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Week 4 Homework
Week 4 Homework
Week 4 Homework
Isabella Ramos
9 February 2023
Week 4 Homework
1. Make a list of the things you will look for in your essay when you proofread.
- A clear thesis
- The purpose/audience
- Grammer
- Clear language
2. What day and at what time will you set aside to proofread your essay?
3. Who will you ask to read your essay before you submit it?
4. What day and time have you set this reading for?
- I will go to the writing center on Tuesday and have my peer reviewed feedback
by Wednesday
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What are the three things you’ll change based upon your peers’ responses? Why will you change
each one?
1. Write a more clear and focused thesis statement. My thesis is towards the middle of my
paper and adding it to the intro will make my essay more clear
2. Fix grammatical errors and format issues. This will make my essay easier to read.
What are three things you’ll keep despite your peers’ responses? Why will you keep each one?
1. I will keep my thesis where it is because I feel it flows better with the experiment.
What work do you have left to do after today to successfully complete the project?
3. Add a title
4. Proofread my essay