DRAFTING

1st paragraph
- In 2017 I was an introvert person. Not very talkative.
- I want to change myself to be more confident
- Decide to join a public speech competition.
- Thought of winning the competition

2nd paragraph
- search about public speech
- ask teacher and friend for advice about effective communication
- got new knowledge about the benefit of effective communication
- got support from friends and family.

3rd paragraph
- start to practice a lot
- ask friend about their opinion about my speech
- gain more confident through practice
- finally the competition day come
- I got second place for the competition
- Statisfied with my performance.

4th paragraph
- im no longer a shy person
- join more public speech competition
- happy with myself because I have changed my life
- effective communication has a great effect in life
- thought of winning the competition
- determined that I want to win the competition

- ask teacher and friend for advice about effective communication

- seek advice from teacher and friends about effective communication

- finally the competition day come

- the competition finally came

- happy with myself because I have changed my life

- happy with who I am now that I've made changes in my life.

- I got second place for the competition

- I end up being a runner-up
After gaining new knowledge, I start practicing by my own in my house. I don’t feel
my confident has built up.

After gaining new knowledge, I start practicing by my own in my house however I

don’t feel my confident has built up.

I was so nervous that my hand were shaking

I was so nervous that my hand was shaking

After their explanation about effective communication I now knew about the
benefit of effective communication

After their explanation about effective communication now i knew about the
benefit of effective communication
 My name is Azhan. I was an introvert person. I also not very talkative. I was shy
even among my family. In 2017, I have decided to change myself to be more
confident so I decided to join a public speech competition. Participating in this
particular competition will help me build my confident. I was so determined to win
the competition.

First step, I search about public speech and studied about them.
The next day I went to school I seek advice from my friends about effective
communication. After their explanation about effective communication now I knew
about the benefit of effective communication. After gaining new knowledge, I start
practicing by my own in my house however I don’t feel my confident has built up.

I began practice in front of my friends as I got support from my family and

friends. After every practice session I did, I ask my friend’s opinion about my
speech. They all give me their honest opinion and I’m happy with that because I
can take their opinion and make them useful to me. I have done a lot of practice
and build my confidence through it. The competition day finally came. I was so
nervous that my hand was shaking. Although I went through all those training.
I end up being a runner-up but I pleased with how I perfomed.

- Ever since the competition ended. I’m no longer a shy person. I talk a lot now
thank to effective communication I learn from my teacher and friends. Now I know
that effect communication had a great effect to someone life. I am happy with who
I am now that I've made changes in my life.