often  very  eager  to  tell  employers  that  they  meet  all  of  a  job’s  qualifications  but  neglect  
to  support  these  claims.  Without  validation,  employers  cannot  be  sure  if  you  actually  
possess  the  skills  and  abilities  or  if  you  are  just  saying  that  you  do.    
 
Have  you  ever  written  “I  have  excellent  communication,  interpersonal,  and  teamwork  
skills  so  I  am  the  best  candidate  for  this  position”  or  similar?  It  is  great  that  you  are  
confident  in  your  skill  set,  but  there  are  a  few  issues:    
• If  your  claims  about  your  skills  are  not  supported  later  on  in  your  cover  letter,  it  
is  an  empty  statement  and  you  can  lose  credibility.    
• As  a  candidate,  you  can  never  be  certain  that  you  are  THE  BEST  applicant.  Saying  
that  you  are  THE  BEST  comes  across  as  arrogant.      
• Remember:  Employers  will  compare  you  to  other  applicants.  Others  may  write  
about  the  same  skills.  What  sets  you  apart?  Show  the  employer  why  you  might  
be  better.    
 
What  should  I  do?  Use  specific  accomplishments  to  show  how  you  used  or  developed  a  
particular  skill/ability.  There  are  multiple  ways  to  provide  validation.  Here  are  some  
examples:  
• Results:  Provides  quantitative  evidence  to  show  what  you  did  worked  
o Increased  club  membership  by  over  75%.  
o Reduced  weekly  processing  time  from  3  hours  to  1  hour.  
• Depth:  Demonstrates  how  difficult  or  large  a  particular  task  was  
o Organized  a  100-­‐attendee  event.  
o Presented  findings  to  Directors  and  VPs.  
o Wrote  a  200-­‐page  process  manual.  
• Breadth:  Shows  the  variety  or  complexity  associated  with  the  experience  
o Coached  students  from  30  different  countries.  
o Interacted  with  clients  in  person,  over  the  phone,  and  via  email.  
• Duration:  Outlines  the  length  of  time  you  had  the  responsibility  
o Over  5  years  experience  in  leading  teams.  
o Taught  children  how  to  play  soccer  for  2  years.  
• Description:  Shows  that  you  understand  the  skill  and  demonstrates  how  you  
have  used  it  
o My  ability  to  communicate  effectively  is  exercised  during  each  skating  
class  I  teach.  When  I  convey  the  instructions  for  each  skill  to  be  
performed  by  my  group,  I  must  be  clear  and  concise,  but  I  must  also  fully  
explain  the  proper  technique  for  each  skill.  
o Planned  and  executed  a  networking  event,  including  developing  
timelines,  securing  employers,  venue  logistics,  promoting  to  students,  
and  delegating  to  teammates.  

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Tips  
• Make  your  accomplishment  obvious.  Don’t  make  the  interviewer  guess  what  you  
did!    
o Have  someone  else  read  it  and  ask  if  they  have  a  clear  idea  of  what  you  
did.    
• Ensure  that  each  statement  adds  value.  Space  is  limited  so  don’t  include  
unnecessary  information.  Two  suggestions:  
o Write  down  all  ideas  (with  validation)  and  then  select  the  most  relevant  
ones.    
o Build  an  outline  before  drafting  your  documents  to  provide  structure  and  
flow.  
• Don’t  under/oversell  yourself!  Demonstrate  what  you  achieved  but  never  
exaggerate  or  lie.    
• Currently  working?  Track  your  activities  (ex.  #  of  tax  returns  prepared)  as  you  do  
them.  This  way,  you  won’t  forget  what  you  did  and  will  provide  a  helpful  source  
of  accomplishments.    
• Refer  to  your  co-­‐op  evaluations.  Your  supervisor  comments  provide  valuable  
insight  into  your  strengths  and  accomplishments.    

