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Essay Rough Draft
The swimming community where I grew up in Oakland, California, was quite modest. I spent my
childhood swimming with the Oakland Undercurrents, and I will always be grateful to them for
everything they have done for my neighborhood and for trying to bring swimming back to
Oakland. As time went on, I was forced to make difficult choices between swimming in Oakland
or swimming in Walnut Creek, where I would have access to more resources. I would end up
choosing to swim in Walnut Creek because it was best for me. Although creating a community
from scratch as a young child is nearly impossible and would be a challenging task, I always felt
that one day, whether as a coach or swimmer, I would return. Various athletes have sparked my
interest in doing this, one that has inspired me recently is Marcus Rashford, an athlete who has
used his platform to promote social justice. He has been a vocal advocate for Black Lives Matter
and has used his position as a professional athlete to raise awareness about issues of police
brutality and racial inequality. He has also been involved in community-based initiatives aimed
at promoting education and social justice. For his actions Marcus was awarded the Mbe, the
prestigious award is for his ongoing charity work and well-publicized campaign against child
poverty off the field. This inspired millions of young athletes including myself, pushing us to be
bigger than just an athlete. I've learned from swimming in Walnut Creek how much better the
resources are than in Oakland, which explains why they have a larger swimming community and
generate so many more swimmers. These resources include the availability of swimming pools;
in contrast to the several pools offered in Walnut Creek, only Oakland High and Temescal are
constantly open to the public for swimming. Recreational swimming is what really draws
championship meet for fun, but it was quite depressing to do so; the meet lacked spirit, and the
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fact that less than four teams and less than 100 swimmers competed at the meet's pinnacle broke
my heart. However, recreational swimming in Walnut Creek was a complete 180; the County
recreational swimming championship meet was one of the most well-attended meets I have been
to. The swimmers, parents, and coaches were all very involved.The pool was packed to the
fullest with people spilling out, this is something I hope to see happen to Oakland rec swimming
in my lifetime and I hope I have a hand in this change. Because of this, I will be answering the
question: Should athletes be morally obligated to use their platform for good, responsibly?
The role of athletes in advocating for social issues has been a topic of much discussion
and debate in recent years. Some argue that athletes have a moral obligation to use their platform
to speak out against injustice and promote positive change in society, while others believe that
athletes should stay out of politics and focus solely on their sport. In this essay, we will explore
the question of whether athletes should be morally obligated to use their platform for good,
drawing on quotes from two different sources on this topic.One argument for athletes using their
platform to advocate for social issues comes from an article in Silver Chips Online titled
"Athletes Should Continue to Advocate for Social Issues in America." The author argues that
athletes have a unique opportunity to influence public opinion and effect change because of their
high profile and visibility. They can use their fame to draw attention to important issues and
inspire others to take action. The article cites several examples of athletes who have used their
platform to promote social justice causes, including LeBron James, Colin Kaepernick, and
Megan Rapinoe. The author writes, "Athletes have a powerful voice that can help create change
in society...They have the ability to reach millions of people across the world and inspire them to
be better." This statement highlights the potential impact that athletes can have when they use
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their platform for good. By speaking out against injustice and promoting positive change,
athletes can raise awareness and encourage others to get involved in important social issues.
Another example of an athlete using their platform for good comes from an interview
with Manchester United footballer Marcus Rashford in The Wall Street Journal. Rashford has
been a vocal advocate for child hunger in the UK and has used his platform to lobby the
government to provide free school meals to children from low-income families. In the interview,
Rashford talks about the responsibility he feels to use his platform to make a difference in the
world: "I know that a lot of people follow me and look up to me. I feel like it’s my responsibility
to use my platform to try to help those people and to try to make the world a better place. If I
didn’t do that, I’d feel like I was letting them down." This quote highlights the sense of
responsibility that some athletes feel to use their platform for good. Rashford recognizes that he
has a large following and a significant amount of influence, and he believes that he has a duty to
use that influence to make a positive impact on society. This sentiment is echoed by many other
athletes who have spoken out on social issues, suggesting that there is a growing sense among
athletes that they have a responsibility to use their platform for good. However, not everyone
agrees that athletes should be morally obligated to use their platform to advocate for social
issues. Some argue that athletes should stay out of politics and focus solely on their sport, as
their primary responsibility is to entertain and perform for their fans. This argument was made by
Fox News commentator Laura Ingraham in 2018, when she told LeBron James to "shut up and
dribble" after he criticized President Trump. Ingraham's comments sparked widespread criticism
and debate about the role of athletes in politics. The argument against athletes using their
platform for social issues is based on the idea that athletes should not be involved in politics or
social issues because they lack expertise in these areas. Some critics argue that athletes should
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focus on their sport and leave politics to the politicians. They believe that athletes have a duty to
their fans to entertain and perform, and that anything outside of that is a distraction from their
primary responsibility.
