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    The student met with their mentor three times to discuss improvements to their TOK exhibition commentary. In the first meeting, the mentor suggested removing the introduction and making the commentary more object-specific. In the second meeting, they decided to change one of the objects and link it better to the prompt. In the third meeting, the mentor advised answering the overarching question about the expert's role in influencing knowledge in a nutshell. The final commentary feedback was positive with no major changes needed.

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    The student met with their mentor three times to discuss improvements to their TOK exhibition commentary. In the first meeting, the mentor suggested removing the introduction and making the commentary more object-specific. In the second meeting, they decided to change one of the objects and link it better to the prompt. In the third meeting, the mentor advised answering the overarching question about the expert's role in influencing knowledge in a nutshell. The final commentary feedback was positive with no major changes needed.

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    Vatssall Roongta - Commentary - MIS

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    The student met with their mentor three times to discuss improvements to their TOK exhibition commentary. In the first meeting, the mentor suggested removing the introduction and making the commentary more object-specific. In the second meeting, they decided to change one of the objects and link it better to the prompt. In the third meeting, the mentor advised answering the overarching question about the expert's role in influencing knowledge in a nutshell. The final commentary feedback was positive with no major changes needed.

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    TOK EXHIBITION: 2022

    MENTOR INTERACTION FORM


    Name of the Student: Vatssall Roongta                                Mentor: Kavita Wandrekar
    Meeting No. Points Discussed Work to be done till
    Date the next meeting.
    Duration
    Meeting 1  Commentary was anecdotal. Take down the
    Introduction not necessary and takes up introduction.
    word limit. Have object specific
    commentary.

    Meeting 2  Object 3 commentary vague. Decided to Show clear linkage


    change object 3, from Spotify Song Credits between object 3 and
    to a Picture of Bodybuilding Influencer prompt.
    Noel Deyzel
    Meeting 3  In a nutshell, answer the question - “The Re-work on the objects
    expert plays a role of _____ in influencing to answer the question.
    our acquisition and consumption of
    knowledge?
    Commentary Commentary was good and no major -
    Feedback changes to be made

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