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2FA8QTziR0abGXxFZ4HA The Ultimate Novel Writing Starter Kit
2FA8QTziR0abGXxFZ4HA The Ultimate Novel Writing Starter Kit
The Ultimate
Novel Writing Starter Kit
Hey there! 👋 Congratulations on taking the first step toward one of the most
rewarding challenges ever – writing a book!
If you’re anything like the majority of the people I work with, you want to write a
book but you don't know how to get started. Or maybe you have started, but now
you don't know how to proceed with the development of your story.
Maybe you’re feeling overwhelmed with the number of decisions to be made about
your story. Or maybe you’ve spent YEARS working on the same novel, feeling an
endless amount of doubt or frustration. Or maybe, worst of all, you’re about to give
up on your writing altogether.
If you can relate to any of that, don't worry – I've got you covered. As a
developmental editor and book coach, I’ve worked with many authors who feel
frustrated and overwhelmed when it comes to their writing. Most of these feelings
could be eliminated if there was an easy, step-by-step process to follow.
That's exactly why I created this Novel Writing Starter Kit. My goal is to break down
the complex process of writing a novel and to teach you how to do it in a less
complicated way. I hope this workbook will help you get started with your writing,
and allow you to feel confident, productive, and inspired when you sit down to
write. Let's get started.
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QUESTION # 01:
Why do You Want to Write This Book?
If you’re like most people, you want to write a book because you want to be heard.
You have something to say about life or human nature, and you want others to see
the world the same way you do.
So, the first question I ask all my clients is – why do you want to write this book?
Your answers to this question can help you get a better sense of the kind of story
you want to write. For example, your answers can help you:
➜ determine your story’s genre.
➜ uncover the theme of your book.
➜ start to see the shape of your story.
➜ figure out your character’s arc, and more...
Here’s an example from a client of mine named Camille. I asked Camille why she
wanted to write this particular story at t his particular time in her life, and she said –
"I want to write this story because I want to show that getting close to someone
doesn't always equal pain. Ever since my best friend passed away, I've been afraid
to get close to people because I don't want to feel the pain of losing someone
again. But by distancing myself from others, I've missed out on some (potentially)
really great relationships. I guess I don’t want other people to make the same
mistake I did when it comes to friendships and relationships. I also think writing
this story will finally help me work through the loss of my friend.”
First of all, that’s a GREAT answer – and thank you so much, Camille, for letting me
share your words in this workbook! 💕
From Camille’s answer, I could imagine her protagonist transforming from
someone who’s afraid of getting close to people to someone who lets love into his
or her life. Or, perhaps Camille’s protagonist has to work with, and learn to trust,
someone in order to accomplish his or her external story goal. The theme or
message of Camille’s story might be something like – “Good things happen when
people put aside their fears and work together.” You can also start to get a sense of
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how Camille’s story could play out in the romance genre vs. the mystery genre vs.
any other genre. Pretty neat, right?
So, the first thing you need to do is understand why this story is so important to
you. Why do you want to tell this particular story at this particular time in your life?
The more specific you are, the more effective your writing efforts will be. If you get
stuck in the middle of a draft, you can look back on your answers for inspiration
and motivation. You can also look at your answers when it comes time to edit. It’s
not always easy to delete things from your draft, but if you use your WHY as a
guiding light, decisions become much easier.
📝 Your turn to do the work:
Set a timer for 10-15 minutes and answer the following questions:
➜ Why do you want to write this p articular story at t his time in your life?
➜ What beliefs or values fuel this story?
➜ What’s the point you’re trying to make?
➜ What are you trying to say about life, the world, or human nature?
➜ What are you trying to prove or disprove with your story?
If you're having a hard time answering this question, or if you feel unsure about
what’s coming up, don't worry and be patient. You know the answer even if it’s not
immediately obvious.
You can also try reading through this list of themes or universal lessons to see if
anything resonates with you:
➔ Forgiveness (of self or others)
➔ Love ( self-love, family love, romantic love)
➔ Acceptance ( of self, of circumstances, of reality)
➔ Faith ( in oneself, in others, in the world, in God)
➔ Fear ( overcoming it, conquering it, finding courage)
➔ Trust ( in oneself, in others, in the unknown)
➔ Survival ( including the will to live)
➔ Selflessness (including selflessness, heroism, and overcoming greed)
➔ Responsibility (including duty, and accepting one's destiny)
➔ Redemption (including atonement, accepting blame, remorse, and salvation)
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👉 C oach’s Tip: D on't worry if your answers sound generic or cliché – that’s almost
always the case in the beginning. This exercise is all about you getting clarity on
your message so, don’t feel like you need to make your answer perfect. You’ll be
able to refine or polish it up later. Don’t do a lot of research or self-reflection to
figure this out.
