WRITING ASSESSMENT Intensive

FIRSTWRITING ACTIVITY Course

FULL NAME: Luis Gálvez Caballero COURSE:INTENSIVE 4

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LAST NAMES FIRST NAME M.I.
TIME: 11/11/2022
TEACHER’S Ms. Deysi Benavides
NAME: _____________________
________________ ROOM: 604 DATE:
07:30 – 10:00pm

I. PRE-WRITING

Avoid satured.
Do exercise:
Healty food. basketball,Volleyball
Packanged food... Gym,etc.

Laura's
problem.

proper sleep habits. To walk , Run

eight hours.

II. WRITING:
Overleaf, write your paragraph, letter or essay using the ideas you brainstormed above.

Content Organization Grammar 5 Vocabulary Mechanics 3 Total 25

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Comments:

WRITING ASSESSMENT Intensive

 FIRST WRITING ACTIVITY Course

“Dear Laura”, I hope you are in good health. I

reviewed your message and I see that you are worried
about your health. Right now I feel like the right person to
recommend a good eating habit and you can improve your
health. To lose weight and have a good quality of life, I
recommend that you have a good habit in your dreams.
Sleep your 8 hours, I invite you to walk and run. In addition
to all this, I strictly recommend you to eat a good quality
diet, healthy food, avoid saturated fats, packaged,
carbohydrates in large quantities. In addition to this, do
exercises such as basketball and volleyball and if you have
the opportunity I invite you to go to a gym, hydrate
yourself a lot, avoid worries with work and thus you will
solve your health and overweight problems. I hope this is
of your help, I send you greetings and I hope to see you
soon, Take care dear friend.