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25 Apr. 2023
a snail was named the culprit because its shell had popped the
car’s tire. That would be the Giant African Snail, a snail that
feeds on over five hundred types of plants and trees and causes
snails found their way here and caused enough damage to require long-term eradication events
and their subsequent banning. Though even after their banning, there have been two other
quarantines to allow for re-eradication efforts. How is it that Giant African Snails continue to
appear even after the government banned their transportation and possession and deemed them a
serious threat? The answer is that humans disregard the ban because we misunderstand the
dangers of nature and misinterpret our place in the ecosystem. We misbelieve that as humans, we
are invincible to all dangers in nature and have the ability to control all aspects of nature and
shape it to our will when in reality, nature is a much stronger force than we can imagine. The
number of African Snail outbreaks reveals that humans have chosen to and still choose to view
nature as weak and harmless, even when there are a multitude of obvious signs that indicate
peril. In a reimagined vision of nature, humans have an innate obligation to leave nature
undisturbed, since any nature in the hands of humans is abused, destroyed, and destroys us. In
the case of Giant African Snails, humans in this vision avoid the African Snails since there is no
mutually beneficial reason to interact with the snails. Any interaction in the past regarding snails
has been selfish and, on more than one occasion led to an outbreak. The perfect solution involves
as little interaction as possible and only collaborating when both parties are able to benefit. Any
other case inevitably creates room for human greed to overpower judgment and become the sole
Humans have been around for tens of thousands of years. Over that time, we gained immense
amounts of knowledge and amassed over seven billion people. Now that we span the globe,
some might say that we are the dominant species on the planet, but those people are mistaken -
nothing spans the Earth as prominently as nature does. As we transformed the environment
around us and learned about ourselves and the Earth, we began to misunderstand where exactly
we stand in our enormous ecosystem. Humans believe that they are at the top of the food chain
when in reality, we are subject to all of the dangers of nature because of that misaligned belief.
Nature has inherent dangers like climate, terrain, and predators. Every year, forty-seven thousand
people are attacked by animals in the wild (Conover, 1); over twenty-three thousand people died
in mountain-related activities from 1970 to 2010 (Gatterer et al.), and more than three thousand
people died in 2007 from unintentional drowning incidents (WKU). The common denominator
in all these statistics is the humans who put themselves in life-threatening situations. These
numbers are only a fraction of the
demonstrate their strength, and when people see others accomplishing great feats and
overcoming nature by climbing Mt. Everest or biking dangerous courses, they feel more and
more compelled to be one of those successful athletes. As a result, there are incredibly high death
rates from people who believed they were impervious to nature and were proven wrong in their
attempts to conquer nature. It is no wonder then, that humans underestimate and outright reject
the danger of snails. Humans believe they are so above nature that they are immune to the
obvious threat it poses to our race. When people see these Giant African Snails, they do not see
the inherent hazard that the U.S. government has deemed the species because their arrogance
blinds them from the truth that danger does not have to be actively visible to be danger. The
people who understand nature to be dangerous can envision the potential risk that African Snails
carry, and act accordingly to mitigate the danger to themselves and others. On the other hand,
arrogant humans cannot fathom the danger that a small snail poses when their interpretation of
danger is based on that which is obviously dangerous, like a lion or bear. It does not pose a
threat, so it is something of a non-issue. Instead, they see the snail as another status symbol.
“They become increasingly popular as pets in recent years” and “they are also very beautiful and
cute. It will make a great decorative addition to any household.” (Michael). Although
unsurprisingly, if one were to question people on the risks of owning an African Snail, people
would not know. Snails are not dangerous. I could get rid of a snail. What could one snail even
do?
What could one snail even do? Against a human, snails are minuscule and easily taken care of.
This line of thought is common for humans who do not understand that nature is not to be taken
lightly. Humans have spent so much time molding our environment and shaping our ecosystem,
that we falsely believe we are free to manipulate and control all aspects of nature. It is this
arrogance that caused the two African Snail outbreaks following the species’ ban. For millennia,
humans have changed nature to suit their needs, whether it be for shelter, food, or comfort.
