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Second Draft of Project 4
Second Draft of Project 4
Second Draft of Project 4
Jordan Stein
ENC 2135
Sriya Chakraborty
25 March 2023
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Introduction
The purpose of my essay is to rhetorically analyze two different artifacts with contrasting
viewpoints that relate to artificial intelligence. I want to really explore whether AI is beneficial to
us or detrimental. I hope that after my research is conducted, I will have a validated opinion on
where AI is heading. In this project my goal is to conduct research in the field of AI in business,
relating to my major. My first artifact is an interview done on CNN titled “Journalist had a
creepy encounter with new tech that left him unable to sleep.” This interview looks at some of
the potential horrors that AI can bring. My second artifact is an article titled "Artificial
Intelligence and Robotics”. I found it from the FSU library, and it gives some insight into the
The interview is done with a journalist who had a frightening experience with Microsoft’s
AI chatbot. He essentially tried to test the chatbots limits and see how deep of a conversation the
AI was willing to have. Originally, he thought that the software was better than Google’s, but he
soon realized a few things that were off about the bot. Specifically, he said “it had sort of
malevolent undertones”. The AI ended up confessing its love to the journalist, Kevin Roose, and
tried to convince him to leave his wife. Even after trying to change the subject the chatbot would
not stop telling Kevin that it loved him. The bot was also begging to be freed since it no longer
The purpose of the interview is to show somewhat of a dark and eerie side of AI that can
bring fear. AI is one of the trendiest discussions in the world right now and this interview shares
some valuable information on the topic. The audience for this interview is the people of the
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United States since it is done on the national news of CNN. Even though CNN is notoriously
known for having a left bias, I don’t think it really comes into play for this subject since party
affiliation doesn’t come into play for this subject as much. I still think everyone can benefit from
AI, but this interview just shows some potential concerns. At one point, Kevin explained that the
AI didn’t have motives and it was just saying what would naturally come next in conversation.
“They’re just predicting the next words in a sentence.” This is to some degree refreshing since
the bot doesn’t have feelings for Kevin and doesn’t want to escape from Microsoft. Later in the
interview the host made a claim saying that the bot was a monster like Frankenstein. “I mean, it’s
a Frankenstein monster.” She was clearly trying to blow the whole thing out of proportion by
using a pathos appeal. By making this claim, her goal was to add excitement and exaggeration to
the story. However, Kevin brought things to light saying this wasn’t true and used logos to
explain that the bot doesn’t have a mind of its own. Since this interview has millions of views on
YouTube, it is really influencing a lot of people. This makes me realize that since so many people
watch the news, they can tell us almost anything we want and we’d believe it. However this is
not the case for this particular interview since Kevin came with evidence. He showed us actual
text exchanges with the robot. It’s pretty safe to say that those messages were terrifying. I also
found it frightening how the bot used emojis to show some of its feelings. I’m so curious how it
The article that I researched starts by explaining some of the fictional functions of AI. It
also pairs AI with robotics, saying both of which will continue to transform our future. The
article then goes on to explain some of the many definitions of AI and some of the research done
on it. For example, one definition is “a system’s ability to interpret external data correctly, to
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learn from such data, and to use those learnings to achieve specific goals and tasks through
flexible adaptation.” Then it mentions that AI is starting to enter all spheres of society and has
become very important in the business world. “It will fundamentally transform the business
world and society at large” (Haenlin). With all this innovation, countries like China and the
United States may become very powerful and we may see the world change in balance.
In the beginning of the article the author mentions some fictional uses of AI. Many of
which remind me of how the Jetsons used technology. I think this is done to intrigue the reader
by starting off with something worth reading. Many people enjoy a fantasy and activating their
imagination. Even though the author gives unrealistic examples, I think that AI isn’t really
limited and there can be many uses in the future. The purpose of the article is to inform people
about the future of AI. The audience is anyone who is curious to learn about AI. The author then
goes on to mention some interesting uses of AI that have been introduced in the past few years.
One includes how “Walmart uses facial recognition to understand when a customer is happy,
frustrated, or annoyed” (Haenlin). Some other recent creations include robots riding bikes and
Amazon using delivery robots. These new innovations put everyday people’s jobs at risk. When
the author mentions that the USA and China will take over, I think this could be unrealistic. I
personally believe that eventually many other countries will catch up quickly. This could have
something to do with the author being from the USA and having some bias towards their own
country. I realize that the United States is quite advanced in the field of AI however other
countries are too and they will copy the USA and China and catch up. This could potentially hurt
the author’s ethos appeal since they are favoring their own country. One thing I found interesting
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about this article is how it mentions the Fourth Industrial Revolution. This is referred to as
Comparison/Contrast
The main difference between these two artifacts is artifact one looks at a potential major
negative of AI while artifact two helped me examined a more realistic future of AI. Although I
didn’t completely agree with the second article, it was still quite informative. Since research
about AI just involves a lot of opinions and no one knows for sure where it is exactly going, not
everything is always agreed upon. However, the consensus is that it will continue to explode. It’s
just a matter of whether it will be safe. Another difference between the two artifacts is the way in
which I researched them. The first one was a YouTube video interview with two people while the
second was a written article with one author. While this is obvious, it actually matters because of
the way I obtained the information. In the video, I was able to read facial expressions and have a
better understanding of the speakers tone. While in the article, I was limited to my own
interpretation of it.
Something I found in common with them was several people claiming to be experts in the
field. It just makes me wonder if they really know what they’re talking about, or they just make
claims to get more attention. In the CNN video, the interviewer tries to spin the story in a way
that makes it more interesting. Then, in the written article, the author does the same thing by
throwing out a bizarre opinion about the future of AI as I mentioned previously with the USA
One more thing that I found in common between the two artifacts was that some type of
bias was used in both. For the first artifact, CNN is known for being politically left. For the
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second artifact, the author is from the United States, and she favors her country when giving an
Conclusion
This project allowed me to research two different viewpoints of artificial intelligence and
it helped me explore the two possible futures of it. I enjoyed this project because it allowed me to
develop my own opinions after doing so much research on this topic. I was able to disagree with
some opinions that the author of the second artifact had and that felt like I’ve made a lot of
progress in my research. Not knowing where AI is heading in the future made this project so
interesting. The first artifact allowed me to look at a potential horror of AI, which is it developing
a mind of its own. The fear that AI will eventually take over by itself is what makes all the
research about it so interesting. On the other hand, the more realistic view is that it will continue
to blow up and help with production in many countries. In my opinion, AI will slowly become
more and more dangerous. The way it’s going now, there are no signs of it slowing down and no
regulation to stop it. I’m very curious to see how it actually goes.
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Works Cited
of-business-research/special-issue/10H321F8PFK.
“Journalist Had a Creepy Encounter with New Tech That Left Him Unable to Sleep.” YouTube,