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QUESTION # 02:
What Type of Book Are You Going to Write?
When you hear the word “genre,” you might think of the shelves in a bookstore or
the categories on Amazon. But, genre is more than just a way to sort and classify
stories according to their shared elements.
Genre is all about understanding and delivering on the reader’s expectations.
And it’s the key to writing a story that works.
Readers pick up certain types of books because they want to:
➔ experience a certain kind of story
➔ feel a certain kind of way
➔ get help making sense of the changes in their lives
➔ be someone else for a few hours
When you understand why readers pick up books in certain genres, it makes the
whole writing process that much easier.
For example, if someone walked into a bookstore and picked up a murder mystery,
they would have certain expectations about the content of that story.
Perhaps they’d expect to see certain things like a scene where the dead body is
found and a scene where the murderer’s identity is exposed. They’d probably
expect to see a character who plays the role of a detective or cop. They’d probably
expect to uncover a bunch of clues alongside that detective or cop and to learn new
information throughout the whole story. The feeling they’re looking to experience is
intrigue -- they want to figure out w hodunnit?
This might sound obvious, but it’s super important to understand. If you don't know
what your genre is -- and what your genre is all about -- you’re not going to write a
story that delivers on readers' expectations.
So, let’s take a look at the different genres as laid out by Shawn Coyne, the creator
of The Story Grid and an editor with 25+ years experience in the “Big 5” publishing
houses. As you read through this next section, try to identify the genre that sounds
like the type of story you want to write.
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confused. For example, if a reader picks up a book expecting a crime novel and is
faced with a detective who spends more time mulling over his high school girlfriend
than solving the crime, your reader will be disappointed.
Why aren’t fantasy and science fiction on the list of genres?
Fantasy and science fiction are consumer-facing genre labels. These labels tell the
reader that there will be fantastic, magical, scientific, or futuristic elements in a
novel, but it doesn’t really tell the reader what the story will be about. For example
-- consider Twilight ( a love story) versus T he Hunger Games (an action story). That
means if you’re planning to write a science fiction or fantasy story, you still need to
choose an external genre or an internal genre (or both) for your story.
You might be thinking -- okay, all that makes sense, but how does choosing the
main genre for my story help me write a book? Well, if you can nail down your
story's main genre, you'll automatically gain a sense of clarity and focus that will
help you finish your draft and write a story that works.
For example, knowing your genre immediately gives you a sense of the:
➔ overall shape of your entire story
➔ primary c hange that will take place from the beginning of the story to the end
➔ things your protagonist wants and needs (their objects of desire)
➔ scenes and conventions that need to be present in your story
➔ theme or message of your story, and more...
For example, let’s say you’ve decided to write an action story set in a fantasy world.
And let’s say you’ve gone one step further and you’ve decided that your protagonist
will have an internal worldview arc.
From those decisions, we can already get a sense of your protagonist’s objects of
desire -- what she wants and needs. Her “want” is to stay alive and survive the
upcoming conflict with the protagonist. That comes from the action genre. Her
“need” might be something like maturing past irrational judgments of others. That
comes from the worldview genre. The stakes of your story are life and death --
either your protagonist will mature and survive the upcoming conflict, or she won’t.
You can also start to build a framework for your story using your genre’s obligatory
scenes. For example, in an action novel, the story kicks off after some kind of threat
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or attack from the antagonist. The climax is the final showdown between your
protagonist and the antagonist. There are also certain conventions (settings, roles,
etc.) you’ll need to include depending on your genre. For example, a mentor figure
or an element of sacrifice on the protagonist’s part.
For further study, check out this post -- W
hat are Obligatory Scenes and Conventions?
📝 Your turn to do the work:
Set a timer for 5 minutes and answer the following questions:
➜ What’s the global genre of your story?
➜ Will you have both an external and an internal genre in your story?
