Writing Marking Sheet: Why Is Global Warming A Problem? What Can Be Done To Reduce The Dangers of Global Warming?

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Developed countries have created many environmental problems in the World,

particularly in their contribution to global warming. Why is global warming a problem?


What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?

There are mounting concerns about how people in developed countries are globally
destroying the environment, especially their contribution to global warming. Humans’
activities are presumed thought to be the main reason for this phenomenon; some
solutions, namely slashing minimizing carbon footprint and regulations introduction,
could be advanced to address this issue.

Environmental quality has started to deteriorate ever since humans utilized natural
resources. Humans’ activities, in other words, are the primary culprit for the degradation
of the environment. Irresponsible disposal of household and industrial waste is in the
first place, which triggers air and water pollution. Vehicle emissions additionally
contribute to the increasing incidence of air pollution, which slowly, but steadily poses a
serious threat to public health. Actions of demolishing clearing forests to make room for
construction of accommodation have also resulted in temperature soar.

It is exceedingly vital to change our ways and take actions to combat these irreversible
climate changes before it is too late. We can initially make every effort to reduce carbon
footprint by flying less, as well as using eco-friendly vehicles, particularly hybrid cars or
electric transportation. Solar, wind or water power, moreover, could be implemented in
the alternative of traditional energy sources like gas and fossil fuel. Government, equally
important, should also impose strict regulations on the way we use plastic bags, which
are maintained the biggest environmental menace. Vietnam provisional government, for
instance, has introduced new regulation for customers to pay extra for the plastic bags
used when going shopping.

In conclusion, although climate changes are the most serious problem on the global
scale, which lead to dire consequences, we can assume responsibility to give solutions
to combat this phenomenon.

Writing Marking Sheet


Task Response Coherence & Lexical Grammatical
Cohesion Resource Range &
Accuracy

6 7 7 7
 Trọ ng tâ m củ a câu  logic nhìn  từ vự ng nhìn  ngữ phá p nhìn
hỏ i nằ m ở global chung là phù chung là phù chung là phù
warming – nên hợ p hợ p, đô i chỗ hợ p
phâ n tích nó kĩ có nét vă n nó i
hơn nữ a

6.5

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