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Four Women 100 Scenes First Draft
Four Women 100 Scenes First Draft
Four Women 100 Scenes First Draft
PERUZZI
Ikebe wey you carry for section, e don cause
hypertension!-
Peruzzi‘s “Hypertension” begins over...
Chioma puts on her mascara, as a male Igbo accented voice, booms in over
the music...followed by the loud DJ disk scratch sound-
DJ(O.S)
Are you ready!!!
Crowd erupts with cheers.
DJ(O.S)
We’ve got superb entertainment for you people
tonight!
Chioma looks past her reflection in the mirror to the other girls ,
having fun, she‘s not part of any group.
another girl in fish net tights, bare bodied, nipples covered with black
tape walks up to Chioma.
FISH NET GIRL
Hey, do you have a needle?
CHIOMA
No why?
FISH NET GIRL
E be like you never Waka jam for this club.
CHIOMA
You don’t prick customers do you?
FISH NET GIRL
Assholes, I prick ass holes.
Madam Italy (60s), tall, slender, dry, what’s left of bad BBL and boob
jobs, a retired dancer, sex worker, pornstar, wearing a drag that might
look fabulous on someone younger, with a wrap of weed hanging losely on
her glossy lips, she enters the room, puffing smoke, she bee lines to
fish net girl.
ITALY
(French accent)
What ya want mi’ amor.
FISH NET GIRL
I dey find needle.
ITALY
(Grins)
Check the drawer by the stage door, you’re up
next, now hurry.
FISH NET GIRL
Ok, mama, later
She catwalks away, with italy giving her a starting smack on the butt
cheek.
ITALY
(Chuckles)
Go get em girl.
She turns to Chioma, who sighs in expectation.
ITALY
I didn’t see ya come in.
CHIOMA
you weren’t paying attention.
ITALY
Or you’ve been late again.
CHIOMA
I wasn’t, I came-
ITALY
(Cuts in)
your shift was an hour ago and I know about the
service door out back...
Chioma is dumbfounded.
ITALY
I’ve drafted you for the next shift.
She leans against the wall next to Chioma.
ITALY
Now look, you might be a star player but I will
not tolerate lying, lack of commitment and
utter disregard for how we do things here.
CHIOMA
I’m sorry mama.
ITALY
promise me it won’t repeat itself again...
CHIOMA
I promise.
ITALY
You missed the rush hour, you know how much
that cost me?
A BEAT
ITALY
Get some powder on your face, you look pale as
fuck.
She walks away.
Chioma takes a bottle of gin from underneath her table, she takes a sip,
takes off her dressing robe revealing she‘s in a bejeweled bra and
panties, adorned with shiny beads and flowers.
Her glass heels turn.
DJ(O.S)
We’ve got a parade of sexy beauties coming at
you, this is how we go down in the
Cabaret!...feast your eyes!!!
SUPER : TITLES
We follow the back of Chioma‘s hedd s she joins the other girls, like
football players leaving the tunnel, making their way down the hallway.
For a moment we plunge I to darkness, sudden silence engulfs as
well,then--
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A DRONE SHOT OF THE EXPRESS WAY, CARS HONKING, DRIVER’S EXCHANGING VULGAR
INSULTS.
Looking ahead to the horizon.
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52. EXT. TEMILADE‘S HOUSE - EVENING
A taxi speeds into frame, pulls up in front of the building, Temilade
steps out, hands the driver money.
She starts for her door, stops to look at Frederick’s house, the lights
are on.
She crosses over to Frederick‘s place.
She knocks on the door, to no response.
TEMILADE
Hello?, Is anybody home?
(A beat)
Mr Fredrick?!, are you in there?!, Hello?!
She knocks again, to no response, she moves round the building, she takes
a peek through the open windows.
She reaches the backyard, there‘s the open bedroom window.
She peeks in, from her POV we see Fredrick and some lady, having sweaty
sex.
Her mouth drops open, gasps, Fredrick looks up, their eyes meet, she
immediately ducks out of sight.
FREDRICK
Who’s there?!
She crawls away as fast as she can.
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GRAND SHOT OF THE CABARET, IT’S LIGHTS PUT OFF DURING THE DAY, CHIOMA’S
CAR PULLS UP IN FRONT OF THE CLUB.
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67.INT.CHURCH-DAY
The soronous voice of a chorister sing a danceable church music, the
camera moves to different sections of the church and focused on the face
of an excited drummer, and finally focusing on Deborah the singer, she
sings another song that makes the entire church scream in joy, as they
dance, (30ish), moderately beautiful with a very modest outfit and a
really beautiful smile that shows that she's enjoying what she's doing.
DEBORAH
Praise the Lord!!
CHURCH
Hallelujah!!!
