Task 6: Analyzing recount text

Name: 1. Daniel
2. Valencio
3. Radith
4. Darren

Class: 8.1

Generic Structures
No. Recount Text Type Series of
Orientation
Events
1 Diving with Sharks Personal recount Paragraph 1 Paragraphs 2
(Example) to 4
Source: Inspire English International
Year 8 - Student Book pg. 182

2 Historical Recount Paragraph 1 Paragraph 2

Francis Drake and the Voyage of The Golden
Hind to 6
Source: Literacy Unit 3 Year 5 pg. 11
3 Imaginative RecountParagraph 1 Paragraph 2
The First Day Activities Of The Princess
Source: Contoh Imaginative Recount Text to 3

4 Visiting Bali Personal Recount Paragraph 1 Paragraph 2 - 3

Source: Recount Text Learning Materialpg. 2 - 3

5 My First Time in Yogyakarta Personal Recount Paragraph 1 Paragraph 2 - 6

Source: Recount Text Image
ric Structures
Conclusion/
Re- Past Tenses
orientation
Paragraph 5 Past simple:
1. The morning of the shark dive, we were on the boat. (par. 1)
2. It started to melt in the sun; .... (par. 2)
3. Others milled around the fringes, weaving in and out of the pack. (par. 3)
4. I was surprised at this. (par. 4)
5. Back on the boat, we were all exhilarated and excited. (par. 5)

Past continuous:
1. ..., and the adrenaline was pumping quickly. (par. 1)
2. ...; blood was oozing out on the deck. (par. 2)
3. Far from being the terrifying experience we were expecting, .... (par. 5)

Past perfect simple:

1. ..., deliberate circling motions of the sharks had actually made us feel relaxed. (par. 5)

Past perfect continuous:

1. ..., we unanimously agreed that it had been surprisingly calming, .... (par. 5)

Modal:
1. ... and I wondered if I wouldn't be happier sunning myself on deck. (par. 1)
2. ... that sharks would rather eat this muck than a pound or two of fresh, living human. (par. 2)
3. I thought we would just be onlookers, .... (par. 4)
4. ... that it would turn and snap at my fingers. (par. 4)
Paragraph 7 Past Simple:
1. Many of them were laden with treasure, ... (par. 5)
2. ... there years and he was the first English sailor to lead ... (par. 7)

Past continous:
1. The ships were now passing through waters that were usually ... (par. 5)
 Past perfect simple:
1. His voyage had lasted nearly three years and he was ... (par. 7)

Past perfect continuous:

1. The ships were now passing through waters that were usually ... (par. 5)

Modal:
There's no Modal Verbs in the Recount Text
Paragraph 4 Past simple:
1. Princess Adelle was very tired because she was up all night, ... (par. 2)

Past continous:
1. She arrived back at the palace at 3 p.m. (par. 3)

Past perfect simple:

1. She went to a charity event for the orphans held by ... (par. 2)

Past perfect continous:

1. The schedules were even tighter than this. (par. 4)

Modal:
There's no Modal Verbs in the Recount Text
Paragraph 5 Past simple:
1. My friend and his group drove on through mountains (par. 2)

Past continous:
1. There my friend watched young boys were carving away at ... (par. 3)

Past perfect simple:

There's no Past perfect simple sentence in the Recount Text

Past perfect continous:

1. There's no Past perfect continous sentence in the Recount Text

Modal:
There's no Modal Verbs in the Recount Text
Paragraph 7 Past simple:
1. We arrived at Yogyakarta at night. ... (Par. 1)

Past continous:
1. , all of us went to Malioboro street. ... (Par. 3)

Past perfect simple:

There's no Past perfect simple sentence in the Recount Text

Past perfect continous:

There's no Past perfect continous sentence in the Recount Text

Modal:
1. It was my first trip to this city. ...(Par.1)
 Language Features
Specific Participant
1. Captain 'Snoopy' Cooper, our dreadlockedd captain, .... (par. 1)
2. Gary briefed us; .... (par. 2)
3. ..., mainly Carribean reef sharks and blacktips. (par. 3)

feel relaxed. (par. 5)

h, living human. (par. 2)

1. English sailor, Francis Drake, ... (par. 1)

2. ... December 1577 Francis Drake set out from England ... (par. 2)
3. ..., so after some months Drake abandoned two ... (par. 2)
4. Drake's own ship was originally ... (par. 3)
1. That also applied for Princess Adelle. (par. 1)
2. One day felt so long for Princess Adelle and it was
only one ...
(par. 4)

1. He visited some tour agents and selected two tours. (par. 1)

2. The streets are lined with trees and there are many
Old Dutch houses. (par. 2)
3. The second tour to Ubud was a ... (par. 3)

1. There were too many houses. ... (Par. 2)

2. , even the road was also small... (Par. 2)
3. We saw so many merehant with various products... (Par. 3)
4. so we can check it again at home. ... (Par. 4)
 Language Features
Personal Participant Action Verb (Verb 2)
The writer writes his/her experience by using the Par. 1: turned, added
first person point of view in whole story. Par. 2: started, saw, briefed
ktips. (par. 3) Par. 3: gathered, ripped, milled, peered
Par. 4: signalled, joined, bumped
Par. 5: made

The writer writes his/her experience by using the thPar. 1: made

person point of view in whole story Par. 2: sailed, reached
two ... (par. 2) Par. 3: called, decided
Par. 4: called, reached
Par. 5: attack, capture
Par. 6: carry, sailed
 Par. 7: arrived, around(?)