LeBron James uses his platform for good in various ways, The article "How Lebron
James Uses His Influence to Improve Community Development" by Keith Schneider provides an
example of an athlete who has used his platform for good. The article highlights James' efforts to
improve his hometown of Akron, Ohio through various initiatives, including the LeBron James
Family Foundation and the I Promise School. As Schneider writes, "James has leveraged his
athletic excellence and global renown to create an educational pipeline and a business incubator
in the neighborhood where he grew up." James' work has not only provided tangible benefits to
the community, but also inspired others to take action. The article suggests that James' influence
extends far beyond the basketball court, and demonstrates how athletes can use their platform to
effect real change in society. This example supports the argument that athletes have a moral
responsibility to use their platform for good and make a positive impact on the world. More on
Lebron James using his platform In recent years, there has been a growing debate over whether
athletes have a moral obligation to use their platform for good. While some argue that athletes
should remain neutral and focus solely on their sport, others believe that they have a
responsibility to use their influence to promote social justice and advocate for important issues.
LeBron James, a prominent athlete and advocate for social justice, believes that athletes have a
responsibility to speak out on important issues. He argues that athletes have the power to inspire
change and serve as role models for young people. "We're leaders, and we can give the youth and
everyone in the community something to look up to," he states. This highlights the potential for
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athletes to effect positive change and promote important issues such as racial equality and social
justice.
Some people argue that athletes should not be morally obligated to use their platform for
good, as they believe that athletes should stay out of politics and focus solely on their sport. They
believe that an athlete's primary responsibility is to entertain and perform for their fans, and that
using their platform for social issues is a distraction from their main purpose. This view is
expressed in an article from The Wall Street Journal, which states that "athletes are entertainers,
not public intellectuals or policymakers. Their role in society is to perform their craft and
entertain the masses, not to enlighten or indoctrinate them." One of the main arguments against
athletes using their platform for social issues is based on the idea that athletes lack expertise in
these areas. While athletes may be experts in their respective sports, they may not necessarily
have the knowledge or expertise needed to fully understand complex social and political issues.
This point is echoed in the Silver Chips Online article, which states that "just because someone is
good at throwing a ball, it doesn't mean they have the expertise to lead a social justice
movement." In fact, some argue that athletes who speak out on social issues may do more harm
than good, as they may not have a complete understanding of the issues they are speaking about
and could potentially misinform their followers. Furthermore, when athletes do speak out on
social issues, they may face criticism and backlash from those who disagree with their views.
This can create controversy and distract from the athlete's primary responsibility of entertaining
and performing for their fans. As The Wall Street Journal article notes, "sports fans want to
watch games, not be lectured on social justice by athletes who may lack a complete
understanding of the issues." In my interview with former olympic swimmer and current coach
of the Oakland Undercurrents, Rolandas Gimbutis he states “Not all athletes have the same
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boundaries in terms of what they can and cannot say”..In some cases, athletes may even lose fans
or face backlash from sponsors, which could have negative financial consequences for the
athlete. Ultimately, the decision of whether or not to use their platform for good should be left up
to individual athletes and their personal beliefs and values. In my interview with Pianki Gibson
he states “We are allowed to not push our views on other people even if they are right and think
they're right, our definition of good differs from what another group of people sees as good”.
