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Flood
Flood
Npm : 2011040141
Class : PBI 6B
Flood
During rainy season, some big cities such as Jakarta and Bekasi will likely drown.
The land and trees are replaced by buildings so nothing can absorb rain waters.
In order to prevent worse flood disasters, government should make better actions.
Then made a clear regulation about AMDAL so no one can find any chance to make excuses.
There should also be a revision in city planning, so green area will be prepared with proper calculation.
By doing this, the forest will be rejuvenated and the land have better management to absorb rain water.
•The use of the word this here should be replaced with the word that, because it is to show something
that is far from us.
•For the separator of two independent clauses that are connected by a linking word. The linking word is
the word “so” so it should be punctuated with a comma (,) before the word “so” so that the sentence
becomes The land and trees are replaced by buildings, so nothing can absorb rain waters.
Source: https://news.99.co/exemplary-article-English-short/
Author: Hanifah