Which is better? Attending a concert or watching the same concert at home.

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I would rather to attending a concert because I can see my favorite singer. But at home I can watch
the same concert, I can pause it when I want. The , experience isn’t the same; maybe it will be
funnier to go in a big hall hole with my friends but not all and thousands of people.

The Atmosphere in a concert will be better than staying at home because of the emotion itself of
being there. Music is very loauder at concerts and we can’t talk with my friends. At home I can listen
as louder than as I want. And I can forget the tickets, it’s very expensive not everyone can afford
them. buy.

My opinion is it is better to watching the concert at home if it’s not important for to see the singer,
but you will be with your friends and you won’t aren’t waste money and time.

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Много граматични, лексикални грешки. Трудно за разбиране

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