Name: _______________________________________________ Date: ___________________________

Working with Peer Feedback

Directions: In the space provided below respond to these questions.
What are the three things you’ll change based upon your peers’ responses? Why will you change each one?
1. I would try to change the topic and maybe decide what I mainly want to focus on. I want to change it to give the
readers a better understanding of what I want to talk about.

2. I will try to follow the prompt and the example essay given. I had a hard time understanding what the prompt was
and what I had to write about so I wrote something I thought was the prompt.

3. I will include more information about the prompt, topic, and examples. It will give the reader a better
understanding of what they are reading and what I hope they would like or maybe be interested in.

What are three things you’ll keep despite your peers’ responses? Why will you keep each one?
1. I will try to keep some of my transitions. I like how some of my transitions came out and I feel that they do not
need to be changed.

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What work do you have left to do after today to successfully complete the project?

1. I need to restructure my essay to be able to fit more words and possibly create more vocabulary words.

2. I want to include more/clearer transition to the beginning and in between sentences.

3. I need to decide my topic, prompt, and examples that I will use to clear my essay.

4. I need to elaborate more on my essay.

5. Give more information needed to provide both ideas and examples.

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