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Các phần thân bài trong essay discussion IELTS nên thể hiện ba điều:
Câu chủ đề (topic sentence) – tóm tắt ý chính của đoạn văn.
Giải thích – giải thích tại sao quan điểm này được ủng hộ.
Đưa ra một ví dụ.
Some people argue that zoos help to preserve wild creatures , while others say that
they are inhumane and should be abolished //. While the development of breeding
programmes contributes to the preservation of endangered species , I believe that
the poor conditions that many animals held in captivity are kept in make the
existence of zoos unacceptable .
On the one hand, there are many projects in existence in zoological parks around the
world where species facing extinction have been successfully bred in captivity and
their numbers increased substantially //. This is important for ensuring the survival of
animals under threat from poaching and the destruction of their natural
environments //. A good example of this is the golden lion tamarin from Brazil which
nearly died out because of logging and mining activities which are destroying its
habitat. Today, a third of wild golden lion tamarins were raised in captivity.
On the other hand, a significant percentage of zoos house their animals in cramped
cages with very little space to move around or behave naturally //. This can lead to
them becoming distressed and depressed as well as suffering physically through
lack of exercise//. A friend of mine recently visited a wildlife park while on holiday
abroad and was very upset to see the lions pacing up and down in a narrow , bare
pen and eagles in enclosures so small that they were unable to fly.
1 câu đưa ra ý kiến và 1 câu nói về hai luận điểm chính trong bài.
From my perspective/ In my opinion, I completely agree/ disagree with this
view for several reasons
Phần 2: Body
Mỗi luận điểm được thể hiện trong một đoạn văn. Một đoạn bao gồm từ 4-5 câu:
Câu 1: Câu chủ đề đưa ra luận điểm chính của đoạn văn
Phần 3: Conclusion
Câu 1-2: Tóm tắt lại các điểm chính của bài
Câu 3: Khẳng định lại quan điểm lần nữa