Aguilar 1

Alexia Aguilar

Dr. J. Martinez

English 1301.212

14 February 2023

Reflection
What I learned from this essay and used in my other class is to stay on one thing and use

my sources. One of the sources that we can use in articles or even the TAMIU library. I learned

how to stay on one topic and expand it for the reader to know what I am trying to talk about. In

some of my other classes, the is the skeletal system. Every professor has their own way of doing

their own thing, so they would want it to be the way they had advised us to do it. The analysis of

community helped me understand what people actually go through to get to what people are

interested in and their hard work to make everything they have been working through advance.

Like in McDonald’s recipe, they took years trying to figure out the right amount of everything

till they finally got it.

I am still figuring out my writing strength, but my weakness is spelling, not using high

vocabulary words, and getting off track. When I am trying to explain something in my head, I

need to give a little back story, so the person knows what I am talking about, but sometimes I

expand it more than I should. I learned when they read my essay, they usually comment on my

spelling. I learned in this essay that I need to really go deep into the reading to find what I need

to write my essay. The most challenging thing about trying to do an essay is trying to put my

ideas together and trying to expand it all. The conclusion is the least difficult because it is just

putting everything together. It is just a summary of the whole essay. My writing has changed the

way I do my essay. I stayed on the topic more, and I learned to expand the information without

changing the subject too much.