The church screams as Deborah finishes the praise session.
A dark skinned woman, wearing tiro walks to the altar as she grins.
WOMAN
Hallelujah!
CHURCH
Amen!
WOMAN
Sister deborah, ah an! This anointing you're
carrying it is heavy o, ah an! The Lord bless
it, so much anointing May God increase it and
bless you for using it in the church.
CHURCH
Amen!
WOMAN
Now let us welcome our pastor, the man that God
is using in this great ministry, the man that
God has created for the sole purpose of heading
this church, pastor Ajayi Folorunsho.
pastor Ajayi Folorunsho (60's), with an expensive looking lace walks to
the altar with a big smile on his face.
PASTOR AJAYI
Praise the Lord!!
CHURCH
Hallelujah!
PASTOR AJAYI
Women leader, thank you for that wonderful
introduction.
Women leader smiles as she nodds
PASTOR AJAYI
Sister Deborah, God bless you very much o, alot
of people have your talent and they're singing
songs like that song that girl sing recently, I
don't even know her name. She went and Sang e
dey rush, e dey rush well well.
The church roars in laughter.
PASTOR AJAYI
No...it's true naw, what exactly is rushing!
These people will be singing devilish and
demonic songs, I don't know what people of the
world are doing I don't even know! As
Christians we need to be careful in singing and
dancing to these songs oh.
WOMAN LEADER
Ride on pastor.
PASTOR AJAYI
This world is now dominated by Satan and his
agents, if not why are people like sister
Deborah not up there, with all this gift and
talent, no they won't see her if it is naked
woman like the ones who dance on poles naked, 5
mins they've gone viral on social media.
The camera moves to the congregation who seem to be listening to pastor
Ajayi, we angle on Deborah who's looking around the church with a worried
Expression on his face.
PASTOR AJAYI
I hope we do more evangelism and bring more
souls to Christ, because the world right now is
going up side down,so today we have someone in
our midst, he's visiting from Los Angeles, my
son Tyler.
A round of applause sounds in the hall, as a very attractive Tyler
(30's)stands up and waves the crowd.
PASTOR AJAYI
After studying in the U.S he has come back
home, without any of those things some children
come home with, inculcate values in your
children, it is important, my son didn't come
home with earrings or those demonic clothes.
That is to show you that he is discipline.
WOMAN LEADER
Ride on pastor.
PASTOR AJAYI
Stand up let us pray.
The entire church stands, as they pray.
68. INT. OUTSIDE CHURCH_LATER
Deborah is in front of her car, with her children Jay (16), but older
looking, wearing a frown, and Kerry(14), too beautiful for her age, with
an annoyed look on her face.
DEBORAH
Pastor Ajayi was preaching and you leave, what
is wrong with you Jay, aren't you supposed to
be keeping your sister out of trouble and in
check?
Kerry rolls her eyes
KERRY
Mom, I do not need looking after I'm 14 I'll be
15 and be done with secondary school soon.
DEBORAH
Doesn't mean you have a right to be rude, or
leave church whenever you want!
JAY
Mummy, don't you ever get tired of shouting!
You're always shouting and that is the problem!
We just left because that pastor is always
standing on the altar and talking a bunch of
rubbish!
DEBORAH
Shhsshh
She looks around, nobody pays attention to them.
DEBORAH
He's a man of God toy can't talk about him like
that, he's preaching the word of God.
JAY
He just stood there and praised you all through
the service, exactly what you enjoy.
DEBORAH
(Sighs)
Get into the car right now, both of you!
They both walk to the car reluctantly. Deborah closes her eyes and sighs
again this time tiredly.
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71. EXT. ROAD - NIGHT
Tyler and Dozie’s car bolts into frame, on high speed.
Neon club lights , stretching out into straight lines as the car zooms
along.
Close up on the open windows, Dozie drives, high and screaming, Tyler is
a little more sober.
The duo vibe to Traboski by BNXN...
DOZIE
Tyler you know what this night out needs?
TYLER
Mehn, not another one of your crazy ideas.
DOZIE
we need to see some girls, you know some fresh
yansh.
TYLER
No, I don’t do prostitutes.
DOZIE
Forget prostitutes, don’t worry I know a place,
this club is high and trending in town.
TYLER
A club?
DOZIE
A fucking Strip club brother!
TYLER
I-i-
DOZIE
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No buts,guy we’re going to have a good TIME!!!
He Laughs hysterically as he sees on the gas, the car fires off.
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74 INT.BAR_ CONTINOUS
He follows her as they move to the bar, where the lighting is better, he
takes a good look at her. The white short and really sexy dress that hung
to every delicate curve of her slim body was ruined, but it showed off
every inch of her perfect body, her legs where long and really slim, with
the face of an angel.
