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A221 BM5 - Argumentative Essay Group 3
A221 BM5 - Argumentative Essay Group 3
A221 BM5 - Argumentative Essay Group 3
SS2: Other than that, we can E2: It also creates racist EXP 2: As an example,
see if one of the one of the sentiments when one from daily newspaper
people made an argument of them brings it up. clippings in 2019, the
about their religion and the issue of marriage,
religion of others, it will cause especially on social
hostility media, is becoming
more prevalent
following the actions of
a few individuals who
were found to be using
fake accounts to
provoke arguments
with each other.
COUNTER-ARGUMENT/REFUTATION:
So, I agree about the useful of curse word in media social cause hostility in
cyberspace. This is because abusive words used will hurt someone's heart.
CONCLUDING SENTENCE:
Therefore, the use of abusive words needs to be controlled by oneself and the
surrounding community to encourage the use of sweet words and sentences that
give good meaning
BODY Argument in the TOPIC SENTENCE: Useful curse word can give bad impact
PARAGRAPH 2
CONCLUDING SENTENCE:
Since it is not good to hear and can give bad impact to someone life. I prefer to
who is using the curse word in their communication in school or home instead will
get a punishment, so they know that we curse words or bad words not good to
other people.
BODY Argument in the TOPIC SENTENCE: Useful of curse word symbolizes the language
PARAGRAPH 3 level of nation
CONCLUDING SENTENCE: For all that happen, education since childhood is the
most important part to prevent that thing to happen. The trend of talking
impolitely and gossiping among teenagers should be given more serious attention
by parents, society, educators, and authorities. The role of parents should be
doubled and they are the best role models for children to emulate. The school
needs to give more opportunities to students to learn manners in communicating
at school and provide the right guidance to practice tactful communication.
Neighbors and the surrounding community need to be more aware of this problem
and help teenagers so that they can practice good and polite language.
BODY Argument in the TOPIC SENTENCE: Useful of curse word on social media can give
PARAGRAPH 4 bad impact on mental health issues.
As we know, social media is a popular platform in every country. This is because social media is
very simple and easy to use. Social media such as WhatsApp, twitter and TikTok become the main
platform for people to socialize and show about individual lifestyles. The facts show that the average
minutes of social media use in each country is 3 to 4 hours while the percentage in a country using social
media is 78.62% and the teenagers hold most of the social media use. So, it is no wonder that social
media is very beneficial to users. However, despite the effectiveness of using social media, it also has a
lot of negative effects on a user and one of them is the use of abusive words on social media. Useful of
curse word on social media will causing hostility in cyberspace, also can give bad impact to other people,
symbolizes the language level of nation, and can give impact on mental health issue.
Useful of curse word on social media can give many bad impacts to us and one of them are will
cause hostility in cyberspace. Nowadays, the use of curse words on social media is very contagious, and
it has become a habit for the community to use it. Worse when the use of these curse words creates
enmity between one faction and another. For example, the issue about slander. Orally, it may be
difficult for humans to speak bad language, but through writing, they are free and fluent in expressing
what in their mind without thinking long and shying away from the intended action. Therefore, social
media has become a place to express negative feelings and thoughts. The impact caused a fight between
him and others. Then, refrain from starting such slander so that peace between people can maintain.
Other than that, we can see if one of the made an argument about their religion and the religion of
others, it will cause hostility. It also creates racist sentiments when one of them brings it up. So, I agree
about the useful of curse word in social media cause hostility in cyberspace. This is because abusive
words used will hurt someone's heart. Therefore, the use of abusive words needs to be controlled by
oneself and the surrounding community to encourage the use of sweet words and sentences that give
good meaning.
Furthermore, useful of curse word can give bad impact to someone life, this is because predator
is not really like to say curse word because it is not good to hear. Like example: stupid or something bad
word. Besides that, useful of curse word also can easily get depression because curse word is more to
insults physical and emotional someone or predator. Like example: saying someone protruding teeth or
fat boy/girl. In addition, using curse word also will leads or encourage people to fight with each other
since it is really bad words and can causing someone got suspended from school. Since it is not good to
hear and can give bad impact to someone’s life, I prefer to who using the curse or bad word in their
communication or school instead will get punishment, so the know that use curse word or bad word in
their communication not good and can give bad impact to other people.
Next, Useful of curse word symbolizes the language level of nation. Beware or not, social media
is a major platform for people to communication. However, lately many seem to be comfortable
communicating using curse word and imprudent language in public places, and on social media. It seems
to be a current communication trend. The use of curse word and imprudent sentences is becoming
increasingly common in casual conversation among the community, especially teenagers. It seems to be
adopted in society when the curse word becomes common in daily conversation or when joking. For
example, in restaurants and in public places, we used to hear them joking among peers by saying words,
such as stupid, shit, pig, dog, whore and so on without paying attention to other people who heard it
and beware or not it will show that the level of our language usage is very low. In addition, if the people
at the social media use the curse word at us, to counter that situation, we can just ignore that chat or
just block their accounts for spamming a curse word at you. So, it can make you less of stress and
prevent from mental health issues. For all that happen, education since childhood is the most important
part to prevent that thing to happen. The trend of talking impolitely and gossiping among teenagers
should be given more serious attention by parents, society, educators, and authorities. The role of
parents should be doubled and they are the best role models for children to emulate. The school needs
to give more opportunities to students to learn manners in communicating at school and provide the
right guidance to practice tactful communication. Neighbors and the surrounding community need to be
more aware of this problem and help teenagers so that they can practice good and polite language.
Lastly, Useful of curse words on social media can gives impact on mental health issues.
As a matter of fact, the victims will through long-lasting emotional effects that can cause depression and
anxiety. However, they may lose interest in things that they once enjoyed and thoughts of suicide also
can set in the stress of regular basis that can steal their feeling of happiness and contentment that lead
to sadness, powerless and hopelessness. Next, the victims may lose their interest in academics perhaps
It can lead to grades dropping because they may find it difficult to concentrate to study that can
continuing to lose interest in their educational and avoid to facing with others in real life and media
social because of being humiliated. Writing challenges are our brain to think about what could be
meaningful to the person they are communicating with. Using meaningful words can brighten people’s
day, or bring a smile. If we chose to write about three to four times a month, and during this time limit
social media usage to four hours a day the percentage of teens with depression will go down drastically,
because without social media you must do new things, by getting out of your comfort zone, and talk to
people directly. With the limitation of social media, it would also cause teens and other people to
explore the surroundings that mother nature offers them. Awareness is the key to preventing online
harassment. They will because more cautious to use technology due to cyberbullying. Moreover,
parents must take their responsibility to monitor their children’s online activities and limit their usage
due to prevent the problem on social media. To help this problem I believe the younger generations
have the capability to live off the internet for communication for a month, this idea would be great for
people to use social skills when talking face to face with people instead of being glued to their phones.
The idea does not sound ideal, but for people to have better social cues, and to help with their mental
state, it is important to take time off social media to better themselves and be happy.