Around 50,000 years ago in Australia, humans burned and removed the undergrowth in order to
hunt more efficiently for food and influence the growth of certain crops (Brin). 100 years ago,
we mined for coal to create long-lasting energy, and even today humans are fracking for oil and
natural gas to heat our homes and power our vehicles. Through time we have exercised our
ability to manipulate the environment for our needs, but the consequence of these cases is an
oversimplified generalization toward our view of nature. We erroneously believe that because
humans have been able to control nature in these and other cases for our benefit, then as humans,
we can manipulate any part of nature for whatever reason suits us, when ultimately, that is not
the case. Humans attempting to change nature for self-centered reasons often result in failure
because they are short-sighted and cannot see the complexity of nature. People who try and plant
invasive species because they are appealing, often do not understand when the other plants in the
consequence of reintroducing African Snails into the U.S. Humans who foolishly believe they
have the power to dominate and mold nature to our will dismiss the warnings placed by the
government, and choose to take these Giant African Snails from their natural habitat to eat them
or bring home as pets. Once these people are proven wrong, the fuse has already been lit, and
they can only sit back and watch as nature unfolds against their will and exerts its dominance
over a scale much larger than that one human could have anticipated. This is what one snail
could do.
How do we prevent these outbreaks from happening in the future? In an ideal situation, Giant
African Snails are not disturbed by humans, and with no one perturbing them by taking them
from their natural habitat for humans’ selfish desires, there will be notably less chance of another
outbreak. The reason for humans leaving African Snails alone is based on humans having an
intuitive obligation to leave nature untouched, because humans lack the foresight to plan for
danger when disturbing nature for selfish reasons, and consequently leads to nature being abused
and destroying us. Taking the case of the 1915 property boom in Miami Beach into
consideration, over a thousand structures were built in anticipation of the desire for waterfront
real estate (Steinberg, 35). Those who built in that time were likely ecstatic to see that the
anticipated the dangers of so many buildings on the unsteady ground because they were too
focused on short-term gain. In 1926, danger struck as a category 2 hurricane reduced all of the
recently-built houses to rubble, and nobody had expected it at all. The millions made in property
value over ten years were lost in less than a week. It was this desire to transform nature which
quickly became a plan to abuse nature for self-centered goals. This showed that those
participating were too focused on the short-term goal and not planning long-term to see the
possible danger that nature presented. Seeing how people take Giant African Snails from their
habitats and disturb nature for their own desires in an attempt to own the snail as a pet or eating it
as a ‘delicacy,’ people quickly lose sight of the possible consequences, which leads to more
outbreaks. In this new vision, humans and nature are able to peacefully coexist because humans
are not perturbing nature. With no people trying to transport the African Snail to the U.S., no
outbreaks can happen in the future from humans misjudging the danger of a snail.
To the last point, some would argue that humans have been able to use nature to their advantage
and leave both nature and humans unharmed in the process. While this is true, the circumstances
were different, as the use of nature was for the betterment of the majority. An example would be
planting native species in order to foster biodiversity and increase bee populations. In this case,
humans used nature as a way to increase bee and insect populations to allow for more pollination
of U.S. produce, since pollination accounts for “one in three bites of food” humans eat every day
(Randall). By manipulating nature, humans have been able to allow more access to food around
the world, while fostering increased biodiversity and preserving different recently-endangered
species. The difference between this claim and the one before lies within the exigence of humans
disturbing nature. The reason for humans and nature being separate in this reimagined vision is
that humans are taking these African Snails not for the betterment of humans as a whole but for
their pleasure. People want these snails as pets or food, which has no value to our community,
whereas planting native plants was done in order to feed our population and protect the
biodiversity of our land. It is imperative that humans sometimes rely on and use nature, but the
underlying reason for the use is the defining factor in whether or not the manipulation is
warranted. In the case of Giant African Snails, there is no reason for humans to interfere with
nature, since at this point, the interference solely stems from humans’ selfishness.
