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Poetry Paraphrasing
Poetry Paraphrasing
Exercise :
Paraphrasing
Anything can distract me from writing poetry: One time I was distracted by a woman's face,
but I was even more distracted by (or I found an even less worthy distraction in) the attempt
to fulfill what I imagined to be the needs of a country governed by idiots. At this point in my
life I find any task easier than the work I'm used to doing.
Paraphrasing
Lines 1 and 2 of the Secret Heart set up tension and create interest in what will follow. The
narrator is going to tell us about the way he remembers his father best—even after many
years have gone by
Lines 3 and 4 of the Secret Heart gives us the setting. It’s late at night. It’s dark and still. A
boy awakens to see a light.
Line 5 of the Secret Heart helps us understand the narrator’s situation. He’s not quite awake.
He’s in a world between dreaming and reality. He’s half in the dream world. It’s easy to see
things in a more symbolic way when one is only half awake. Note how he refers to his father
here as his “sire”. That’s a very grand word.
Lines 7 and 8 of the Secret Heart are basically narration to explain what’s happening. Line 7
carries us nicely to line 8 as it’s not quite a complete thought.