This is very true especially in China, athletes in China do not have the verbal freedom athletes in
America do, this is shown in an article called China warns foreign Olympic athletes against
speaking out on politics at Winter Games by Eva Dou “In China, critics of the government have
routinely been sentenced to prison for staging political protests, or for comments they made on
social media. While it's unlikely Beijing would risk international ire to severely punish an athlete
at the Olympics for speech, Yang declined to answer on Tuesday what the maximum punishment
could be for political demonstration at the Games”. As the Silver Chips Online article notes,
"Athletes have a right to voice their opinions, and they should continue to do so. By using their
platforms to their advantage, they spread awareness on social issues and speak up for others who
do not have a voice. More people feel empowered to make a change, and that has happened
many times in the past and will continue to happen in the future as long as athletes use their
power in a positive way." Some athletes may feel compelled to use their platform for good, while
others may choose to stay out of politics and focus solely on their sport. It is important to
recognize that athletes are individuals with their own unique perspectives and beliefs, and should
not be forced to use their platform for any specific cause or issue. In recent years, athletes have
increasingly used their platform to advocate for important issues and effect change. Naomi
Osaka's withdrawal from the French Open to prioritize her mental health is a prime example of
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this. As a result, there has been a growing debate over whether athletes should be morally
obligated to use their platform for good. In an opinion piece for the Boston Globe, Renee
Graham argues that athletes have a responsibility to advocate for the marginalized and voiceless.
She writes, "Osaka understands that being a public figure means being a potential agent of
change. It’s a role that comes with moral obligations to stand up and speak out on behalf of the
marginalized and the voiceless." This highlights the idea that athletes hold a unique position of
influence and should use this power to promote social justice and advocate for those who may
The two biggest Athletes regarding this subject is Muhammad Ali and Colin Kaepernick
who have become symbols of social activism and have inspired others to use their platform to
effect change. Both Ali and Kaepernick have used their platform to bring attention to social
injustices and advocate for important issues, despite facing backlash and criticism for doing so.
Their actions have demonstrated that athletes have a unique platform and ability to effect change
in ways that others may not. Their willingness to take a stand and speak out has inspired other
athletes to do the same and has raised public awareness of important social justice issues. As
shown in this article by TIME, the power of athletes to effect change and promote social justice
is explored. The article highlights the impact of athletes such as Muhammad Ali and Colin
Kaepernick, who have used their platform to advocate for important issues and bring attention to
social injustices. The article also discusses the potential risks that come with speaking out, such
as backlash and criticism from fans and sponsors. The article argues that athletes have a unique
platform and ability to effect change in ways that others may not. They have the power to
influence public opinion and bring attention to issues that may not receive as much coverage in
traditional media outlets. In addition, athletes often come from marginalized communities and
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have experienced firsthand the social injustices that they seek to address. The article also
discusses the importance of athletes using their platform in a way that is authentic and aligned
with their values. It is important for athletes to speak out on issues that they are passionate about
and that align with their personal beliefs, rather than feeling pressured to speak out on every
Athletes occupy a unique position of influence and cultural significance in society, and as
such, they have a moral responsibility to use their platform for good. They have the power to
effect real change in society by raising awareness about important issues and inspiring others to
take action. However, while athletes should be encouraged to use their platform for good, they
should not be shamed or ridiculed if they choose not to do so. Everyone has the right to decide
how they use their platform, and it is important to respect an individual's right to make their own
decisions. I think its very important to give athletes time before they speak out, some of these
athletes are still young kids, in Greenes article More Athletes Are Speaking Out On Social Issues
Than Ever Before he explains this logic very well “People sometimes forget how immature
outside the sideline stripes so many of our young physical heroes are. And then when they do
speak up about anything, there is invariably a large element of fandom that calls out for them to
just take the big money and play ball and shut up”. While there may be a moral obligation to use
their platform for good, ultimately it is up to the athlete to decide how they want to use their
influence. People should care if athletes are morally obligated to use their platform for good
because athletes have a significant impact on society and culture. In the book Having Their Say
by Kristie Bunton she states “As I approached anew the topic of speaking out, I collected more
examples than I possibly could analyze, perhaps because mainstream news coverage so often
amplified the voices of celebrities who spoke out through social media platforms, After all, when
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professional basketball star Lebron James tweets that U.S President Donald Trump is a
“bum”Athletes are influential figures who can bring attention to important issues, inspire others
to take action, and effect real change in society. If athletes do not use their platform for good,
then important issues may not receive the attention they deserve and important changes may not
be made. Additionally, athletes who choose not to use their platform for good may miss an
opportunity to use their influence for positive change, which could be seen as a wasted
opportunity to do good. Therefore, it is important to encourage athletes to use their platform for
good and to raise awareness about the impact they can have on society, but once again they
should never be ridiculed or looked at differently if they do not want to because ultimately it is
their choice.
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pics-politics-speech/.
Bunton, Kristie. “Having Their Say: Athletes and Entertainers and the Ethics of
Speaking out: Paperback.” Barnes & Noble, McFarland & Company, Incorporated
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