Understanding that humans are subject to arrogance and greed is incredibly important for
understanding how to interact with nature. Instead of the current scenario where outbreaks
continue from human oversight and hubris, the best course of action is a new vision; one where
humans are taught to respect nature and acknowledge that not all dangers are immediately
inner desires
allowed to live in peace out of the hands of selfish humans, and humans have both prevented a
number of potential future outbreaks and gained more knowledge that can be put to use in other
aspects of nature or their own lives. This channeling of inner desires works as a creative outlet
where selfish desires to manipulate nature are discussed and turned into problems regarding the
community, and people work together in order to brainstorm methods of creating a solution that
benefits the majority while not harming nature. In this way, having selfish desires does not lead
to making short-sighted decisions that end up affecting many. The desires become the catalyst to
solve problems that will benefit not only humans, but potentially, and hopefully, the environment
as well. This idea hinges on the fact that humans will take advantage of nature in order to satisfy
their own desires and helps to realize that in order to make meaningful changes within nature, the
desire to manipulate nature must be met with good intentions. When humans are able to come
together for a common purpose, they are able to see a bigger picture than a small group operating
with a selfish goal in mind. This recognition of the bigger picture allows for a more holistic
approach to manipulating nature, one that works toward the benefit of our community while not
disturbing nature but affecting it in such a way that promotes positive growth. If any uses for
Giant African Snails were to arise in the future, so long as they are for the benefit of the
population, then in utilizing them, humans will not gain while being at the expense of nature.
While this vision applies to African Snails, it can be tailored to many other situations. In the
search for new types of fuel, making sure to keep nature in the foreground will help to prevent
more destruction of the atmosphere. In the case of feeding a growing population, keeping in
mind nature’s need to feed itself in order to provide food for humans is imperative. Looking at
our past, it is painfully obvious that short-term gain governed our manipulation of nature, but
looking forward, we have the ability to learn from our mistakes and grow from our interactions
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Brin, Lindsay Devon. “Fire and Ice: The Relationship Between Humans and the Environment.”
http://fubini.swarthmore.edu/~ENVS2/S2003/lindsaydevon/firstessay_fireandice.html.
In this source, Brin provides an unbiased description of the major ways in which humans have
used nature over the course of human history. Brin begins with the use of fire and tools to assist
in hunting, passes through fracking and mining for fossil fuels for heating and transportation, and
ends with a question and statement surrounding the need for alternative sources of fuel due to the
increasing amount of greenhouse gas in the atmosphere. This source is helpful to my paper
because it sets a background for past manipulation of nature, which is important to advancing my
claim that having altered nature in the past made humans believe that we can now manipulate
Conover, Michael R. “Numbers of Human Fatalities, Injuries, and Illnesses in the United ...”
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In this source, Michael Conover studies the number of injuries, illnesses, and fatalities from
animal attacks in the wild in the U.S. Conover found that over 47,000 people are injured by
animal attacks in the wild every year, and more are injured in collisions with animals. This
source is important to my paper because it outlines the dangers humans face from nature, and
helps build into my claim that humans feel invulnerable to nature. This source is similar to the
source directly below it surrounding mountain sports, but this source defines danger from
animals in nature, which aligns with my overall claim that snails are dangerous, and helps build
Gatterer, Hannes, et al. “Mortality in Different Mountain Sports Activities Primarily Practiced in
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https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC6843304/.
In this source, researchers studied the number of fatalities per 1000 people related to practicing
mountain sports in the summer around the world. They found that the risk of death was high
when people attempted activities involving high-altitude climbing or paragliding, and that risk of
death was associated with a single attempt per person, as opposed to multiple ventures per
person. This research study is important to my paper because it outlines the dangers humans face
from nature, though more specifically, the unnecessary danger that humans put on themselves
while in nature, which helps me create and advance my claim that humans feel they are
Michael. “Are Land Snails Good Pets? Pros and Cons.” Aquarium Breeder, 22 Mar. 2023,
https://aquariumbreeder.com/are-land-snails-good-pets-pros-and-cons/.
