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Activity Review
Activity Review
I gave 5 because when I was reading the text, I've read all the connections of the words and I saw the
consistency of the main topic.
Grade for the Cohesion of the Text: 3
There are just parts where there are already a lot of problems and situations being discussed and that's where a little
bit of cohesion is getting lost.
I gave 3 because the use of language is not that really balance. There are formal words and also sometimes,
there are informal words too.
I gave 3 because the text is well written but there are other parts where the text has errors in spelling and
punctuations.