Cause and effects of the tablets

I would like to start this essay by explaining why some devices are important in our
daily life, most of the time people use their cellphone to communicate with each other,
the students use computers and tablets to study and have classes. In this essay, I want
to explain how technology gives us an important to work or study like tablets also this
has cause and effects by our daily use.

The first sentence is not an effective attention getter.

Thesis statement needs to be rephrased. It’s not clear.

BODY I

One potentially positive effect of tablets in real life, and one that has caused excitement
for some in the sector, is their use in education. In general, more and more educators
are embracing the potential of technology to supplement learning. Some teachers, for
example, have introduced Twitter in the classroom, allowing their students to comment
online in real-time on discussions in class rather than having to speak up. Such use of
social media, proponents hope, may encourage more collaborative learning, where
students learn how to work together. Whereas the effects of these is that addiction to
social media like Twitter, Facebook, Instagram, etc. Can be used for entertainment and
academic ways and nowadays population use more social media are adolescents and
teenagers.

You have described the effects of using social media, not the use of tablets.

BODY II

The dependency on tablets allows people to stay connected with others, when you are
connected with the people, the business opportunities are more and with the device,
the opportunities are not missed. There are some companies that require you to know
how to use a tablet or some technological device. For example, if you don´t know how
to use a technological device is basically impossible to work in an office because most
of the time the work in an office is that you need to read or write some documents on
word and excel. Since you become an introverted person is common that you get used
to follow your new routine, when you are comfortable with that, you don’t want to go
back anymore because you start to love what you are doing now, and the influx of your
routine are making positive changes on your life. On the other hand, there are a lot of
people who turned in their routine, for that reason a lot of people back off their social
life and since you started to turn tail from people, you may feel lonely.

The dependency on tablets allows people to stay connected with others, when you are
connected with the people, the business opportunities are more and with the device,
the opportunities are not missed. There are some companies that require you to know
how to use a tablet or some technological device. For example, if you don´t know how
to use a technological device is basically impossible to work in an office because most
of the time the work in an office is that you need to read or write some documents on
word and excel. There are some people to get into a class to learn more about this
technology because they are conscious that they are not dependable of tablets. But on
the other hand, you could develop compulsive checking behavior, if you pay more
attention to your device, it´s possible that you are not attentive to your environment of
friends, you can be introverted.

Since you become an introverted person is common that you get used to follow your
new routine, when you are comfortable with that, you don’t want to go back anymore
because you start to love what you are doing now, and the influx of your routine are
making positive changes on your life. On the other hand, there are a lot of people who
turned in their routine, for that reason a lot of people back off their social life and since
you started to turn tail from people, you may feel lonely. Furthermore, by that affects
you can trigger more psychological problems as anxiety, depress, etc. Those can affect
your mental health.

Again, most of the information does not explain “effects”

Conclusion:

To summarize this essay, I would like to say that the use of devices it´s important for
the job and study but always remembers that the excessive use of a tablet can cause
damage to your eyes, you can develop anxiety and stress. The use of devices is
important but moderately and appropriately for our health.

Focus on the topic: tablets!

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