This source is a comparative article about the pros and cons of owning a Giant African Snail.
Michael notes that there are many pros to owning an African Snail, such as being low-
maintenance and easily breedable in captivity. Michael does not go into detail about the possible
diseases that African Snails carry, and glances over the fact that snails can carry diseases and that
they may be illegal to own in some states from their potential to become invasive. This source is
perfect for my paper because it highlights the ignorance that people have towards African Snails,
and helps me build my claim that people are unaware of the dangers that African Snails pose to
Randall, Brianna. “The Value of Birds and Bees.” Farmers.gov, NRCS Working Lands for
bees#:~:text=Honey%20bees%20alone%20pollinate%2080,types%20of%20fruits
%20and%20vegetables.
In this USDA article, Brianna Randall reports on the declining pollinator populations and notes
how imperative they are to the food we produce. Randall notes that after pollinator populations
began declining, people began manipulating nature by planting native plants, which gave
pollinators sustenance and provided the plant owners with plants and food. This source is
important to my claim because it addresses a defence to the possible counterargument that people
have been able to manipulate nature without destroying it our ourselves. This source highlights
the exigence for the manipulation of nature, which is especially helpful since it allows me to
Steinberg, Ted. Acts of God. Available from: Yuzu, (2nd Edition). Oxford University Press
Acts of God, by Ted Steinberg, is a review and critical analysis of natural disasters occurring in
the U.S. with an emphasis on the human component of the occurrence of these disasters.
Steinberg believes that human neglect and intervention with nature have foreshadowed and
increased the damage of these disasters, and resulted in the unnecessary death and displacement
of the poor and disenfranchised communities, the ones who are hit hardest when disasters strike.
This source is important to my paper because it provides evidence of greed and selfish desire
leading to an oversight in the manipulation of nature, which helps me advance the argument that
I make in my defense of the counterargument. Before qualifying the manipulation of nature, this
source helps to outline the qualification for not manipulating nature as being for selfish desire.
“Unintentional Drowning: Fact Sheet.” WKU News, Western Kentucky University, 24 June
2010, https://www.wku.edu/news/articles/index.php?
view=article&articleid=722&return=archive.
This source examines the number of unintentional drownings and finds that much of the
associated risk is from people who are not prepared in natural water settings with safety gear like
life jackets or who are intoxicated around the bodies of water. This source is helpful to my paper
because it assists with the other two sources in communicating the possible dangers of nature.
This source specifically highlights the fact that accidents happen because of human fault, which
helps to further my claim that people end up dying in nature because they do not see nature as
dangerous, and therefore do not need to be careful around nature because they are invincible to
it.
“Why Is It Illegal to Own a Giant African Snail in the United States?” AskUSDA, U.S.
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%20or%20owning,peas%2C%20cucumbers%2C%20and%20melons.
This source outlines the reason for the ban on Giant African Snails in the U.S. The USDA finds
that the ban was implemented due to the rapid reproduction of the snail, its diet consisting of
many types of trees, over 500 plants, and its affinity to eat paint and stucco on houses. The snail
also carries a parasite called lugworm which when contracted in humans causes meningitis and
possibly death. This source is important because it sets up the common ground and conceptual
problem for my paper, and gives an understanding of the dangers of African Snails. It also assists
the setup for my major claim that people do not see the dangers in nature, and my other claim
that people believe they can manipulate nature for whatever they see fit.
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In this Channel 5 news article, Erin Thomas outlines the importance of bees in our lives. Thomas
points out that bees pollinate around 90% of our plants, and that without bees, we would be
without many types of flowers and cotton, and we would have less livestock. This source is
important to my claim because it helps to address a positive side to manipulating nature. A side
where helping nature has also helped humans. This source is important because it helps my other
Steinberg, Ted. Miami, 1926. Available from: Yuzu, (2nd Edition). Oxford University Press
Yamamoto, Glen. “A New Sign Was Posted at the Notoriously Dangerous Olomana Trail on the