Pre – IE WRITING:

The percentage of men smoking tended to decrease by nearly 300 people between 1960 and
2000.
In 1960, the percentage of men smokers peaked at 600 people, but the percentage of women
smokers reached a low of about 100 people.
From 1960 to 1975, looking at the chart, you can see that the percentage of women smoking
increased by 200 people.
In 1960, the percentage of men who smoked was much higher than that of women. However,
the percentage of men and women who smoked was nearly equal in 2000.
1975 was probably the year the highest number of people consumed tobacco with 500 men
and 300 women out of 1000.

In my opinion, children should follow their parents' advice but not all the time. Parents'
opinions are not always suitable for their kids. They should teach their children how to
acknowledge their own problems and find their way to solve them. Parents also have to
consider their children's opinions and give a reasonable answers in order to help them.
Parents should be reasonable with their ideas, not force their opinions on their children