My story’s global genre is:
_____ Action _____ Society
_____ Horror _____ Status ( internal)
_____ Performance _____ Thriller
_____ Romance _____ War
_____ Mystery _____ Western
_____ Morality (internal) _____ Worldview (internal)
Notes:
👉 C oach’s Tip: I f you’re having trouble figuring out where your story fits, or which
genre it belongs to, don’t give up. Ask yourself -- what story am I really trying to tell
here? Look at your answers from the previous exercise for guidance.
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QUESTION # 03:
Will Your Idea Support a Full-Length Novel?
For most of us, there's nothing worse than the thought of wasting a bunch of time
and energy on a story that's going nowhere. But the truth is that not every idea is
ready to be developed into a full-length work of fiction.
Luckily, there are two different exercises you can use to test out (and flesh out) your
story idea before you start writing the first draft. Let’s dive in.
Exercise #1: Write your storyline.
A storyline is a short summary that gives the gist of your book in 1-2 sentences. It
tells the reader who the main character is, what the conflict is, and what the stakes
are. It’s the WHO, WHERE, WHAT, and WHY of your story, but not the HOW.
Before you write your storyline, I want you to check out these examples by genre.
Notice how they capture the big picture sweep of the story in just 1-2 sentences.
➔ Action // Star Wars: A New Hope - Luke Skywalker, a spirited farm boy, joins
rebel forces to save Princess Leia from the evil Darth Vader, and the galaxy
from the Empire’s planet-destroying Death Star.
➔ Horror // T he Shining - A family heads to an isolated hotel for the winter
where a sinister presence influences the father into violence, while his
psychic son sees horrific forebodings from both past and future.
➔ Performance // Cool Runnings - When a Jamaican sprinter is disqualified
from the Olympic Games, he enlists the help of a dishonored coach to start
the first Jamaican Bobsled Team.
➔ Romance // P ride and Prejudice - Sparks fly when spirited Elizabeth Bennet
meets single, rich, and proud Mr. Darcy. But Mr. Darcy reluctantly finds
himself falling in love with a woman beneath his class. Can each overcome
their own pride and prejudice?
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➔ Morality // Manchester by the Sea - A depressed uncle is asked to take care of
his teenage nephew after the boy's father dies.
➔ Mystery // M urder on the Orient Express - When a murder occurs on the train
on which he's traveling, celebrated detective Hercule Poirot is recruited to
solve the case.
➔ Society // Animal Farm - A successful farmyard revolution by the resident
animals vs. the farmer goes horribly wrong as the victors create a new
tyranny among themselves.
➔ Status // Gladiator - A former Roman General sets out to exact vengeance
against the corrupt emperor who murdered his family and sent him into
slavery.
➔ Thriller // S ilence of the Lambs - A young F.B.I. cadet must confide in an
incarcerated and manipulative killer to receive his help on catching another
serial killer who skins his victims.
➔ War // Black Hawk Down - 160 elite U.S. soldiers drop into Somalia to capture
two top lieutenants of a renegade warlord and find themselves in a
desperate battle with a large force of heavily-armed Somalis.
➔ Western // True Grit - A drunken, hard-nosed U.S. Marshal and a Texas
Ranger help a stubborn teenager track down her father's murderer in Indian
territory.
➔ Worldview // L ove, Simon - Simon Spier keeps a huge secret from his family,
his friends and all of his classmates: he's gay. When that secret is threatened,
Simon must face everyone and come to terms with his identity.
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When you're done writing your storyline, ask yourself and others – does this
story sound interesting to me? Is it something I’d want to read?
If the answer is yes, move onto the next exercise. But if the answer is no, you either
need to re-write your logline to focus on the most interesting parts of your story or
pick a different idea to work with.
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oach’s Tip: Check out the descriptions of movies on i mdb.com (the internet
movie database). There are hundreds of examples that will show you how a 2-hour
movie in your genre can be summarized in one or two sentences.
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When you're done, ask yourself and others – does this story sound interesting
to me? Is it something I’d want to read?
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If the answer is yes, then you're probably ready to start writing the first draft!
But if the answer is no, you'll need to re-write your elevator pitch focusing on the
most important parts of your story -- i.e. the storyline of your global genre. For
example, the focal storyline in a romance is the romantic relationship.
👉 C
oach’s Tip: Browse through the descriptions of your favorite books on
amazon.com. Once you've read through a dozen or so examples, you'll start to see
patterns and understand how to apply those patterns to your own story summary.
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