SE PS2 Chatper 1 2 Corrections and Comments

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1. Approval Sheet (i)


2. Acknowledgement (ii)
3. Abstract (iii)
 Remove table, move it to chapter 3.
 Chlorine dioxide need data, datayo kanun ag pa test sample.
 Location of the treatment plant needs to be highlighted, preferably naka autocad jay location of the treatment
plant with dimensions.
 Location of deep well.
 Add data of chlorine dioxide (laboratory test, name of laboratory).
 PCWC source, add related literatures at the background study; water bills can be used and preferable.
 Remove second table.
 Chlorine dioxide data result needed.
 Schematic diagram will be changed depending on the data result of the chlorine dioxide.
 Kurang kano, add discussion.
 Enumerate, example: a. arsenic b. cadmium
Chapter 3-4:

 Haan na pay kano e check ta kurang data tayo. Kasapulan kano completohin jay table ti required perimeters ti
PNSDW.
 Atidug unay kano jay sedimentation tank tayo nga 6m ta nag basit lang ti Q tayo. (suggest ko is e base tayo
water bill ti pcwc tapno medyo dakdakel ti Q tayo. *awan gamin eh. Nu ipilit ko nga pabasiten length ti
sedimentation tank tayo ket awan ti pumasa nga typical parameters ti sedimentation tank, not unless nu medyo
dakdakel ti Q tayo.)

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