The writer writes his/her experience by using the third

Par. 1: applied, prepared, barely
person point of view in whole story.
Par. 2: tired, tried, woke, washed,
prepared, finished, enjoyed, continued,
hoped,
Par. 3: arrived, attended, finished,
prepared, relieved
Par. 4: tighter, enjoyed

The writer writes his/her experience by using the first

Par. 1: decided, visited, selected, sta
person point of view in whole story.
Par. 2: lined, returned.
Par. 3: stopped
Par. 4: ended, satisfied

The writer writes his/her experience by using the third

par 1 :arrived, spent
person point of view in whole story.
par 2 : tired, decided, walk
oducts... (Par. 3) par 3 : went, bought, printed,
par 4 : took, found, jumped
par 5 : realized, conditioned
 Chronological Connectors
1. Meanwhile, the divemaster signalled to us to mingle with them. (par. 4)

milled, peered

1. At last, Drake's voyage took him almost to the ... (par. 6)

 1. Sometimes, the schedules were even tighter than this. ... (par. 4)

ed, continued,

1. On the day of the tour, he was ready. (par. 2)

1. I think, which made the between a house... (Par. 2)

 Adverb/Adverbial Phrase
1. The morning of the shark dive, .... (par. 1)
2. ..., the engines revving furiosly as a sign for .... (par. 1)
3. ..., and the adrenaline was pumping quickly. (par. 1)
4. Peering anxiously over the side of the boat, .... (par. 2)
5. ..., their anticipation obviously matching ours. (par. 2)
6. Meanwhile, the divemaster signalled to us to mingle with them. (par. 4)
7. ..., gingerly reaching out, worrying that .... (par. 4)
8. From time to time they bumped into me, .... (par. 4)
9. ..., we unanimously agreed that .... (par. 5)
10. ... it had been surprisingly calming - .... (par. 5)
11. ..., deliberate circling motions of the sharks had actually made us feel relaxed. (par. 5)

1. During the reign of Queen Elizabeth I, many important ... (par. 1)

2. ..., new lands to conquer and treasure to plunder. (par. 1)
3. On 13 December 1577 Francis Drake set out ... (par. 2)
4. until he reached the coast of South America. (par. 2)
5. Drake’s own ship was originally called The Pelican, ... (par. 3)
6. Nearly a year after leaving England, ... (par. 4)
7. Unfortunately, ... (par. 4)
8. After two months the storm came to an end ... (par. 5)
9. At last Drake's voyage took him almost to the ... (par. 6)
10. almost to the top of North America ... (par. 6)
11. sail into the Atlantic and then head back to England. (par. 6)
12. He arrived home in September 1580. (par. 7)

1. Her day was never easy. (par. 1)

2. ..., even on national holidays, she got a schedule. (par. 1)
3. It was the first day of 2017 and Princess Adelle was very tired ... (par. 2)
4. ..., she had breakfast with the member of the royal family. (par. 2)
5. ..., so Princess Adelle enjoyed her lunch with the company of social workers and the
orphan children. (par. 2)
6. Horse riding was able to make her happy again and she could refresh her mind ... (par. 3)
7. She was very relieved that the family dinner finished early. (par. 3)
8. She enjoyed it, because she could meet different kinds of people from her activities. ...
(par. 4)

1. My friend stayed in Kuta on arrival. (par. 1)

2. He spent the first three days swimming (par. 1)
3. The first one was to Singaraja, the second was to Ubud. (par. 1)
4. . My friend and his group drove on through mountains. (par. 2)
5. Then they returned very late in the evening to Kuta. (par. 2)
6. The second tour to Ubud was a very different tour. (par. 3)
7. scenery but to see the art and the craft of the island. (par. 3)
8. ...stop was at Batubulan, ... (par. 3)
9. The next stop was Celuk, ... (par. 3)
10.. ... little while for lunch at Sukawati and ... (par. 3)
11.. My friend ten-day-stay ended very quickly beside his
two tours, ... (par. 4)

1. We were still too tired after a long trip. ... (Par. 2)

2. i walk around the neighborhood with my sister just to experience how is it like to be in
Yogyakarta. ... (Par. 2)
3. I bought some wooden figure and T-shirt... (Par. 3)
4. My mom and dad were busy choosing some merchandise to be brought home... (Par. 3)
5. We also took some picture... (Par. 4)
6. ... some place providing Yogya traditional food around the building... (Par. 4)
7. ... visiting some Shopping Malls such as Jogja City Mall... (Par. 5)
8. , that was the reason why we decided to spend more time in air conditioned building like
this. ... (Par. 5)