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Rta Final Final Draft 1
Rta Final Final Draft 1
Kaitlyn Eveleth
James Smith
ENGL 2010
April 5, 2023
Humanitarian efforts to diminish things like world hunger are widely known, and people
think of these programs as the good samaritans of the 21st century, but one man named Garrett
Hardin thinks otherwise. Hardin's “Lifeboat Ethics: the Case Against Helping the Poor '' explains
his views on helping poorer countries. He argues that things like the world food bank and
immigration are the commons in our modern-day tragedy of the commons. Harden uses an
overly simplistic metaphor of comparing the earth to a lifeboat, he says the people of richer
countries are aboard this metaphorical lifeboat while people of poorer countries are adrift in the
sea. Hardin then explains that humanitarian efforts may have good intentions, but they might not
help poorer countries in the long run, he claims that providing food and aid when needed will
prompt poorer countries do not learn from past experiences and not learn to do better in the
future because of a lack of independence, Hardin argues that this codependency upon foreign aid
causes their populations to grow unchecked and generate more unneeded strain on the
environment. Hardin’s solution was to have countries be solely responsible for their well-being
and create awareness of the dangers of the commons so that people will recognize its many
Hardin’s use of ethos, pathos, and logos in “Lifeboat Ethics: the Case Against Helping
the Poor '' constructively represents what he imagines are issues with helping the poor. This
article was written in 1974, by Garret Hardin who seems to be a leader of environmental
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movements in his time. It seems the intended audience for this document are the people within
article was published in a popular magazine titled Psychology Today, this magazine company
was first started up in 1967 to give the general public more information about psychology
(“About Psychology Today | Psychology Today”). This article is a part of the conversation on
how to better protect our environment, and other things like population control, and foreign aid.
Beginning with how Hardin uses ethos, Hardin uses ethos by taking notes and
acknowledging people's ethics and then he continues to show how those ethics are unrealistic
from his point of view. He uses multiple sentences that appeal to ethos in an attempt to make the
reader trust his credibility and knowledge. In the section titled “Adrift in a Moral Sea” at the end
of the first paragraph Hardin finished by saying “The boat swamps, everyone drowns.” which
rhetorically implies how he thinks a person's ethics to help everyone are unrealistic which leads
one to believe he has great knowledge about the subject. While the article's appeal to ethos is not
half bad it is not all that great either, Hardin's appeal to ethos uses biased language like “U.S
liberals” in the second to last paragraph of the section “Immigration Vs. Food Supply”. This
makes the appeal to ethos not as strong because it comes off as unkind, and offensive, and it is a
way to undermine the other-sides credibility which is not how a mature writer who successfully
has a strong connection to ethos writes. Another example of an ill connection to ethos is in the
section “Population Control the Crude Way” Hardin says that without something like the world
food bank populations in poorer countries might “stabilize” and decrease, Hardin, however, does
not mention that there are different causes for unstable or increased numbers in poorer countries
populations, things like age, religion, higher fertility rates (Osoro), etc… Hardin avoids the fact
that having food supplied from other countries and other forms of foreign are not the only factors
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in the multifaceted topic, this is a manipulative use of ethos because Hardin lacks the
acknowledgment of the other factors and is not providing complete and accurate information
about the issue, that leads one to not trust a writer's credibility.
Hardin uses pathos in all parts of the article, a good example of how he used pathos is in
the section titled “Immigration Vs. Food Supply” He quotes a Hawaiian speaker and says “We
have children now, and someday we’ll have grandchildren too." That is not the only time he
mentions posterity and family in his article, the reason he mentions things like posterity and
family so frequently is that it brings forward feelings of love and protectiveness in the reader and
overall makes the reader feel more connected emotionally. Hardin’s use of pathos is how he
While Hardin has a strong connection to pathos and his connection to ethos is not half
bad, his connection to logos is sketchy. If Hardin has successfully made the reader believe he has
credibility and is worth reading more, his appeal to logos would be good, but his appeal to logos
is sloppy, and his connection to logos is weak because he provides little to no evidence behind
his claims. For example in the section titled “Learning the Hard Way” Hardin says “As a result
of such solutions to food shortage emergencies, the poorer countries will not learn to mend their
ways.” If one takes a close look at this one would notice that Hardin does not provide any
evidence that proves what he says is true, instead, he is presenting a theory of what MIGHT
happen, and not what WILL happen, to make his claims seem logical. Hardin uses very little
evidence throughout his whole article and he mostly relies on pathos and ethos to create a
semi-persuasive article.
While his rhetorical appeals are mild, Hardin had great organization, he titled his sections
to make information easy to find and he had seamless transition sentences. He used his tone
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quite well while making his main claim that wealthy people shouldn’t help the poor because
Hardin's article constructively represented what he believes the issues are with helping
the poor; he used ethos in an attempt to build his credibility, and he used pathos to build a
stronger emotional connection between the audience and the article so he could show how his
claim is true, and his slight use of logos was able to showcase how illogical he thought it was to
help the poor. Harin’s “Lifeboat Ethics: the Case Against Helping the Poor '' is most likely very
persuasive for people of the same political party as Hardin, while this article is genuinely very
well-written, it is not persuasive to anyone who does not share all the same political beliefs as
him. Overall, Hardin’s article has good organization, tone, language, and a decent appeal to
ethos, pathos, and logos, as mentioned before it is well-written and informative, but Hardin could
have done better at providing more evidence for his claims which would have brought this article
Works Cited
“Lifeboat Ethics: The Case Against Helping the Poor.” DigitalGeorgetown Home,