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Appendix H: Cover Letter Do’s and Don’ts


 
 
   
Do’s   Don’ts  
   
   
• Research  the  company   • Send  out  a  form  letter  to  several  
  companies  
• Be  focused    
  • Rewrite  your  résumé  in  paragraph  
• Be  specific   format  
   
• Show  enthusiasm  and  confidence   • Be  too  long  or  wordy  
   
• Match  your  qualifications  with  the   • Talk  above  or  below  your  reader  
position  requirements    
  • Mention  salary  or  benefits  
• Be  concise    
  • Use  first  names  
• Have  others  proofread  your  work    
 
• Highlight  strengths  and   • Focus  on  negatives  
accomplishments    
   
 

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Appendix I: Student Assessment Tool – Resume & Cover Letter


Quality
 
LEVEL   DEFINITION    
  Very  poor  quality,  needs  extensive  revision  -­‐  not  original  and  does  not  make  the  student  stand  
  out  
Poor   • Poorly  formatted:  difficult  to  read/scan,  insufficient  space,  inconsistent  visual  identity,  
headers  not  clearly  differentiated  etc.  
• Poorly  organized:  not  logically  organized,  not  reverse  chronological  order  
• Poorly  written:  grammar  and  spelling  errors,  not  using  active  voice  
• Poorly  targeted:  not  related  to  the  role,  relevant  knowledge,  skills,  experience  outlined  
• Poorly  validated:  student  did  not  provide  evidence  of  results    
 
  Poor  quality,  needs  significant  revision  -­‐  still  does  not  make  the  student  stand  out  
  • Similar  to  above  but  somewhat  better  formatted  (still  in  need  of  revision)  
Fair   • Perhaps  logically  organized  but  not  with  the  most  important  information  first  
• Not  well  written:  using  the  active  voice,  but  vague  choice  of  words  (assisted,  worked,  etc.)  
• Slightly  targeted:  not  related  to  the  role,  but  some  required  skills  identified  (important  ones  
missing)  
• Poorly  backed  up:  little  evidence,  similar  to  above  
 
  Moderate  quality,  needs  some  revision-­‐  material  fits  standards,  but  doesn’t  make  the  student  
  stand  out  
Satisfactory   • Acceptably  formatted:  no  huge  errors,  but  does  not  stand  out:  easy  to  read/scan,  sufficient  
space,  somewhat  inconsistent  visual  identity,  etc.  
• Organized:  logically  organized,  reverse  chronological  order  
• Acceptably  written:  limited  grammar  and  spelling  errors,  using  active  voice  
• Fairly  targeted:  relevant  knowledge,  skills,  experience  well  outlined,  relation  to  role  is  
limited    
• Some  back  up:  student  did  provide  limited  evidence  of  results  in  both  cover  letter  and  
résumé  
 
  Good  quality,  needs  little  revision  -­‐  format  and  content  make  student  stand  out  as  a  good  
  candidate  
Very  Good   • Professionally  formatted:  easy/pleasant  to  read/scan,  very  consistent  visual  identity;  above  
average    
• Well  organized:  logically  organized,  most  important  information  is  first  
• Well-­‐written:  written  at  above-­‐average  level;  no  grammar  and  spelling  errors,  and  using  
active  voice  
• Well  targeted:  highlights  most  relevant  knowledge,  skills,  experience  well  outlined  that  is  
needed  by  the  job  AND  that  are  student  strengths.  Strengths  are  somewhat  connected  to  
the  job  
• Backed  up:  student  provides  evidence  of  results  in  both  cover  letter  and  résumé  
 
 

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MANAGEMENT CO-OP

  Exceptional  quality,  minimal  revisions  necessary  -­‐  the  student  stands  out  as  an  exceptional  
  candidate  
Outstanding   • Professionally  formatted:  extremely  easy  and  pleasant  to  read/scan,  very  consistent  visual  
identity,  which  is  at  an  outstanding  level  
• Well  organized:  logically  organized,  most  important  information  is  first  
• Excellently  written:  written  in  a  dynamic  and  clearly  personal  voice,  with  no  grammar  and  
spelling  errors,  and  using  active  voice  
• Superbly  targeted:  highlights  most  relevant  knowledge,  skills,  experience  well  outlined  that  
is  needed  by  the  job  AND  that  are  student  strengths.  Strengths  are  closely  connected  to  the  
job  
• Well  backed  up:  student  provides  evidence  of  results  in  both  cover  letter  and  résumé  that  
are  compelling  as  to  the  student’s  performance  

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