CHIOMA
You're starring.
TYLER
(Stammers)
I...I am...
Chioma watches him amused, Tyler takes a deep breath
TYLER
I'm sorry ...I know you get this alot but damn
you're fine.
She burst into laughter
CHIOMA
Oh my God that's like the craziest way I've
ever been told that I'm fine.
TYLER
Now I feel terrible about the dress, it looks
really good on you, are you sure it's ok? I
could still Pay for it.
She waves him away
CHIOMA
The lockeroom is full of dresses like this.
TYLER
What will you like to drink?
CHIOMA
(To bartender)
Jojo a glass of martini
BARTENDER
Ok ma.
The bartender brings the drink, Tyler gets it from him, as chioma studies
him.
CHIOMA
Really an Armani tux to a strip club?
TYLER
You think I'm underdressed?
CHIOMA
Don't be silly, that's like a 1000 grand.
TYLER
One look at it and you know exactly what it is?
CHIOMA
(Laughs)
In my line of work you learn everything. My
friend used to quote Sidney haggels she'll say,
"know how to flatter a man the right way and
you'll own him even if it's temporary"
TYLER
This your friend must be an interesting fellow,
I thought nobody else knows Sidney haggels but
me, wait where you flattering me?
CHIOMA
(Laughs)
No... or maybe yes, the tux is expensive is it
not? I did too, i thought I was the only person
who knew haggels,untill Tayo said those words.
TYLER
Woah...you read?
CHIOMA
Yeah I'm a big fan of James hardley chase, Nora
Roberts just to mention a few.
Her gaze darkened.
CHIOMA
Youre one of those men, that believe strippers
are dumb right?
TYLER
God no...nothing like that, alot of people are
too busy to read anything. I'm surprised you
find time to.
CHIOMA
Paper backs or Ebooks?
TYLER
Say it's old, say it's outdated I love paper
backs
CHIOMA
On my off days, I like to stay under my
blanket, curl up and read something I don't get
alot of that anymore money must be made.
Dozie walks in on them drunk
DOZIE
Guy...I don't feel so good I really should
leave.
Dozie staggers almost falling Tyler holds him up.
TYLER
I'm so sorry about this.
CHIOMA
Nah it's fine
She drowns her drink in one gulp
TYLER
You didn't even give me a name, or even your
number.
CHIOMA
(Smiles)
Isn't it exhausting holding up that guy? You
should get going.
TYLER
C'mon
CHIOMA
I'm here every night, come by I'll be here, I
need to go get ready for work.
DOZIE
Guy I'm dying.
TYLER
Shut up joor.
He raises his head and she's gone.
TYLER
Where'd she go?
DOZIE
Guy... See I need to throw up.
TYLER
No no you can't do that not here.
He drags dozie outside
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CHIOMA
I'm never going to forget when both women just
had to coexist to find their husband's killer.
TYLER
I cannot imagine it either a model and a
painter what could they have in common.
CHIOMA
Sidney Sheldon has the craziest story lines you
have time admit.
TYLER
And the craziest titles, the sky is falling.
Chioma stops for a moment to stare at him.
CHIOMA
So what? You came to talk about more books with
me?
TYLER
Is that a bad thing?
CHIOMA
I didn't think you'd come tho, if you ever did
I thought it'd be for a lap dance.
TYLER
Not many girls know much about books, but
you're knowledgeable that's enough reason to
want to come back isn't it ?
CHIOMA
(Smiling)
Well.. you're wearing something different
today, no expensive Armani.
TYLER
It's just a tux.
CHIOMA
No it's not, not too many people around here.
A gay looking guy eyes Tyler with a smile on his face, he bends to say
something to chioma and leaves.
CHIOMA
Tyler, I'm so sorry I have to go.
TYLER
But I just got here.
CHIOMA
Work calls.
TYLER
Are you going to leave me hanging again
tonight?
CHIOMA
(Smiling)
I like this mystery, don't you?
TYLER
It's killing me, just let me take you to dinner
please.
CHIOMA
You don't even know my name, what If I'm some
serial killer or something?
TYLER
Why would you target me?
CHIOMA
You're handsome, isn't that enough reason?
TYLER
If you think I'm handsome, I've earned the
right to a name haven't I?
CHIOMA
Where's your phone?
He hands it over to her, she hands the phone back.
CHIOMA
It's chioma, I'm chioma. If Monday night is
good we could go to dinner.
TYLER
Definitely Monday night is great.
CHIOMA
Good night Tyler
She sahsays away from him, he stares with a smile on his face, till she
leaves.
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DEBORAH(V.O)
Where exactly did you go to and got your first
face scratched like this?
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