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Portfolio Writing Task - Final Draft
Portfolio Writing Task - Final Draft
Portfolio Writing Task - Final Draft
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5/10/2022
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HAPPYLAND
ignore when going to Long An. Just over 30 kilometers from the center of Ho Chi
Minh City, this place is chosen by many people to entertain on holidays as well as
design one-day tours for relatives and friends. In addition, one of the attractions of
recreating some typical works, excellent culture, and 3-regional cuisine in the S-
shaped country. However, this amusement park is still new and has only recently
opened and had to close while the prolonged COVID epidemic, which has become
desolate, no longer attracts tourists. This essay will discuss the negative features of
Firstly, one of the most controversial subjects is the lack of vacation and picnic
spaces. Although the food stalls still have places for people to rest and eat, most
tourists tend to find places to camp and picnic more. As a result, during vacations or
tourist seasons, these places are still not enough because of the large number of
visitors. It leads to chaos, stuffiness, and discomfort, making anyone who walks in
feel bored and uninterested. So, to attract more visitors, the amusement park should
either widen the corridor or set some restrictions on the area of each individual so
before. Moreover, damaged architecture can also give rise to many complaints and
affect people's emotions when they want to find a place to relax, check in, or take
pictures during the tourist season. Therefore, the government should look for
possible investors for repairs and restorations to draw more tourists back. For
example, conduct new paint, clean up trash or remodel and make some regulations
Finally, because this amusement park is still new and has only recently opened,
there are several limits in terms of service and management. Vendors here take
advantage of vacations and are not regulated tightly, so they charge higher rates to
earn more profit from tourists, resulting in excessive prices. This problem has
resulted in a significant local boycott and a perceived lack of food vendors among
foreign tourists. Unless resolved peacefully, the amusement park will be in danger of
closing for a while. As a result, standards for fair and non-volatile prices must be set
conducting business here more severely so that everyone has to abide by the rules.
In conclusion, HappyLand is well known for its amusement park and expansive
entertainment complex in Long An. However, there are certain problems with the
service and structures, such as the bad and disorganized environment with
expensive foods sold by the food vendors. Therefore, locals and foreign visitors will
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