A DISCUSION ESSSAY

PLAN.

1r paragraph:

In my opinion, I think that buying cheaper clothes is much better than buying others that are
more expensive…

2n paragraph:

Talk about:

More clothes same price…

people only buy for the brand, not for what the shirt looks like…

3r paragraph:

Conclusion…

DRAFT

In my opinion, I consider that it is better to buy cheaper clothes from less known brands, than
to buy in other stores where prices are very high.

the best known brands are the ones with the most expensive prices, but in which the clothes
do not usually last as long, unlike the less expensive ones in which for less money they will
least longer. Due to this reason, for a certain amount of money in a company which has the
lowest prices you can get more clothes.

in conclusion, these arguments show us that just because a brand is well known, it is not
necessary to buy expensive clothes just to be fashionable.
 A DISCUSION ESSSAY
First version

I think that it is better to buy more clothes with cheaper prices than only one expensive.

I prefer to have a lot of dresses in my wardrobe, be more fashion and match them in different
styles and for doing this I need to have a lot of cheaper clothes because if I have only one
expensive, I could not change so often. In addition, the fashion is so unpredictable that it is
different for each six months so if I expend all my money in one dress, after this I could not buy
any more in much time.

In my conclusion, it is not necessary to get overprices clothes to be well dress and cool.

David Feixa

2nd ESO c/d