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Rhetorical Analysis Essay
Rhetorical Analysis Essay
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Sarah Becker
English 137H
Professor Taheri
9 October 2022
The French Revolution was a historical period for France as it led to the abolishment of
feudalism and the destruction of the Old Regime. The rise of the American Revolution and other
new ideas influenced the citizens of France to rebel against the current monarchy. Most
individuals recognized the importance of changing the division of classes, but one of the
overlooked events was the transformation in women’s rights. Because the French revolution
involved the entire country and not just one group of people, women had the opportunity to take
a stand and object to the laws for their rights. One major document created was the Declaration
of the Rights of Woman written by French feminist and activist Olympe de Gouges. She fought
for the same rights that men asked for during the revolution through the establishment of the
Declaration of the Rights of Man by Jean-Jaques, another French activist. The Declaration of the
Rights of Woman became a powerful archive through the use of kairos during the French
Revolution, the commonplace ideology of women’s inequality in society, and de Gouges’s strong
The kairos of the French Revolution enhanced the influence of this document as the
revolution changed the economic, political, and social aspects of life in France. France was
falling apart as there was such a large division between the three social classes and the abuse of
power by the monarchy. De Gouges used this revolution as a way to gain women’s rights
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because of how the revolution impacted the entirety of France. This document was created in
1791, which was shortly after the Revolution began. The document's preamble recognizes all
types of women, “Mothers, daughters, sisters, female representatives of the nation ask to be
constituted as a national assembly” (de Gouge). The national assembly represented all citizens of
France during the revolution who favored amending economic and political laws. De Gouge
wanted it to be well known that she, alongside all other women of France, should have the same
opportunities as any man to help make a change. Moreover, de Gouges’ objection to the Old
Regime’s laws against women was particularly difficult to defend, as most radical men of the
Revolution were against women’s rights. “...(The declaration of the rights of women), clearly
identified the legislators’ exclusionary politics and attempted to include women and people of
color in the founding charter of the French Republic” (Vanpee 53). Although this was a
revolution for all, it was challenging to find other powerful figures willing to support her cause.
Most men wanted this revolution to change class divisions and the power of the government.
Alongside that, the Declaration of the Rights of Man was created during the French revolution
but failed to include women in these basic rights that they were asking for, such as freedom of
speech and representation. The French Revolution was a kairotic moment as it heightened the
All women felt a similar commonplace during the mid-century because of France’s
highly oppressive laws. They created a like-minded community to solve this issue because of the
similarities they all shared–regardless of social or political status. The Declaration of the Rights
of Woman was a document all women could relate to, hence creating a commonplace for the
women of France. In the 1700s and 1800s, women were seen as the sole purpose of creating and
raising children, even by male revolution activists. For example, one of the most radical
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revolutionary activist groups, the Jacobins, had members who said that it was a “civic
responsibility” (Scott 3). for women to engage in acts such as breastfeeding to uphold their duty
to society and had the strong belief that even women could not help in this revolutionary
advancement, which is quite ironic as it was created to help all French citizens, not just white
males. Furthermore, in de Gouges' preamble, she starts by stating how the government has
wronged the women of France. “Considering that ignorance, neglect, or contempt for the rights
of woman are the sole causes of public misfortunes and governmental corruption…” (de
Gouges). This sentence alone demonstrates how the corrupted First Republic of France denied
inalienable rights to women and how this revolution was the time to fix it. Putting this phrase in
the first paragraph and including it in the last paragraph establishes how the commonplace of
women’s rights in France created such a strong argument for de Gouges to grab the attention of
her audience. This commonplace sparked protests started by women, including the Women’s
March of Versailles, where women demanded change within their community. The similar
beliefs that all of these women held allowed them to become a stronger force because of the
Olympe de Gouges’s postscript is one of the strongest parts of this document, as she uses
rhetorical proof to engage her audience. The laws that were placed into this writing came from
the Declaration of the Rights of Man document to show how men and women should be equal,
but the conclusion of de Gouges’s writing is filled with ethos. First, she has gained the trust of
the audience by also being a fellow woman who is being affected by these cruel laws that
overlook the true power of a woman. The reason her statements are so impactful is that she is
telling the truth. She counterargues her own opinions by stating how women only needed to do
two things to be “successful” in life. For example, “A woman only had to be beautiful and
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amiable; when she possessed these two advantages, she saw a hundred fortunes at her feet” (de
Gouges). Her truthfulness in saying how women technically had everything they needed during
The Old Regime, yet still says women deserve much more than that, catches the audience’s
attention. She holds the audience’s trust because she does not just say what the audience wants to
hear but also says what they do not want to hear. Having a sense of realism in her ending
paragraph supports the idea of how women have been brainwashed by society to follow their
“duty” as a woman.
Following that, de Gouges' powerful use of pathos is created through her use of diction
and examples that create emotion within her audience. For instance, “A young woman without
experience, seduced by the man she loves, abandons her parents to follow him; the ingrate leaves
her after a few years, and the older she will have grown with him, the more his inconstancy will
be inhuman. If she has children, he will still abandon her” (de Gouges). This message is so
emotionally-provoking because many women can resonate with this same story. Because of the
limited rights they were given, they had little to no choice but to follow their husbands. The use
of pathos allowed the audience to gain a connection with the writer and the document itself.
Along with that, she showed what women are to society. For instance, “On the one hand, she
attacked women as they were – indulgent, frivolous, seductive, intriguing and duplicitous…”
(Scott 9). This phrase emphasizes the idea that women are described as these not very
complimenting adjectives because of how the nation has created them to be. These five words
make women feel angry, sad, or distraught. Emotions such as enragement are one of the most
powerful ways to start a change or rebellion because feelings this strong make one want to act on
them. De Gouges had a particular way of developing pathos throughout her writing, which was
by making her audience furious and bitter about the way they were treated by society.
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The Declaration of the Rights of Woman, written by activist Olympe de Gouges became
empowering through the use of a kairotic moment, commonplaces, and rhetorical proofs. The
French Revolution was one of the most rebellious events in French history because of the impact
and outcome it would have on France in the future, hence why this document became so
influential for women. The fact that this was a serious issue for women across France showed
how having commonplaces could seriously impact writings such as de Gouges’s. Also, her use of
ethos and pathos in her ending paragraph persuaded her audience of, not just women but all of
France, to give women the rights they deserve. Although women may not have been given their
rights right away, this intelligent piece of writing would mark a step forward in women's rights
across Europe.
Works Cited
“Olympe de Gouges, The Declaration of the Rights of Woman (September 1791),” LIBERTY,
2022, https://revolution.chnm.org/d/293.
Scott, Joan Wallach. “French Feminists and the Rights of ‘Man’: Olympe de Gouges’s
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Vanpée, Janie. “Performing Justice: The Trials of Olympe de Gouges.” Theatre Journal, vol. 51,